• Member Since 22nd Dec, 2011
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Gabriel LaVedier


Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.

Comments ( 78 )

This sounds awesome! I can't wait to read it!

Also, here's a link to the blog promoting your Mane-iac story.

Will you take requests here too? If so, Breezy that got stuck in Equestria x Hydra, because when it comes to true love, size doesn't matter. :heart:

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I saw, and thank you! I hope it is to your liking. I also think my message to you didn't go through, about golems, automata and being Jewish (at one time.)

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Hehe. These requests are enough. Besides, I'm spectacularly bad at macro/micro. :unsuresweetie:

Excellent! Exactly what I wanted out of this pairing. And so sweet. Great details, amusing dialog, and I loved the confetti. :pinkiehappy:

I'll read the first story at some point and I'm sure I'll love the others to come. :trollestia:

Aww, I wanted to request something...

4105166 Little Strongheart? Oh, I most certainly will. Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

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I didn't get that message. :fluttershysad:

I'll look over the Blueblood story you sent me in the coming days and offer my feedback.

how about A teenage draganess and a zebra satallion

I can't believe you made a sex scene with a golem so warm, fuzzy, and most of all lovingly sexy.

Alliteration is awesome. "Puppy passage" lol. Bronystories definately had a part in this.

So... does this mean I'm making love to a tight gal, before she climaxes, I should quickly switch out with a coal dildo and we'll be rich from the resulting diamond ribbed dildo? Ooo... I wonder if there's a way to make them denticulated...

But yeah, it's a sweet, heartwarming story ^_^

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I AM warm and fuzzy personified, like H. P. Lovecraft is Providence. I had to be sweet and touching. Outcast meets construct, it was natural.

Also, "puppy passage" was a line he gave me a while back for another thig but I used it on my own.

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Essentially, I love automata of all sorts, but I have a special affinity for golems, and so I wanted to make this very good to reflect that.

Awww such a cute story from such unlikely sources!

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I've slipped comfortably into my role as "that guy that makes cute stuff." I've stopped feeling like I'm not as big and important as the guys that do unpleasant stories. And with such comfort I can be free with any inspiration.

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What were you considering? I mightfile it away.

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That sounds nice. Legal teen of course. I've considered such a thing before so I should give the notion some thought.

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I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried about how I portrayed them. I sort of figured the confetti and party poppers would set the right tone.

ma not. may not.

Her arms and legs trembled as her body was wracked with shuddering trembles. Maybe use shudder or something to reduce repetition.

I really should have seen the diamond bit coming from a mile off, you gave it all away, but somehow I didn't see it. Now we can add puppy passage to the list of Dog euphemisms.

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All Bronystories and it was wonderful. Unique, interesting and it let me show off my love for golems.

So, he ended with a diamond dong? (where is Maud Pie emoticon when you need one...)


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:eeyup: Thank Bronystories for that. It was a magnificent bit of creativity.

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I think the next ne will excite your interest more.

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Oh really? So you could tell how meh I felt about this chapter even without me saying it?

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You tend to just offer corrections. The next one is Raridogs, and you know I put my passion into that.

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You do indeed. This one just clashed with my love of Braeheart and the just utter weirdness involved with using Cheese.

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I took the request, I took the risk. This happens when you open to requests and don't stick to OCs. I'm all about Braeheart too.

nicely done. I hope to see more interspecies clop in the future from you

Thaaaat's Sweetie Belle!

I swear, you have a way to turn such absurd situations into more mundane sexual ones and it's always hilarious.

And thus Cheese Sandwich was filled with the spirit of the buffalo.

Heh... I remember reading Yilden's blog squee-festing all over Cheese. It was quite informative.

I liked the details of the fine hairs on Little Strongheart's buffalo cooch tickling Cheese.

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The best part about absurdity is that if you take it far enough it morphs into something so out there that it becomes mundane. That's exactly what I was going for and I'm glad it came off well.

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Thank you kindly, friend. Raridog is one of the things I do with great aplomb.

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All my skills remain intact, even when I don't like the pairing if I agreed to do it.

Rarity histrionics are always fun.

I think Sweetie Belle and a certain potted plant have a lot in common.

her b her. her by her.

shaft that. shaft, that.

So is this in a third world then, or just kind of a nebulous space especially for this story?

I liked the story bits, the rest was a alright.

A bit of background info on my request is in order I guess. I should also mention I have a dark sense of humour.

I find the idea of being woken up to find a lover having sex with you or intending to have sex with you in your warm safe bed to be an amusing prospect. One of my friends got to visit one of his friends who had moved to a different province. She wanted to have a "house warming". It lasted a whole week XD. Apparently, she encouraged him to have sex with her while she was sleeping, going as far as sleeping in the nude. He never took up that particular offer (boo!). He told me about that when he came back and I thought the situation to be quite hot and it's been a fantasy of mine ever since.

The whole situation can also sound like a rape to those who don't know what's going on and I like those kind of humorous twists.

