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Gabriel LaVedier
Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.
Gabriel LaVedier
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A surprisingly sweet take on Stockholm Syndrome.
I approve! This is Plague Pone approved!
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It is a rather odd mix of that and satiated egoism. Suri wanted to be better than Rarity and here a whole society thinks she's better than her rival.
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High praise indeed. Thank you so very much.
Heh. Very nice. I think one thing that might make the sweetness of it even more clear, was if in the middle, somewhere between lusting after Rover and making her move - nice touch that; not a hint of coercion in the sexuality - would be if Rover offered her shamefacedly the opportunity to leave, and she demanded to stay, on her own terms (thus shifting it firmly into this is her chosen path,)
Still, it's funny and sexy all at once; not a bad send off, you know? I'm not sure it needs to be changed, as a result.
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Thank you for the kind words and for noticing that Suri is the one taking charge of her sexuality. It's the little things that really make a story pop.
You're right about the addition that could be made, but I wanted to present this story as it was, to show it in all its original, slightly restricted, glory.
7288993 Makes sense! And yeah, I think that agency on her part is what makes it delicious rather than tragic. Rover's an interesting fellow in his own right; this literally isn't the first time his ambition for his pack has gotten him in over his head. Suri grabs him- just like she does her situation- by the balls, rather than his ears. Not having Equestria to save or the jealousy of dragons to deal with, it's probably for the best this way around.
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Suri finds a kind of... odd peace here. It's what she wanted in a different form. Recognition, praise, glory and exclusive status. And she also beat Rarity without having to fight her, she was just more agreeable and available. And she found love with someone who appreciates her talents.