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Brony Chronicler


I am brony chronicler, I chronicle the tales of the bronies (as well as write some of my own). If I like your story, I might read it on my youtube channel.

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Tai is college student who despite being in a not so bad position in life, isn't so happy. Having never been much of a social person, he's now reached a point of boredom and loneliness. His life is turned around when a strange girl teleports into his living room one night with no memory of who she is. Now finding himself stuck with a roommate, Tai's life takes a turn for the better as this girl starts to show him what he's been missing all these years. And in the end, the two might become a little bit more than just friends.

This story was inspired by My Little Dashie, Enchanted, Lois and Clark and all the humanized pony fan art out there.

Audio Reading on Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqP5ou9cK_4&index=1&list=PL0fzo-8cnvinWfxKAOeSLD6Me03vBy_Zi

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 97 )

Hm. I've always had a thing for Twilight Sparkle romance in fiction.

Well, it's good so far. I'm really aware that you got inspired by My LIttle Dashie, though.

3 things: 1: this is a good story, 2: MOAR!:flutterrage: and 3: ten chapters in and I find the only comments. That's a little weird

Awesome. Can't wait for more.:twilightsmile:

Sweeeeet loved it

I honestly enjoyed this one I honestly can find this as a relatable and well thought out story to me.

2842390 I work on a scehdule of one chapter per month, though I can't guarantee an exact date. So you'll see the last two chapters very soon.

This is actually my favorite chapter. I myself cannot shut up about movies (as well as history). It annoys the hell out of my gf. Sometimes I wish for somebody who understands or is interested in similar topics to discuss these things with.

2845822 Yeah, I do too. Tai is based much on myself, and movies and TV show histories is a major part of my interests. I myself would love to meet a girl who I could share discussions with.

I've been wanting to write a story like this , but with our similarities, I would feel like I was just copying your story. So I guess I'll just enjoy your story. :)

2851433 There's always room for more versions. Hell, this has been done before. What's another gonna hurt?

2851433 I would seriously be curious to see what this story would be like if you replaced Twilight Sparkle with Rarity.

2853734 I find it hard to go in depth with Rarity, it's not that I don't like her, it's just that she's not as... intriguing. I'm afraid that if I wrote about Rarity, with very little in common with the character I would like to portray, the entire bond could just fall apart, but then again, that make could make the story more interesting...

Jeebus Christ!!!!

2856040 Everything you just said are my thoughts exactly, that's why it would be interesting to see if someone could make the relationship interesting.

*discreetly faved*

All I can say is… could life possibly get any better?

:facehoof: Bad things ahead

...There is fics of Buttons mom that have over 60 comments in sheer hours and this has none on the first chapter? Forget that noise!
A good first chapter. Keep it up my friends.

you sir earned a squee

Not bad. Nicely done :) .

Getting more and more interesting.

This sorry been in my read latter for a long time now and now that i have free time. will Eeeaayup. :eeyup: anyway great chapter :twilightsmile: and as away have a great Derpy Day.:derpytongue2:

:trixieshiftright: Will now this is getting More Interesting..

for that have a Moustache :moustache:

OMG Gust! this Chapter is awwww Dawwwwwww Love it lol :twilightsmile: 3107928 Same here u do earn that Squeeeeeeee

o guss :facehoof: sooo much dawwww and lovinging it :heart::derpytongue2: lol

no one comment on this chapter how could they :rainbowlaugh: anyway Love this chapter :twilightsmile: and yeup:eeyup:

will then this chapter was great:twilightsmile: but that ending:trixieshiftright: lol something bad is about to unfold :scootangel: lawl

all the feeel man :fluttershyouch: and awww the daww at the end :twilightblush:
great chapter :twilightsheepish: and have a great derpy day

2845645 to be honest to ya:ajsmug: this story so far is getting awesome. :yay:
I give this story into my top 10 fav stories. next to my little dashies :scootangel: and as away have a derpy day :derpytongue2: & time to read next chapter EEEAAYEUP :eeyup:

This is off to a good start!:pinkiehappy:

Aww! This chapter was cute!

I'm loving this!

I can't believe it! This chapter made me cry! :fluttercry:

It would be super funny if this happened at the end

…my life has just took a turn for the better.

…wait, I'm in love with Twilight Sparkle!!!

:rainbowlaugh:
I just hope princess sun-butt dose not MLD this:raritystarry:

-Llightning

unleash the Hulk!

Friday night comes, and it's another boring evening for me. I'm sure everyone on campus is out tonight, probably taking they're loved ones to the new Twilight movie.

consider yourself lucky i had the misfortune of watching one of those *shudder* theyre horrible awfull they make me sick:pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

i have the nagging feeling that Celestia will ruin this loving couple

“Tai… the day we met... where did you come up with the name Twilight Sparkle?”

OH FUCK!!!!!

i still have the nagging feeling smething bad is about to happen
please Celestia don't:fluttercry:

“Please…just let me know you’ll be okay.”
Suddenly, I feel something touch my head. I look up and see Twilight smiling at me.
“I am,” she says with a smile.

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! YASSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! Now excuse me while I blubber like a big baby over all the feels.:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Twili, need input!

No comments on the last chapter?? :pinkiegasp: Time to change that! :twilightsmile: I'll be honest, this story could have been a little better, but it could have been a LOT worse. There where a lot of parts that seemed rushed, and some parts that didn't feel like they fit. Other than that, It was a good read. I haven't read anything that you've written, but judging by this, you definitely have potential. Keep up the good work, and you might just see me around more often. :twilightsmile:

~Mike out~

5514103 No we had comments, I was thinking about writing a new ending, so I deleted the original chapters. But then I regretted it and after looking at all the reception, I put them back. Yeah, I lost all the nice compliments, but that's what I get for trying to mess with things.

Glad you liked it, yeah some chapters were slightly rushed, particularly towards the beginning. The story was meant to be shorter, but around chapter three, I found myself needing to flesh out things, and before I knew it, I found myself enjoying the writing.

Nice to see this story end. Took a while between some of the later chapters, didn't it?

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