I guessed that the guys should have some sort of consent to come over beforehand, so why not have the mare call them over for a bit of a pick-me-up because she was feeling a bit down? But for what reason... losing your job is pretty depressing.

I wanted the guys to be scarred and tough looking to seemingly reinforce the idea that they were on the surface bad rapists or something, but actually kind individuals. Don't judge a book by it's cover kind of thing.

I went through a few situations that would be tragic, but ironic, and already fit what I had already come up with. A firehouse burning down seemed ironic as hell and would be a good reason for the guys having scars.

But why would the house burn down? I went with negligence and falling asleep fit in theme with the sleep sex.

I then came up with the idea that the mare was a chronic sleeper or that her special talent was falling asleep at the drop of a hat. The name Sleepy Time came quick and as a bit of a creepy reference to the "Sleepy Time" film reel in the horror film Sinister. In it, a child drugs his family and ties them to their beds. When they wake up, he goes to each room and films them as he slits their throats. I'd like to believe I snuck that in there good...

The cutie mark came from the idea of abruptly face planting onto a pillow and some feathers bursting out. It also went with the tickling fetish I wanted in there. Feet tickling is my main fetish so feather imagery is a must. It's also why she's a Pegasus; they're practically feather dispensers and you can tickle their hoovesies with them limitlessly, even if they break the feathers accidentally. Gabby has a thing for clean hooves so it rather appealed to him, too.

To have them all be coworkers made for a particularly good reason for the guys to come in quickly and save Sleepy Time's ass and get scarred up. Eheh... I've had some experience with improper workplace conduct with another guy and it's awesome fun.

Yeah, I kinda tailored the plot to something that would appeal to Gabby, possibly greatly. I think it's somewhat similar to his trio of buffalos in his Clip Clip anthology.

As for the names of the firemen, I couldn't think of anything. Hell, some of the names I came up with were "Buffle Kill" and "Rough Rugger". Pretty lame...

It took awhile, but Rushing Ravine came to mind as another morbid reference. Why would a ravine be rushing? Because you jumped off and are headed straight to the bottom. It fit in with the native theme going with buffalos. I also like to think it's a heroic name, charging headlong into suicidal situations to rescue someone and Rushing probably got the most injured...

For Andrei... there's nothing creepy or morbid here :P I couldn't think of a good European name so I looked up popular ones on Wikipedia. So yeah, no particular reference here. Maybe to Andrei 3000 from Outkast. "Hey Ya" is a very happy song.

I like how Gabby made Sleepy plump. I know he's partial to plump ladies, so this addition probably made him like writing this? Being plump also fits with the pillow theme. Personally, I prefer women of average build and small, apple like breasts, but I do find plump women quite enticing as well.

I also like how he added in polyamory. I originally visioned them as friends, but this adds a whole new level of love. Quite fascinating.

The tickling turned me on greatly. I like how the frogs were described as fleshy and having the scent of lotion. It's in the details...

Oh, and tickling while having sex is an explosive sensory overload for the ticklee :)

Eheh... when I intended for DP, I was thinking one in the pink and one in the stink. But double vaginal sounds very fulfilling to Sleepy, plus it involved the guys being sandwiched in there and frotting, which had me drooling. The fact that Andrei's nubby griffin cock was grinding into Rushing's cock and Sleepy's cunt walls is something you wish could happen in real life... the bi in me was amused to no end by this turn of events. Oh, and it totally fits in with polyamory. I think.

It was like some sort of double sandwich. The guys were sandwiching Sleepy and in turn she was sandwiching them inside her. Far out, man...

Thanks for writing this, Gabby <3

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Potted plant? Normally I'm sharp with references. But that escapes me.

It's a nebulous space. I have three universes I actually care about. Bad Apple's, the porn universe with Ironshy, polyrarity and Rachzibah, and the one where the Power Ponies have porn comics.

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Sleepy sex with prior consent is charming and can be very amusing, and sexually arousing.

I thought you meant DP like that but given my vaginal love I tend to like doing vaginal DPs. Plus, it gets me right in my impregnophilia. I like to imagine one of them is going to get her pregnant.

About her figure: I confess, I am completely in love with Mrs. Cake-type bodies, like Pearl. Making more of them is good.

The poly sort of came from me realizing... they saved her life. And she was already interested in them. Given how much I love love it was a natural progression, like Rarity in "Iron Will vs the Penile Code." Or in the third story here.

Your explanation was quite interesting. The references were the sort of things I'd do. Creative and fun for those who get it.

It was fun to do, as hoof fetish work is something I love. Thanks for letting me indulge in a lot of fun stuff. And if you want more hoof work, check my story "Rainbow Dash's Wonderbolts Initiation" in the Soarin' chapter.

Gilda x Garble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: I. . . mean. . . .o-only i-if you want to. . . .:fluttershysad:

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It's not a bad idea. The teen dragons are on my radar.

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