When Applebloom decides to bring up love as the topic of conversation, she feels that something is not sitting right with Scootaloo or Sweetie Belle. Confronting them about it doesn't seem to gain her any knowledge on the matter so see seeks advice from Applejack.
In the meantime, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle are determined to find out themselves what is actually going on between them. They have to find out one way or another and they know they can't avoid all the frightening little details that follow.
(<-- Scootaloo has no wings in my cover art...whoops.)
I normally don't like ships but I like where this is going.
2831119 Glad that you are able to enjoy it
Hmmm.... Looks like no males will be involved so.... I'll give it a looksie later.
Seriously though, I love a good Scootabelle!
Not enough of them
2831961 No males
2832030 SweetieTroll I love a good ScootaBelle too! Never see them too often
It's not often I run into any of the crusader pairings but I'm glad I have now. This is pretty darn good.
Well that is a fun start. I like where this is going. Sweetie Belle... oh dear. She seems to know too much about what is going on, maybe she's been hanging out with Rarity and her tales of love too much...
Wonder what RD would say if she heard Scoots ask her about all this...?
I like it already
Oh my god!! I can't wait to read more of this!!
ScootaBelle, combined with potential RariJack and FlutterDash? It's like a salad of my favorite ships!!!
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I'm so excited that everybody seems to be liking this already! I've been sick the past two days so I'm sorry I haven't gotten anything done, but I will be back with more soon
And the more I think about it, the more I think I will probably go ahead and use FlutterDash in this too along with RariJack. I wasn't going to at first, but now, I can think of a few ways that they will be useful
That got me into a frantic search for a comic I found not long ago. Took me a good 30 minutes and boy, was it frustrating not being able to find it. But now here it is, I think it fits that line well:
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The only way for that to happen is like this:
My thought on the matter:
Do continue!
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2837676 Everything you just put on that comment made me laugh! Good job for that
I am starting on the next chapter right now
Why was this in the flutterdash group, when it has nothing to do with neither of them? Were allowed to do that?
2837868 It does have FlutterDash, just not yet
Her friends ran away in tears and Applebloom... eats some junk food. maybe she has her sister's stomach?
Here's a picture to sum up the first half of this chapter:
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Second half:
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(Not really, but you know what I mean! Right?)
And there were no chickens nearby?!
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Aha! Found an image that's not so tiny!
Also, I now must link this, as it jumped out from the depths of my wicked brain!
2838838 Once again, you managed to make me laugh
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Sooner or later I'd have to use this, might aswell do it now:
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2838909 Nice!
Yes, a story with best crusader!
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Btw, love this.
Okay great chapter... but I think you may have just brushed over one little detail.
The fact that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are Scootalo's moms. Yeah... um... WHAT THE HELL MAN!?!
You can't just drop something on us like that and just move on, that is an important detail, I feel, to the story and you barely gave it the time of day. Ok, you may have done it in another one of your stories and didn't feel you needed elaborate on it but some of us haven't read your other stories, you need to flesh out stuff like that. Now I'm not just gonna go straight
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on you but please, in the future, do flesh out stuff like that so it doesn't seem like a big deal for those of us who are "un-enlightened".
Thanks and please keep writing, I do enjoy this story.
Great chapter!
I like the slight inclusion so far of Flutterdash and rariJack.
This story is is heating up so quickly... poor sweetie Belle.
2837630 Oh yay more ships I like!
2840777 Don't worry just yet. There will come the time when it gets more into detail on that whole relationship.
uh... is Applebloom comfort eating?
2843936 Applebloom is shamelessly comfort eating
AB needs to find herself a nice colt. That might stop the comfort eating. How about Pinpsqueak?
I like the sound of the other ships coming in soon in greater depth. Especialy the Flutterdash and RariJack.
Oh and the first thing that poped into my head when Pinkie opened the door was TwiPie. I'm sorry... I thought the two had been kissing or something.
Oh and I look forward to the impending Scootabelle and how AJ and AB will come into it.
Aww, poor Apple Bloom, you just can't survive AJ's interrogations, can ya?
What's wrong with a bit of foreplay?
Wellp, when this thing in my skull starts to work, it delivers! If only I knew how to control it...
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If you know what I mean!
Clearly she has mastered the Way of the Voice since her last attempt:
Scoots never did see Pinkie's work with keeping secrets, huh?
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Sorry, but... I just had to! I just had tooooo!
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There was no proper facehoofing Scootaloo. Went with the second best option.
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With both Rarity and Sweetie Belle taken, I can think of a certain dragon!
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2844599 I was intending for the once again...subtle TwiPie. For some reason I just like keeping them on the hushed side of my stories
And there will be lots of and to come! As for poor Applebloom....she....will stay forever alone
2845071 You entertain me with your comments Keep 'em coming!
Apple Bloom's gonna get fat if she doesn't stop comfort eating.
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Mission accomplished, awaiting next assignment!
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Loving the story so far! Scootaloo's oblviousness to her own feelings is simply adorable and humorous. Poor Sweetie though...I wonder what she's gonna tell Rarity and what her big sis will advise.
But poor Bloom...she needs to stop comfort eating. Apple Bloom! No amount of hayseed chips or other goodies will fill the void! Go find yourself a nice colt, like Rumble, Pipsqueak, or Featherweight...or at least put down the chips and run some laps or something.
Yes! I love how fast this fanfic is updating, I love this fanfic so much!!
And it only keeps getting better!!!
2845071 Nice You know... I like you thinking there. Oh Spike...
2837926 Whatever you say...
Awww, poor Scoots...and Sweetie, too, of course, but since you're focusing on Scoots' internal turmoil here...Feels. Oh, Scoots, I've been there.
Excellent update. Can't wait to see where Sweetie ran off to, and (hopefully) she and Scootaloo making up. I hope so.
Oh boy, can you imagine what happens to a pony who couldn't smile?
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Just be brave like when you pushed Sweetie Belle's backside with your head!
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Aaand that's as far as I got...
For now I have a sad.
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Duh... Duuh... Duuuuuuuh!
Excellent update. The feels are really kicking in here. and rarity was totally being rarity there...
Cant wait for more.
2867719 Glad you liked it
Soooooooo cute! But part of me thinks this second section was a dream. Wait, no, it must be a dream. It has to be...
2919792 Nope. It was a flashback...so it really happened
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Oh wow... So Scoots is now realizing what Sweetie meant...
...
I demand more of this. MORE!
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That was so adorable!
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Now if this were anything else, then Sweetie Bell's confession might be really creppy.
Just sayin'.
Now ain't that a nice change of feels?
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Yeah, you get The Stare!
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Aw, come on Scoots, don't you want...
My Little Stalker?
Huh...didnt see that coming.
It was a cute read and i can understand that it is a flashback, but it was a tiny bit odd how Sweetie comes in so stronly loving Scoots and all of a suden Scootaloo just kinda turns around and goes the friend track, despite how strong the love theme was.
Oh well, when you release the next chapter, I'll defiantly read it as I wonder where this is all leading and how such a flashback ties into the story in the present.
That was good. Not much else to say... it was great... yea
*help me
Other than that, excellent. C'mon Scoots, go find her and tell her your feeeeeeeeeeeeelings.