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Wow. I'm really liking where this is going so far, great way to start off the story
My Pinkie senses are telling me there will be feels in chapters to come?
I'ma read this, I bet I like it!
Wonderful way to start a story! Also, Humanized story? Nice. I don't see that very often. I like this.
I am putting this in my read later section
2181548 Already five dislikes? Wow that was unexpected, but I can't please everyone I guess. There are surely feels to come!
2182031 I thought I might try a humanized story out. I've never written any fics this way so I guess we will see how it goes!
2183243 I'd upvote it a million times if it would let me
I love this can't wait for next chapter.
Humanized :C
Interesting. Though my first thought was of a mechanical leg so yeah.
Anyways I like it so far.
2186124 Glad you like it
Glad you're enjoying it so far though 
2186575 We will get to that later on in the story
What pervs think of the idea of three chicks, two of which are lesbians, in the same home: HAWT!
What cloppers think of three mares, two of which are lesbians, in the same home: HAWT!
What I think of three chicks, two of which are lesbians, in the same home: Good story, gonna be a good story.
All in all, this story is really coming into place, I love it! Don't give up writing this ever!
Nothing made Fluttershy more happy "then" spending time with her newly adopted daughter.
Should be "than"
Scootaloo waved her arm about in the air as she said her farewell to her "mothers" friend.
Should be "mother's"
"Well dinner might be a little later "then" expected..."
Should be "than"
This is turning out to be quite a nice story, looking forward to seeing where it goes next
I'm also digging this humanized FlutterDash
Keep up the good work!
2189331 Gave me a good laugh
Glad you're liking it!
Glad you're enjoying it!
2189598 Thanks for the corrections as always
Luna damn cliffhangers
Ah, sweet, Baby Jesus! This story just keeps getting better! I can't wait for the next chapter!
2218112 I love to keep my readers hanging
2218682 Glad you're enjoying it!
Poor scootaloo.
I swear to all that is good in this world, if Scootaloo dies, or loses her other leg or some shit like that, I will augment your ass cheeks....
2221495 Calm down!
I'm not going to kill her, or take away her other leg 
But I won't say that it doesn't get sadder....because it does 
2224246
That's good to hear
Many tears have been shed by me during this chapter.... And I bet I know what the box was.... It was an artificial leg, wasn't it?
2225049 I'm glad it moved you to tears
and I will have to keep that a secret until that chapter comes 
"I just wanted...to walk by myself..."
I lost it when I read that 
You're doing a great job with this 
This story is turning out to be much better than I had expected
Hmm, luckily thesilentcloud came through and gave me a link to this (some reason I could not see this on your page) and I'm happy he did. Now time to read
2226324 Yay! I like secrets!!
2227270 I'm glad it's surpassing your expectations
2227562 That's odd that it wasn't showing up. I apologize for that, but I'm glad he suggested it to you. Please do enjoy
2227562 If you're not viewing mature content then my story will not show up. Sorry for that
2229513 thanks
Wow, poor Scootaloo though, witnessing the very core truth of her two mothers.
Hopefully she'll have a chance to calm down and come to terms with everything. And hey! It's that box! 
I wonder what's in it...
1: Perfect chapter, lots of D'awws, lots of laughs, and that one Oh shit! moment. Loved this chapter.
2: I don't think awkwardest is a word. I saw that up there, and I was thinking... Eh, not so sure about that.
3: Only a couple of grammatical errors I see. Perfect chapter.
Welllllllllllllllllll..................
Shit
My only comment is that sometimes you describe Fluttershy as tall then sometimes as smaller than Rainbow. Other than that the story is cute.
there's a lesson to be learned from this chapter... lock the door before having sex!
2235615 Glad you're enjoying it
Also it didn't correct me when I used awkwardest, so I assumed it was a real word 
2235804 Sorry about the grammar issues, I didn't get to proofread it yet
2236694 I never realized that I described her as smaller once....I probably meant her personality, but sorry for the confusion on that
She had been going much 'to' fast for her to keep up, but that was perfectly fine.
And this was a really great addition to the story 
Can't wait to see how Rainbow and Fluttershy explain this, and what Scootaloo does with the contents of the box (of which I can only assume is a prosthetic leg) 
Should be 'too'
And damn! From the foreshadowing at the beginning I thought Applejack had like made fun of Scootaloo or something
Glad I was wrong though
You're doing really good with this story and I can't wait to read more
2236711 Amen to that
Nice
2237930 Thanks for the correction!
And hell, I would never make Applejack do that 
That would be just awful 
But I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I hope that you will continue to read it and give me your wonderful feedback as always 
Fluttershy couldn't help but cry 'to'.
Should be 'too'
D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW D'AAAAW
2247137 Thanks for the correction! I always rely on you to catch what I didn't
And that's a lot of D'awww's going on there 
(Heart explode)
Here lies General Smiddy, A.K.A., LunaLover1990. He forgot to keep plenty of insulin nearby.
Still a few spelling and grammatical errors, but even so, this chapter... It brought a few tears to my eyes... Then I burst out crying like a little foal.
"She quickly pulled the door open to let the tall women in, but Rarity was stopped by the bouncing little farm girl."
Should be woman
"Rarity tried to smile at her little sisters friend."
Should be sister's
"Her heart raced as she watched the beautiful women get closer and closer to her."
Should be woman
"She closed her eyes tightly, trying to avoid the punishment that would surly come from honesty."
Should be surely
Sudden RariJack? I'm ok with this
2256267 I was proofreading until my mom asked me to make dinner, so thanks for catching those for me!
And Yes, I always have to throw in RariJack if I can. It builds up to some important stuff later on, so this is just their introduction 
2256317 Well I'm not the biggest fan of RariJack to be honest, but we'll see. I'm also really glad to see Scootaloo finally call Rainbow mommy
2185293 What story? I need new reading material, and your writing tends to be good
Ok RariJack , RainbowShy and maybe TwiKie(I think)
3 of my favorite shipings in one fics
You sir/ma'am are a god/godness
I love u
2257398 They are my favorites too, so of course I had to add them
Guess I'm a Goddess 
Not really 
Dawwwww
Next chapter: everypony arrives at the picnic they have they're meals...
and then this happens