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Cheerilee was thrilled when she became an alicorn and the Princess of Dawn and Dusk. Her newfound magical prowess has revolutionized her classes, and her students have never been happier. When she decides to help Apple Bloom through a difficult problem, though, she is challenged to the limits of her powers. Fortunately, she has friends who can remind her that, even when spells and strength fail, the magic of friendship can overcome all difficulties.

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Why couldn't my teachers let me see actual pirates? :-)

Really, that's the cover-pic you went with? There's like over 30 pics of her with horn+wings over on derpibooru. Oh, well...

Anyway, congrats on being the first to get their fic up today.

I really enjoyed this story, although I have to agree that better cover art could be found.

2264809: I didn't like any of those pics, though. :-)

2264595 If you'd stated outright that this was Lunaverse, I'd have downvoted it and moved on, so, points for false advertising I guess?

2265590 Didn't he already do that?

Wonderful story. Excellent use of the teach a man to fish adage.

Poor Twilight. Her position stolen by a showmare, and her alicorn status stolen by a school teacher. XD

That's an educational experience I can get my hooves behind.

Very cute, loved the combination of Apple Blooms mechanical skills and her love of the apple farm.

2266103 Showmare? You mean the Personal Student of Her Royal Highness of Equestria the Empress Luna right?:trixieshiftright:

2265793: Actually, that looks awesome. Thanks!

2266984
Happy to have hellped.

Plus now I can say I contributed to the Lunverse Alicorn Event even though I didn't write anything. :twilightsheepish:

A fun and well characterised story. How would a teacher use near infinite power? It make the best school trips ever!

The only thing that strikes me as feeling a bit off is that it doesn't feel very Lunavese, it could easily just be put in the normal continuity without more than a few words changed.

Alicorn Cheerilee is Miss Frizzle :rainbowlaugh: but she'S also the Magic School Bus herself :derpytongue2:

2268197: Perfect metaphor. :-) I wonder if there's an Arnold...
Nah. Cheerilee's so awesome that everyone likes her field trips!

Okay, that's pretty damned cute. Go, Cheerilee!

I wish I had teachers that gave half the bothers Cheerilee does. :fluttershyouch:

Nice story, I liked the way she let Apple Bloom think her way through.
:yay:

Any chance someone got a pic of the bigger than Derpy muffin?
:rainbowlaugh:

Aww, that's adorable. I really like the way Cheerilee uses her new magic to teach her class, it's very Miss Frizzle, or Susan Sto Helit. And then she loses the thread a bit when she tries to help Apple Bloom, but Ditzy helps her find her way again. Lovely!

Good fun easy read, thanks.

So... Ms. Frizzle + Cheerilee = Alicorn Cheerilee?

This wwas pretty cool, I quite like Applebloom's invention, very nice, now if only all teachers caredas much as Cherilee I might not have to drag my feet to school.

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