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Gabriel LaVedier
Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.
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If this story has a "Heavy Orgasm," then you should probably tag it as a Team Fortress 2 crossover.
Seriously though, the story looks awesome! It's on my "to read" list.
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Hehe, many thanks for the laugh and the vote of encouragement. Hope you like it!
Da hell is a heavy orgasm?
Her ground. He ground.
whinnyed. whinnied.
enjoy himself buried. enjoy being buried. Flows better.
fresh?” She. fresh?” she.
Interesting.
You know, I rarely want to correct clop, but do you have a gdocs version? You have some comma abuse and a few missing suppositions I could fix if you want:) ...or was it prepositions? Either way it could benefit from some tweaks...
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An interesting offer. I look on clop as "pure" and existing for itself since it is not really for mass posing and consumption on other sites. It allows for freedom. But having it look nice is good.
Some help might not go amiss but I have never used GDocs because, well, it never works on my computer and I use only a phone most of the time. The best I can suggest is to send corrections via PMs. I've done any number of collaborations that way.
And thank you, so very much, for taking an interest in this. As it is the only female D-Dog clop I know any attention is good.
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Heavy Orgasm- Both especiallythick and copious. It's a modest example but present.
2930050 Oh.......
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...sexy
Interspecies twice, eh? :V
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Does this offend you? It was never my intention. But female Diamond Dogs need pony love too. And if no one else will produce it, I will.
I am all about interspecies love. My current active stories include: two Changeling/pony relationships ("He never had" and "The Fulcrum), pony/buffalo ("The Chase"), various, including those above plus griffin/zebra ("New Pony Tales") and even animal interspecies with the pets ("The Accident"). Plus I still need to show the comedic insanity of Prince Blueblood trying to plan the most perfect wedding there ever was (pony/donkey) and I've got ideas for slice of life snugglies with Gilda and Trixie.
Harmony and togetherness: I Haz It.
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I hope it was the good kind of interesting.
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Yeah.
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No, I'm just poking fun. :P I actually won't read this story because it sounds like everything I do not ever want to experience.
[spoilers]Actually, now that I think of it, yes, I hate interspecies stuff. :V[/spoilers]
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But variety is the spice of life. Are you also against shipping with, say, Gilda or Zecora? Bit of a Socratic question because I really want to know. I understand the fetish parts might keep you away but it's just two folks of different species. In love.
2938016 To be honest, I loved the happy marriage part. There are too many stories about rape or pre-marital bed fun and not enough married couples enjoying some baby making.
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Zecora is close enough to pony for it not to matter and I just sort of don't like Gilda anyway so I don't care about her. :B
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Don't get me wrong, I do unmarried stuff too. But most of them are engaged or at least in some kind of love.
And I love post-babymaking as well. I've got a thing for pregnancy.
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Close enough? You mean the zebra is 'passing'? I'm only kind of joking. I think it could have been phrased a bit more diplomatically. Hmm. I guess donkeys 'pass' too.
While I'll never understand the fantastic-racist position I will respect it and understand that is the reason you never comment on my stories. I'm too liberal and my stories too broad-minded and inter-species.
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Seconded! More married (heterosexual) couples!
I like how you make it seem she is his slave at first. The room and the lack of dialogue until "after" helps with this. I wouldn't have faved if you hadn't have had the reveal though.
I could use a second chapter to this just to see what you come up with for the children to look like. More sex between their parents optional.
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No, donkeys can get right out. :V
And I never comment on your stories because I don't think I've read any of them. That's going to change though.
alsoyouhavetoomanygoddamnstories
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The misdirected presumption was half the fun of writing and some of the fun in reading. I sometimes like to deal in subversions of negative expectations. Things look bad for a short or long while before the reveal shows that not only are things fine butthey are actually wonderful. For story-sized misdirection like this I like to include clues. Note that she is never simperingly submissive, that she is the one who moves from act to act, that she is notably stronger than him and that during the mating they were both very into it.
I don't know if you think it counts but in my story "Pony PSAs and Ad Spots" under the chapter "Afterschool Special: Call of the No-Cutie" the main character is a Diamond Dog/Pony hybrid. Your idea about continuing isn't all that bad though. Something to consider for later.
Oh, and I hope you aren't implying any homophobia with your call for more hetero clop. I've run the full gamaut in my stories and I don't discriminate.
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Huzzah!
And more or less all of them are in the same world. A bit like a novel except this is showing aspects of the world sometimes at the same time. A bit like the lorebuilding asides in LotR or other classical epics.
