Trashy the Trashman
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Pre-read:
a pinkie ship I gotta read this.
Looks like its going to be good
Post read: looks like I was right It was nice and I liked it . It was well written and I personally think you should write more .
Well that's my two cents in this. I hope you continue writing
good read. ur pretty good for a first timer yourself. haha. my first clop was a failure, glad to see urs didnt turn out like that, again, great job.
Wonderful work, I hope that you keep writing more stories, clop or not. I look forward to it
Awesome story,
Keep writing!! :D this was really freaking good. (;
Thanks for all the feedback, everybody! I really appreciate it. I might start something new in the next couple days, depending on how busy I am.
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Gah, I knew I missed something. Thanks for catching that!
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Really? Thank you! I was sorta worried it wouldn't be well-received. I'm just glad people like it, to be honest!
This felt like a love making story...and I loved every word of it!
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Thank you! This was my first time writing anything like this, so I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!
Yes
So.....Pinkie's a doormat and Twilight's a creep.
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Aww. I'll admit that this certainly wasn't my strongest bit of writing due to a number of factors, but I didn't think that the characters came across as blatantly OOC, either. Do you have any specific criticisms you could draw my attention to? I'd certainly like to improve.
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Not really. My comment was actually meant to be positive.
Although in hindsight I probably should have used the words "Closet pervert" and "Possible BDSM Subbie" Instead of "Creep" and "doormat'.
Well, ok..it did kind of come off as if Pinkie wasn't really interested in the sex so much as doing whatever she's told to make her friend happy. But it's something she could be accused of, and it not necessarily be true, rather than something blatantly definitely true.
Twilight clopping right next to her friend is a slight bit disrespectful....but she realized that else she wouldn't freak out. So there's no problem there at all. And one can't say it's out of character, because the characters' sexual natures will never be explored in the show....and the show constantly pegs them as tragically socially ignorant (especially Twilight) despite their being adults, so of course their sexual natures would be new to even themselves. So, yeah...no possible way to get out of character with their sexualities. Well. Unless you write Cupcakes lol.
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Oh, okay, I see what you're saying! Sorry for being confused earlier, and thanks for the clarification!
This was an excellent read. You set the tone very well once the erotic stuff starts. This is actually some of the best clop I've read in terms of setting the tone and such. Really good job here - I hope you write more clop in the future.
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Really?! Thank you so much! I'm working on a few others stories now but I'm kinda busy so they might not be here for a while. Thanks again, though!
Looks good! Update please?
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Uh, "update"? As in "adding more to this particular fic"? If so, it was actually just a one-shot. Sorry about that.
2336415 Oh... really? well, now I feel stupid
Ofh well, great fic then!
Oh, it even says complete. Derp
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No worries! Glad you enjoyed the story!
This is a great story, and honestly, it out shines a lot of the other one-shots i've read. I love the style and i could hardly tell that this was your first clop piece.
Considering that this is Equestria, wouldn't that be 'princess-rescues-hero'?
I usually have a hard time with Pinkie ships but this worked really nicely, and very sweetly.
Never before reading this did I understand the extent that I adore flirtatious Pinkie. I knew I enjoyed it, but never did I know how much I love it.
Flirty Pinkie is best Pinkie.