Humanized: Being adopted can sometimes be hard, especially if you're also handicap. Scootaloo learns the value of what she truly wants, and not what she thinks she wants. Follow along in Scootaloo's adventure of discovering her true destiny
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Don't apologize for that! It was so sweet! Even without dialogue, that loving scene was so cute and sensual.
Wow, poor Scootaloo though, witnessing the very core truth of her two mothers. Hopefully she'll have a chance to calm down and come to terms with everything. And hey! It's that box! I wonder what's in it...
1: Perfect chapter, lots of D'awws, lots of laughs, and that one Oh shit! moment. Loved this chapter.
2: I don't think awkwardest is a word. I saw that up there, and I was thinking... Eh, not so sure about that.
3: Only a couple of grammatical errors I see. Perfect chapter.
Welllllllllllllllllll..................
Shit
My only comment is that sometimes you describe Fluttershy as tall then sometimes as smaller than Rainbow. Other than that the story is cute.
there's a lesson to be learned from this chapter... lock the door before having sex!
2235615 Glad you're enjoying it
2235804 Sorry about the grammar issues, I didn't get to proofread it yet Also it didn't correct me when I used awkwardest, so I assumed it was a real word
2236694 I never realized that I described her as smaller once....I probably meant her personality, but sorry for the confusion on that
She had been going much 'to' fast for her to keep up, but that was perfectly fine.
Should be 'too'
And damn! From the foreshadowing at the beginning I thought Applejack had like made fun of Scootaloo or something
Glad I was wrong though And this was a really great addition to the story Can't wait to see how Rainbow and Fluttershy explain this, and what Scootaloo does with the contents of the box (of which I can only assume is a prosthetic leg)
You're doing really good with this story and I can't wait to read more
2236711 Amen to that
Nice
2237930 Thanks for the correction! And hell, I would never make Applejack do that That would be just awful But I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I hope that you will continue to read it and give me your wonderful feedback as always
OHHH SHEIT JUST GOT REAL
oh fuck man!