• Member Since 22nd Dec, 2011
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Gabriel LaVedier


Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.

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Comments ( 181 )

The premise alone made me crack up. Bra-vo, sir.

Well. This is going to be interesting o3o

HAHAHA!!!! How did neither of them recognize the other?! They have a history, after all! :derpytongue2:

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I think this is set in an alternate reality, since everyone is playing different roles.

2297234 True, though Fluttershy as a porn star kinda makes sense to me...:trollestia: I bet Rarity would be jealous!

Alright, the title alone got me.

I'm still willing to keep going.

More please....MOAR!!!!

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Sir, coming from a man of your stature that is a compliment one of my humble status never envisioned! You do me great honor.

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Wait until I polish the next chapter. You'll see.

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In due time. I have laptop wifi access once a week. It's when I edit and upload stories.

I was willing to give this half a chance. Then I saw both Iron Will AND Saphirre Shores in the tag.
There will be SO MUCH ENTHUSIASTIC SHOUTING.
ALL OF MY YES.
I warn you, if this is super serious clop, I'm still going to laugh my arse off all the way through, most likely.

I quit after Fluttershy was introduced, I want to hurt you damn it. But artistic license and all, have at it.

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She was right in the tags. And it says alternate universe. But I hope you eventually read it. It's fun.

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Yeah but I thought she was going to do something funny like be the director, and sapphire shores was going to be 'star'.

RAAAAAAAAAAAH SHOUTING!!! I DON'T ENJOY THE LANGUAGE THOSE STALLION DOUCHEBAGS ARE USING!
The part in Sapphire Shores office made me lol alot, she was just ogling him like the whole time.
This Fluttershy, I like this Fluttershy. This Iron Will, I like this Iron Will. MOAAAAAAR!

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The notion of Fluttershy being a porn star isn't too dissimilar from the episode "Green isn't your Color." In that episode, Fluttershy was made the center of attention as a famous model. In this story, she's the center of attention as a famous porn star. Both are revered for their beautiful bodies and have many photos taken of them while they work.
:yay:

Typical quality writing I expect from you and the scenario is hilarious.

Congratulations on making the feature box! :pinkiehappy:

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes

I heard about this, and I will read it!:twilightsmile:

I... I think this fluttershy broke my brain.
I'm just going to keep reading though, no reason, what are you talking about.

This is rather odd.....

Imma follow this with a uprating for something new! ish....

Either way!

I will follow this to hell and back and then to hell again.
God! How did you manage to make this so cute, sweet and adorable?!

new perspective.

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BronyStories believed in me. It is my duty to justify his faith in me. So I poured every drop of my muse into this and I will continue to deliver as he expects.

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Then I did my job in writing them. I went to a uni with frat douches. Thankfully I stayed in a dorm with engineers and undecideds.

I hope it continues to amuse you.

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If I have seen further (and been featured) it is because I have stood on the shoulders of giants. This has been a whirlwind of a day.


Funny
Hot XXX #wow#whoa
10/10

would put cockrade in pony vagoo

Call me fucked up, I want moar :pinkiecrazy:

A little formatting could help.

Is it bad that I've clopped to the original picture of this story's cover art before?

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It means you know and will enjoy what is to come. I like an informed consumer.

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The strange thing is it was never meant to be a meta-commentary. If anything it was about porn consumers in general. Perhaps subconsciously I intended it as commentary. It really does seem to blast the proscenium arch to bits, does it not?

The Stallion believes in you thanks to this awesome story of yours.

So I haven't read this story, but I had to post this. That cover art almost killed me, it's fucking hilarious. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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Highly agreed one of the reasons I clicked this fic is due to the amusing possibilities of this pic

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I agree.

I think if there were spaces in between each paragraph, it would really help the readability of the story.

They didn't fuck! FUCK

2300405 how much cool shit did the engineers do?

LOLZ IV SEEN THE ACTUL WHOLE PICTURE :rainbow laugh: its actually weird :rainbowderp:

Considering that this story is obviously going to have a lot of attention and interest (I myself am very interested), I ask only this: Please make more, there are not that many fics of Iron Will that are this good.

First Iron Will fic I've read and it's gonna be clop:pinkiecrazy:

I like your characterization of I.W. and Fluttershy is in great character (all things considered), so I will be looking out for more to come

Iron Will's cock blocking tips.

IF SOMEPONY TRIES TO BLOCK, SHOW THEM THAT YOU ROCK! :pinkiecrazy:

Funny story by the way. :rainbowlaugh:

I smell potential.:pinkiecrazy:

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I would do it if there was a button for that. My other formatting tweaks don't come through automatically.

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Not much. They were undergrads and our dorm rules were strict. But they had the best electronics, and I had some great conversations about cool robotics.

Great beginning! I look forward to more!:heart:

came for the pic.
stayed for the rest

This is certainly one of the odder pony pornos I've read although not quite as odd as Applesauce and Fluttershutter but still interesting enough for me to stick around and read more. :pinkiehappy:

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