Happy marriage is a fetish? Wut..
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That was what I was saying.
It was more of a "it makes sense in retrospect" sort of thing for what I noticed.
Might take a look at that at some point.
Depends on how you define "homophobia" actually.
I have my tastes, both moral and aesthetic. I prefer to encourage the better things rather than try to tear down what I see as being worse. In other words, "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.". I also go story by story, rather than author by author. In other words, "Don't throw the baby out with the bathwater.".
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It almost seems like it. There aren't many stories like that and it almost seems to be treated like a dirty thing (you find it is more common to see adulterous Mr/Mrs Cake or Shining/Cadance than happily married stories with them.)
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My clop is all straight except for one M/M story in "Clop, Clop." And there is a lot of F/F content in "Kinky Sex Disasters" but I don't consider that clop because it's mostly comedy. The most explicit bit is the last chapter.
Now I have a lot of positive depictions of homosexual relationships in my stories but I doubt you would be opposed to that.
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"Kinky Sex Disasters" is many stories for these purposes.
And I have been known to read stories that turned out to have positive background depictions of M/M and F/F, even if it was shown in the description. On the flip side I'm VERY selective about what I fav and/or comment on... only have two stories faved I think.
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Ahh. I see. Well, I hope you give my stuff a read.
you really like putting diamonds dogs in your stories don't you
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Well, yes. Who else will? It's very rare. I suspect that Diamond Dog tags is one of the least used.
3014272 why do you like the diamond dogs so much
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I like dogs in general, and I like underappreciated characters. Plus I really love interspecies with notable differences.
I was right this was sexy
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Thank you very much for saying so!
3036263 Unique execution too
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Because it's stallion on Dog? Or because they're married?
3036331 More because a royal crystal unicorn gets lathered up goes off to have sex with his pregnant diamond dog wife.
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Ah, so the whole thing.
Thank you. I try to create unique bits of happiness.
3040394 You never fail to impress
Ha! I remember a thread where we discussed something like this, I think. I'm glad to finally have read this, and enjoyed it. I've always been fond of interspecies, or unexpected couplings. Spicy fun in a happy, commited couple is almost always a good thing, as well. I also saw you mention some interesting pairings in these comments, so I will have to go through your stories again it seems. I can never remember what I have, or have not, read.
A bit surprised she could get pregnant with such a different creature, but- it was sweet even so. Hope to see more experiments and ideas explored!
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Yes, that thread and the lack of a reaction to it drove me to write this. I'm glad you liked how it turned out.
Please do read all those interspecies stories and tell me what you think.
As to the hybridizing, the story "So you want to hybridize?" shows that Equestrians can have a princess cast a spell to allow it's and in my blog post on Diamond Dogs I note that Crystal Empire citizens can be hybridized with the power of the Crystal Heart. Given that Pure retained his earldom Smoked became a citizen of the Empire and the were made compatible by Cadance using the Crystal Heart.
A happily married, modestly kinky Diamond Dog/Crystal Pony couple? Very well-written and enjoyable to read about? I am totes amazed! Thanks for the very fun read, and I'm curious - do you have a few more oneshots of this odd couple?
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I mention them in a supplemental information blog but I have nothing with them. Yet. I'm considering writing a small colelction of mushy Diamond Dog/Pony romance stories, with this couple being one of the ones to be showcased.
over all good but the wording was like well a buzz kill not much passion their till the end like a 1600 erotic novel lame sex wording but epic love and well last complaint is the ass thing wired but that is my oppion
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Punctuation, please. If you are going to complain to a writer about quality issues please structure your ideas in a form that is easy to read.
Also, you may be confusing "passion" and "cheap vulgarity." I could drop every Urban Dictionary word into the story but it would only make the story trashy, not passionate. I use terms that are appropriate and precise and show both action and effect. Emotional response was at a minimum because I needed a reveal at the end. If you want more open emotion, read "Bejeweled Love." That one is Spike and a Female Diamond Dog, and no "ass thing" as you put it. (Proper term: Analingus, slang term: Rimming.)
3360431 dude I am not confusing the passion read a dragon's journey it is in my fav block. that is true passion of mixed spices
Very rarely do I read smut that makes me go Dawwwww and for that I thank you.
That last line absolutely made this story for me.
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I laughed at my own joke which is a bit rare. It's a silly, if epected, thing but it says a lot about their relationship.