Humanized: Being adopted can sometimes be hard, especially if you're also handicap. Scootaloo learns the value of what she truly wants, and not what she thinks she wants. Follow along in Scootaloo's adventure of discovering her true destiny
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Woa...
Great chapter! keep em comin!
Twilight sat back down as her pink haired 'friends'...
Should be friend
If you were to say she looked shocked 'than' you would be mistaken.
Should be then
...but she never felt as if she truly liked all 'this' religious 'practices' she had to do.
Either 'this' needs to be changed to 'these', or 'practices' needs to be changed to 'practice'
With her mouth agape, she began her way 'of' to Fluttershy.
Should be off
If Applejack hadn't had been so careless 'than' Scootaloo...
Should be then
...it felt like they had been sitting 'their' for an eternity.
Should be there
Before Twilight's eyes, a tall 'women' stepped forth.
Should be woman
Her skin was 'a' light as a porcelain doll.
Should be as
This 'women' was not like the Goddess Celestia at all.
Should be woman
Another 'women' began to form before Twilight's eyes.
Should be woman
This 'women' was much different than that of Luna.
Should be woman
Another great chapter :D Quite a few mistakes in this one, but hey, it happens. And I'm always happy to correct what I can.
2294469 Sorry for all the grammar issues. I didn't have time to read over it. I just now sat down at my computer since earlier today to correct my grammar. Thanks as always
I'm here going. DONT YOU DARE HU-*squeeeeee* wait wut0-0
I feel like I'm tripping on acid or something