For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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The past few chapters to me felt like they were dragging their feet, not this one!
And where are his staff? If he lost it then when will he get it back?
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As they were running from the windigoes the staff was attached to his arm as a bracelet. So he still has it.
4297860 cool, so it can transform....i think i missed something here...have to re read...
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"Dragging their feet" has to be saying I don't know as a German with English only being my second language.
Care to explain it to the unworthy me?
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The weapon was forged by Luna. She said so back before the escape. She told him about the ability to transform and he first used it in the everfree.
Dun dun dun!
Great new chapter.
4297878 Roger that.
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"Dragging your feet" is a saying that means something is taking longer than it should, or that someone deals with something slowly because they find the task distasteful sort of like a form of procrastination. In my humble opinion the arc after sunny town felt like there wasn't much happening in the way of plot development. I realize that every story especially one as long as this cannot be full throttle action and plot development all the time. And that being said I like the story a lot and shall await the next chapter with baited breath.
Good chapter and it only took Amy to almost die to make him realize what he has done or recognize his issues to a degree. That and to somewhat allow Amy partially into his heart, cause I don't think he is going to completely open up to her just yet. But he doesn't seem like he will let her go now that she took a piece of himself so far and maybe start to think of their future together.
the wording feels a bit more clunky in this chapter.
Ooh, what could be waiting for them? A not-so-friendly sea serpent? An acromantula? Lots and lots of bats maybe? Quick, get the repel!
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Nightmares, they're coming back! They claim my soul, my very being. It were so dark times.
No Flash, no repel, only an endless amount of Zubat.
(With voice from South Park) Nicccceeeeeee.....
4298418 How so?
*GASP*
He's really was alicorn all along?
Now it all make sense!
1) His tail is white, same as alicorn from story cover.
2) From act 3.5-3.6: he in "pony form" have "blue fur and white mane".
3) No possible another explanation for that alicorn from the cover. Ony possible way: it's Celestia's or Luna's descendant, but only current alicorn-descendant is Twilight.
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Finally somebody recognized the similarities. But no, he isn't the alicorn from the cover. He is 95% Human (-5% for Tail). But you soon will learn who it could be
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Considering the fic is based on Journey to the West, I guess he is an Avatar (The Monkey King) in exile who lose his identity after banishment.
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Nope to that too. The solution to what he is was actually mentioned very briefly, but in a different context. After act 11 you maybe could figure it out.
4311367 Act 11 is going to be pretty fucking awesome. That is all.
Hey i love the story. I loved it so much i figured i would try to write one. Come check out "The Death and The Begging of all is in His Hands" plz.
p.s. this means you too if u can truekry i would really appreciate it.
.....CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! And.....you LIED TO US?!
4311504 i have only one complaint. whats with the poem? this poem that luna gave him is going to be chekhov's gun. but why hasn't it been fired yet? and is it going to be fired? (i'm late to the story.)
Fool of a Took!
I don't like applejack in this story she can't has aura!
They went too deep... They awoke something ancient... Something evil... The Balrog.