Ebon Mane
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brilliant work! I was actually creeped out, a rare feat in ghost stories. and the ending just made my day!
I had trouble picturing it
This was wonderful.
Best.Scary.Story.Ever.Nuff said.
it was creepy, but the warning actually made me anticipate something truly frightening. Good work, though. It is a pretty spooky idea.
3 1/4 stars!
EVIL! Thoroughly terrifying, and then EVIL PONY FRIENDS OF HARMONY!
And I have to say, nicely done.
Amusing. Not much to say other than that.
Well that was fun. :) Good imagery. I kind of figured it was Pinkie, given the Random tag and her lack of actual excuse.
So I guess Rainbow's storytelling skills improved between this story and Sleepless in Ponyville, huh? :V
To be honest, the ending disappointed me. I was looking forward to Twi being killed/eaten/something by the door. Still, not bad overall.
Well the ending just made me laugh and my mind imagined the door like this
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She what?
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Started. As in, started walking, moving, levitating, trotting, meandering, running, skipping, galloping, going, etc...
It's used commonly in literature, so unless this is your first time reading, the word/phrasing should look familiar.
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I wrote that back in 2015-
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And no one ever answered you. I figured I would, although, looking at it now, it seems passive-aggressive and snarky, so I'd like to apologize as that was not my intention.
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Hey its fine. I just got your notification on my email and well. Decided to check out the place. Alot has chanched since 2014.. Damn...
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I only just came back here a few days ago, and my avatar was still in a Christmas hat from when everyone was doing that back in 2012 or 2013. And yeah, things be different. I'm on a Horror binge now.
I loved every second of this!
Also That ending...
Just re-read it, and that whispering portal reminded me a lot of the coaxing of Pennywise.