For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Well,..still in the first bit of the chapter and....yeah this is different....
3420565 When I first got the chapter and read the first paragraph I was like I can't deal with this tonight, I'm going to need a full night's sleep for this one.
I was wondering from a while...How different is a shaman "magic" from unicorns´? Can Thiemo adapt unicorn´ spells to his own method?
3420582 >:0 VAT DOO YUUU SAAAEEEE!?
No seriously, I don't get it. I read this just fine.
Was it hard because of translation?
3420665 Nah, I took one look at the line which said that Twilight was Celestia's daughter and called it quits for the night!
I do not understand r63 Discord. Was it done only to include fimfiction obligatory "one of mane6 is lesbian"?
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No, it was done because I personally dislike Discords character. And there are so much cruel fandom Discords out there. He is used too often for my taste.
But Eris is a blank page. I can do nearly everything with her and nobody can say Discord is ooc (out of character).
And if you really think I did it because of the obligatory "one of mane6 is lesbian" thing, think about it like this: at least it isn't Rainbow Dash like most of the time.
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A shaman manipulates the elements. Air, water, fire and earth. All of them have a physical aspect the shaman can interact with.Thiemo has after all to touch the talisman with the stored magic and engraved spell and the object he want to manipulate with the spell. Like touching the air to collect all the water in the air, squeeze it together and freeze it over.
A unicorns magic is of the arcane kind. There is no physical aspect which makes it impossible for shamans to interact with it. You can't touch magic after all. It's more like radiation.
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Thank you for the answer, now I understand. Thought I still do not understand why you had to directly point that shipping instead of leaving it to reader to decide if there is friendship or something other. I kinda hoped this fic will be exception from lesbomane6 rule, or at least would not touch the subject, so complete with inexplicable appearance of Eris I had a bit too emotional reaction, I'm sorry .
After reading your comment I thought a bit about Discord as fanfiction character and I think you are right - Eris indeed has much lighter feel than him.
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Why should this fic be a exception? I clearly see the romance tag up there. Why is it bad that there is a stable relationship? Homosexual or otherwise. I wrote a blog entry some time ago that I will have (some day) tag this fic as mature. I like to write as close to reality as possible and sex belongs to everybody's life. But at the same time I have to say sex is not in the focus. (And who exactly stated that Fluttershy only likes mares?)
3425899 Oh I had a chuckle when I read that line.
But discord is based on Q, the best character in existence.
Ok, so I just found this wonderful story and I'll make my first few remarks so far. Overall, I like it! Definitely one of the better HiE works out there for sure! I notice some grammatical errors from time to time, but nothing too distracting. I've also read your comments and it seems like you're writing it in German and translating it into English so that could be a big reason for that. I know that they don't have the same grammar rules, and I've heard that English is exceedingly hard to learn with all the nuances.
I definitely liked how you took the time to develop each character, and explain how they got together and their relationship to one another. The party seems pretty solid. The AU stuff is odd, but I can live with it. You tagged it correctly, and you're at least keeping the characters 'in character'. Your references are nice and refreshing from time to time and you don't seem to be plugging too many in, so that's a good sign. Your pacing is excellent.
The only thing that I thought was a bit 'off' was how Thiemo was regarded early on as "chaotic good". From what we've seen, "chaotic neutral" seems to fit much more. A chaotic good character would still go out of his way to do "the right thing" even if it wasn't lawful and would have released Trixie back at Chrysalis's lair. A chaotic neutral character tends to go about without any strong pull either way, except a blatant disregard for authority (which Thiemo has shown time and again). It's a small thing though, so don't let it bother you.
All in all, I don't have many complaints at all. I look forward to the next installment!
So, is this an Alternate Universe where Twilight is Celestia's daughter?
Wow...you weren't kidding about the AU tag. Twilight being Celestia's daughter was pretty jarring, but quickly forgotten with Eris' shenanigans.
3421956 Most fics I've read with Discord played him close to canon, mischievous but harmless. Maybe I just got lucky... Not complaining though, as I kinda prefer Eris, though shipping her with Fluttershy is pretty meh.
What about Shining Armor?
Eerie instead of Discord.
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Dissapointment: 9251525 (+56/sec)
Oh well, i gues i'll just go for it
Missing discord :( well why not still try
......allons-y!! Ha!
Well... Discord is female.
That is all to say on the topic.
The AU is strong here, rule 69 ing my favorite character has had a strange effect on my attitude on the story. Interesting
Disappointed that there is no Discord
Dr Who sucks
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So Discord's rule 63'd in this story. Okay, I can live with that, although I'll miss hearing him talk in John De Lancie's voice in my head.
So Twilight is Celestia's daughter in this fic. Upon reading this fact, it appears to be by far the dumbest thing in this fic so far. Just... why? She has a canon family. Why would you change that? This is not the kind of thing you do without a strong plot-related reason, so there'd better be a good explanation down the line.
I don't understand the beginning of this chapter, Twilight was an Alicorn before blasting Nightmare Moon with the Elements?
So first there was Eris, then there was a Manticore and Eris. Then Eris became Pinkie and the Manticore became "Eri". Then the manticore was Rainbow. Finally Eris was Eris, Rainbow was a pony, and Pinkie was never there.
Maybe you could mention Pinkie in more than just dialogue.
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also, Discord now female... Well-
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Komst du aus Duetscheland?
So... Celestia is Twilight's mom, and Discord is female.
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Sure, why not?
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Just roll with it, we are sure it will pay off eventually.
I am whovian and is saw wHat you did
Eh, eeeeh... Not my kind of ship, but whatever. At least it isn't TwiFlash.