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Being a little different isn't always easy and each of the main six have their fair share of hardships. Join the magic of friendship and acceptance about being who you are and feeling good about yourself. Each of the friends share their own stories about growing up a little different from all the other fillies and how they were able to overcome bullies, family, and society as they marched onward to a rainbow colored flag.
((If you don't want to, don't read the first chapter. Just terrible random fluff))
(Shippings Involved: FlutterDash, RariJack, Twinkie Pie)
(If you don't like gay then go away!)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 59 )

If you don't like gay then go away!

Fuck you, I lit the bonfire here already and there's a Black Knight ahead, like hell I'm going anywhere any time soon.

2686996 Hm...a bonfire you say?
2687023 Hope you liked it :rainbowlaugh: It's really a new take for me :heart:

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There must be a FlutterDash77 hiding somewhere.
I can feel it's gaze...

2687077 I did. THe pie thing was quite odd but amuzing. The Flutterdash was outright adorable even with Flutters getting bashed by her fillyfriend.

I can kinda tell the main six already have marefriends, just by the way they are acting there.

"...the cyan pegasus' wings straight out behind her."
Boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner boner





Boner.

Oh and great job! I like where this is going. Keep at it

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both of you are bad and intolerant pls get off this story or i will call the internet police and they will come and arrest you for racism and being intolerant homophobes

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i would recommend submitting this to equestria daily. their prereaders are very nice to everyone. <3

I don't wanna be a critique here but...there isn't much in this chapter that relates to the description. I mean, I trust you and all, but it just seems a little TOO off topic from the description. I wonder where this is gonna go. Best of luck!:twilightsmile:

This is pretty good. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the others. :twilightsmile:

This was great! Can't wait for what's next!:pinkiehappy:

2689906 Glad you enjoyed it :twilightblush:
2690006 Hope you stick around to find out :pinkiehappy::heart:

A bit rough around the edges. I would change the odd word, but other than that... it was a nice alternative take on Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash getting together and I gotta admit... My reaction to their story was sorta mirroted by the others in the mane 6. Nice job there.

I look forard to more.

2692671 Glad you liked it for the most part. :twilightsmile: It's a bit different then I expected it to be, but I kind of just let my imagination run wild with this story :twilightblush:

Awesome sauce! Now to look at your other stories! :twilightsmile:

I'll be honest and I really don't believe that the first chapter was necessary, but it is the Author's decision. That aside, I am starting to like it! good job sir.:pinkiesmile:

2703729 It was just to show the randomness of the story, but I understand. Glad you're liking it though :twilightsmile:

Dangit, I should have saw that coming, but I was all wrapped up in the feel good.

Take out that first chapter. Or rewrite it. Because seriously, as it is, it's just... nothing. Very confusing and wordy nothing. It's not even good randomness. It's just a whole lot of empty words in which nothing really happens at all. I know what you were TRYING to do, but I'm afraid you failed terribly at it. o___O

That said, however, the next chapter is markedly better. Some issues here and there but it's a cute story so far and I look forward to more. :3

2711253 Yeah I know I fail at writing comedy. I know it was a terrible attempt but I'm going to leave it as is. I'm not too worried about fixing it, I'm just going to move on with the flow of the main story. :twilightsheepish: Guess you could say I'm lazy in a way, but I'm just going to leave it :rainbowwild:

Glad you liked the rest of it though :raritywink:

Nice chapter. Good funnies and nice D'aww when the two fillys get together. Looks like Twilight was the last there to get to find love... :facehoof: not surprising though..

2714706 Glad you liked it :pinkiehappy: Twilight is indeed next :twilightblush::pinkiecrazy:

Aww... It's the end... And there I was thinking there was going to be a twipie story next up.

Great story. Seems to me that pinkie is going to be dropping some hints from now on.


Gee what was fluttershy and dash running off...? :rainbowwild: leaves a Little too much to my imagination ...

2722766 Glad you liked it! Sorry for the disappointment with the twipie :pinkiecrazy::twilightblush: I just love to keep people guessing!
I'm pretty sure you can guess what Flutters and Dash are going to go do :yay::rainbowkiss::heart:.....

