Twilight and the rest of the mane 6 are getting together for a night of fun and drinking. What starts as a night in with the girls turns into so much more, leading our adventurous young mares to discover a whole new side to their friendship.
Just something fun that came to mind while waking up from a heat-exhaustion induced nap, hope y'all have as much fun reading it as I did writing it! Depending on what kind of response it gets I may consider doing a follow up for the day after the festivities, so please let me know what you think!
Story Picture provided with permission from Musapan
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I was half way expecting the pairings you chose to go with, but the mistress fluttershy part threw me for a loop.
And now rarity is a sex toy :/
This was good! Follow-up! Follow-up! xD
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That is all
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Hahaha, yea, that actually surprised me a bit too when I thought of it, but Fluttershy was very insistent about including that, and even I am not immune to The Stare
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Thumbs up!
More!
I support AJ/Celestia
This was fun! Wonder what the morning after is going to be like?
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No offense bro, the story was fairly well written... but...
I gotta say, the picture was more interesting then the actual story.
1st shoot Pinkie
then shoot Twi
then shoot AJ
and then shoot Pinkie again!
and after that, tackle Fluttershy
those are my reactions to what they said/did, in order
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None taken, I honestly wrote this because this idea was making it difficult to be more productive on the stories I really care about. I managed to pound this out in about 4 hours, so I'm happy to hear that you thought the writing itself was of quality.
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Hahahaha, so I take it you're not a fan of pony shipping?
380065 I am, just thought I'd share my reactions
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It's all good brony, thanks for the track, even if you'd like to murder half the cast
To All: Looks like you guys really enjoyed this huh? Guess I'll need to start planning chapter 2
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OH GOD NO
I'm kidding, I'm kidding. Will look forward to that
May the track be with you.
Haha, look, Mah, no dislikes!
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hell yeah!!!
Your pacing is too fast, the dialogue too blunt. I'm not gonna dislike this, or anything but I don't like it.
Alcohol - Everyone tag
Supposed to be like that?
"recovering from heat exhaustion"
Please god tell me that was an unintended pun.
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ROFLMAO
Actually, it was, good catch! My job requires me to sometimes spend hours in an 85 degree room doing physical labor while wearing a Tyvex suit (similar to biohazard suits), so I was a bit worn out by lunch. That is hilarious though, thanks for the laugh!
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I'd love to see the morning after.
The morning after should be real fun
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It's on it's way, glad you guys liked it so far
419177 Make a fun, enjoyable story that has them laughing at the end, and it's no surprise you have people wanting moar. Keep up the quality, and you'll do well.
Fluttershy...mistress?
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An upvote and a favourite for you!
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat
P.S. Please make a Chapter 2? Pwetty pwease?
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Glad you liked it, chpt 2 is in the works, though Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are being rather obstinate.
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Excellent.
Still kind of weirded out by how fine I am with the whole 'Mistress Fluttershy' thing. I'm kind of worried.
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat
Damn it.
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Honest;y man, I'm REALLY sorry, I probably rewrote that damned chapter 20 diff times, but it always ended up just feeling flat and over-explained. If sudden inspiration strikes me then I shall come back and finish what I started here, but I simply don't want to put out something 2nd rate and disappoint everyone.
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-Deja Poo
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XD glad ya enjoyed it!
You really make me laugh, I hope to see "the morning after" someday.
Everyone is okay with Mistress Fluttershy. You know why? The character fits. It's not a guarantee, but a very real emotional possibility with Fluttershy as we know her.
That being said, I always see Applejack being with Rarity It leaves Pinkie/Dash open but it forces Fluttershy and Twilight to be apart. Their characters aren't aggressive enough to go there. I can however see both of them fighting over Big Mac...while Cheerilee steals him for herself. That leaves Twilight with Trixie and...Fluttershy with Gilda. Yes I'm serious. Quit laughing! I mean it. The characters work together!
Is it just me or have i seen my brother reading this?...................................and he is not even a brony
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
GAH MIXED FEELINGS
this was rather entertaining. i think the brisk pace worked really well for something we're supposed to take on this level of serious. even so, i think the pairings you chose definitely work: pinkie's the only one with the energy to keep up with dash, fluttershy's the only one able to match wavelengths with rarity and, let's face it, twilight needs someone like applejack to help balance her out and stop her from snapping when she gets worked up. i hope you do manage to get a working part 2, but it's funny enough on it's own if you don't.
2554072 In all honesty, I have tried on 4 separate occasions to try and get something further on this that I liked, but every time it just felt to me like I was over explaining the joke, so I decided to leave it as it is. If you'd like something with a little more substance, check out my other story Sugar Games, which I promise to continue working on as soon as this semester of school it over
Sooooo......Fluttershy is a dominatrix when inebriated?
................. D'OHKAAAYYYZZZ!!!!!!!
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...I have no words... I know this was made in mars 2012, but it just push me into something uncofortable...