For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Another darn good chapter. Still wandering how he makes those talismans and how they work, but i'm assuming that will be answered in a later chapter, in any case i shall gladly wait for my question to be answered. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more .
You already know that I like your story, but I know that it is always pleasant for author to hear praise :) - so here it goes again: the story is brilliant :)
As to suggestions - I cannot suggest - it is your story, but I hope that you have main story plot sketched already however vague that sketch could be (it means for readers that the story will be more consistent and more likely will be finished) and that mane 6 will have as small as possible role in the story (that's personal hope and it will likely contradict most of your readers opinions, but I am tired of mane6 stories, I want more ponies but something unique and original, like yours story). Sadly, there is very small amount of quality OC stories with live characters here.
And as a remark: somehow every time I see Journey update or simply see it’s cover in my favs – I remember “I’m Aura and this here is just my moron dad who doesn’t know when to shut his yapper.” – frankly that dialogue is by now the best part. The second is of course "monkey god Bananarama"
Welp, hopefully he moves on quickly
im really liking this story so far. the illustrations are a nice touch as well.
Don't you mean 'before sunrise'?
A real page-turner, this one.
Oh hey, its the Last Samurai.
yah... we (Americans) were real asses to the Native Americans...
What's done is done though...
At least in the media that I've seen that include Native Americans they're bad asses!
An interesting counter point or advice I would give the buffalo refers back to the mountain men of the Carolinas back during the U.S. Revolution. There weren't a lot of them, but the mountains were heavily wooded, so when the British army arrived they couldn't move quickly or easily. Mean while, every hunter decided they didn't like the army, and started taking individual shots against the army and then moving on. They would take shots at random and run off to reload and find another spot to fire from. There were about a hundred of them. They shot down a good quarter of the army that had begun to interfere with their hunting. The army pulled out before they lost more men to wild and random friendly fire trying to hit the rifle men taking pot shots against them. They never went back in the woods around the mountains.
Falscher Hase and his brother, Halber Hahn.
That was a very pleasant chapter. I put some native american drum music in the background while reading this.
Translation for the names of the natives:
Kleiner Rabe = Small Raven
Falscher Hase = False Hare (or Rabbit)
Echter Hase = True Hare (or Real Hare)
Lachende Sonne = Laughing Sun (or rather Smiling Sun, sounds better anyway)
Stiller Bär = Silent Bear
Schnelle Schwalbe = Quick Swallow (or Fast Swallow)
Now, reading on...