For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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I hit publish by accident earlier. Now there is a new chapter
As always, I enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
However, I think I found something that was missed in the editing:
Either the 'perform' needs to be taken out, or the 'be able to do so' needs to be changed.
Huh, so they're visiting the town of the blanks..... What in the heck are they thinking!?
3919745 Dammit!
3919776 My same reaction when I first read this chapter. However, things may not be as it seems..... fufufufu
XD maby it's because there's florida where you came from, the "SUNNY" state.
Hooray for mistakes!
New chapter. Yes! Got to applaud the good choice in music too.
That has to be the best explanation for it I've seen so far.
OH PRAISE CELESTIA, IT'S A NEW CHAPTER!
Sunny Town? Isn't that the name of that cursed town in the creepypasta that Applebloom happens across? I think it's called Welcome to Sunny Town.
Oh Celestia way to be a bigot...
3922162 For your picture and name alone you are my hero.
“We leave the Everfree Forest heading north, wander around Canterlot Mountain, and take our first stop at the small and lovely Sunny Town. It’s in the Lost Forests.”
Story of the blanks is connected to this story
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I never write stories that would require that you read another story.
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Sunny town is part of an mlp indie game on the net called Story of the Blanks and there are numerous fanfics about it.
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I know about the origin, still I would never write something that requires knowledge from any games or stories. I only used the name in this case because it fits the lore around the town I created.
Fun fact: I also used this name because "my" Sunny Town is a bit like the town I grew up in. It's in the middle of a big forest and positioned in a clearing. A lot of old people are living in the town I grew up who come out at night (or when the sun goes down) to walk with their dogs. (It seems any one has a dog there.) And the name of the town also has the meaning: "sunny place in the forest".
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But since you are basing this part of the story in the everfree forest , the town would not actually be really sunny at all.
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Again, I only used the name. Sunny Town is located in a completely different forest northwest of Canterlot (The Lost Forest[Lost Woods, Zelda, hint*, hint*]). Ponyville is southwest of Canterlot. The Everfree is huge and goes from Ponyville nearly up to Canterlot. There is only a small clearing between the forests.
Basically west of Ponyville = Everfree
East of Ponyville = Whitetail Woods.
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3927851 Well that's depressing...
Ah well, whatever happens happens
3934361 Ahh, don't listen to him! Everything will be fine. Everypony is super friendly and absolutely nothing could ever go wrong. I promise
3934542 Somehow that's not making me feel any better...
3934852 I would never lie
3927851 Thinking about it, I can't help but feel that I have been misunderstood. When I said "princess" I meant Amy, the (former)princess of the changelinsgs. So far they seem to be getting along great!
Unless something really very bad happens later to put them at odds.
Something really very bad doesn't happen to split them up, right?
Wait, don't tell me! I'll figure it out, and I'm sure it won't eat away slowly at my sanity.
3935061 Huh, I thought you meant the Equestrian princesses. For Amaryllis, well, the two of them.....I won't spoil anything!
3935109 Well I do see a Romance tag up there...
Wow...I feel like an idiot. I've been seeing parallels between Theimo and Sun Wukong throughout this story, and I just realized the story's title.
Yeah, I'm an idiot...
3939589 No, it really is a pony's tail.
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Most questions tend to answer themselves, don't they?
And I have caught up. Yay I get to wait for new chapters, and cliff-hangers will start to matter...
Ah well, at least I can speculate now without my ideas being shot down as quickly
Hm. Yes. I approve of your music choice.
He hated to be a
pawn, but it was better than spending rest of your
life on the edge of the board.
And how is it better exactly?(Or worse?)
sunny town.... yep i can see where this is going. give my condolences to aura for her lost father or not, what? he's a main character there is less than 0.0000000000000000000000000000001% chance that he will die before the final chapter is released so
well I'll guess
celestia not admit publicly but she hates humans
perhaps a misunderstanding
I happened to Luna
if it was I think would eliminate
does not care about the innocent
everything (I think by a misunderstanding)
she used as a pawn to Thiemo
after they fulfilled their duties as eliminate
either exile or in a dungeon
I will continue reading the story to know what plans celestia
and I think it is not good
4157971 unless they go like the walking dead at that point non are safe (never played the game but stories paint it as really bad)
The second I saw Sunny Town a wicked smile creeped on to my face.
4664179 I... What?
Oooo, good taste in music. None of my friends listen to the Foo Fighters, which is blasphamy since I live in Seattle of all place.
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I find this rather odd... Nirvana on that list too?
Wait....hmm...LunaxThiemo or AmyxThiemo? I have no idea
Why does this only have 1000 likes? This is really good. The lore is pretty cool too. Really i'd say only the first chapter needs a re write and only because it's kinda confusing at first about what is going on. It also kinda needs some sort of overview of all the information in the prequel needed for this story.
sunny town... really?
Hmm. Celestia is trying to manipulate what looks a lot like the Monkey King.
This is unlikely to end well for anybody involved.
Why do i get the feeling that since Celestia stated she wont fall for him, that that means she will?
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That would actually be hilarious.