Sleep :rainbowlaugh:
Or maybe not :rainbowwild:

2722896 by the urgency... it was almost as if they were flying home to try for a foal. :rainbowwild::yay:

I defiantly look forward to more stories from you. :scootangel:

2723483 Maybe they were :rainbowlaugh:
I sure hope you keep a look out for new stories by me in the future! :pinkiehappy:

2723553 you're one of the few I follow. Aside from Flutterdash, Ive backed out from MLP and the brony community. So I certainly will be looking forward to whatever you write.

2723567 Aw, that's a shame :applejackunsure: But I'm glad you're sticking to FlutterDash :yay::rainbowkiss:

2723813 of couse I will be :pinkiehappy: Thats why im one of the Flutterdash group admins :rainbowwild::yay:

It's over? aww man, and I was expecting a little TwiPie story too. Oh well, all good things must come to an end right?

2724115 FlutterDash is just too good to give up :twilightsheepish:
2725974 Sorry for the disappointment. Though I will be working on a new story soon :scootangel:

This was very enjoyable to read. I liked all of the stories. And I didn't mind the so-called "fluff" at the beginning! I thought it was cute. :twilightsmile:

Now I'm not going to say this is a bad story, because it isn't. It was a nice little feel good thing but the thing is... I just feel it's to simple and rushed. You got all these stories about coming out and finding love but it's just to simple I feel. Life is a very complex thing and if you were trying to make a depiction of the world we live in then I feel that this story doesn't have enough depth to it. Things just happen, people figure things out then happy ending. But I just don't feel that people act this way, now I'm not going to say that every person out there has a similar way of thinking because everyone is different with their own houghts and ideas and I feel that needs to be adressed. For instance, we are brought for most our lives and most of us believe that the end goal of life is to end up happy with a husband or wife and a family to call our own with a relatively successful life. But some people get these feelings and they sometimes don't know wether to embrace them or suppress them or somwhere in between, again I'm not trying to generalize thought but I'm trying to put something out there so people have least an idea to go off of. So I think this story did not just accurately depict the complexity of thought and emotion, that's not to say this story didn't at least try because I saw a bare bones idea of what I'm trying to get across in rarity/applejack chapter but it didnt really hit it for me. So by the end of I've I just said (mostly because I can't really think of anything else to say), I just feel this story did not really explore the complexities of thought. I'm not trying to stop this story from being liked, I just feel it wasn't right for me.

I do aplogize if all that was confusing or not well thought out, just kinda happens when I write stuff like that so if anyone wants to question what I've said or clarify something then I'd be happy to try and do so.

2858383 Well thank you for your feedback and honesty. I understand completely of what you are saying, and I do agree with it. This story is not one that really takes things deeper into reality of what would most likely occur in this types of situations. That may be true, however, this is really just one of those, like you said, feel good stories. It isn't one that I took too far like I usually would. This was just a little short story that I through out there. It was more like an experiment, you could say. I never have written anything quite like this before, I am more use to writing deep romance and tragic happenings. I just wanted to try something a little different for a change and I can see how this story really isn't the best that it could be. But please understand that I really wasn't trying all too hard with this one. It was just to pass the time. If you want something more in depth, I would suggest reading some of my other fanfictions. Most of them are romance and a lot of them are dark and tragic, however, some of them do have that happy ending, but not most. Thanks again, and I do hope you will give my stories another chance :twilightsheepish:

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I completely understand what your saying, sometimes after writing deep, introspective stories you just wanna write something simple for once. I can appreciate that, I could never do it myself as I think about every single thing I do and simplicity is not something I'm good at. I will take a look at your other fics as I am actually reading your latest one right now. So good luck and thanks for the thoughtful answer.

2859740 Great. Thanks for understanding. I hope you find my other stories to be of more interest :twilightsheepish:

This chapter made me laugh. I've been looking for a good fan fic to read for a while. I guess I'll be reading this, I love it!

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