Nightmare Moon's banishment is coming to a close. After centuries she will be allowed to leave. She eagerly awaits the four stars destined to free her. When they arrive, she is in for a surprise.
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Smaug the Golden
All is not lost; the unconquerable will, and study of revenge, immortal hate, and the courage never to submit or yield: and what else is not to be overcome?
Smaug the Golden
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That. Was. Beautiful. Enough said.
4380178 Thanks.
Funny, witty.....inconclusive.....
I understand this story is just an improvised one shot, or at least it look like one, but a more thorough questioning could have been hilarious, still deserve upvote
Please write a comical sequel when NM reach a completely nonchalant equestria
Mahahahaha
4382974 I'll think about it. I have plenty of free time, so I could do a sequel. I'll get back to you.
That was one weird-ass thing.
4557602 I suppose it was. Did you enjoy it?
4557609 Eh, it was worth a chuckle.
4557646 Glad it earned a chuckle.
Your stories are terribly unappreciated. They take quality, unique premises and expound them into interesting and believable tales. Very excellent work.
4722980 Why thank you. You just made my day.
A great premise, perfect for a short one-shot, nicely written, generally good characterisation... but it just didn't spark for me. I can't really expect a Comedy/Random story to be calm, plain sailing, but this felt a little too uneven. It might well have been better with 500 more words.
4777314 True. Sorry for the late reply. I typed this as both an idea I needed to get done, and as an experiment. I suffer from flow issues often, so I have trouble with length. I'm sorry it didn't spark anything, but thanks for sparing time for it anyway.
Yes. All my yes.
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
Hey, you stole my idea that 'stars' could be literal.
But I don't mind.
7862995 Seeing as this story came out back in two thousand fourteen, I doubt I 'stole' your idea.
I know. 7863126