For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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great chapter once again! keep up the good work my kind sir
i'd love to see thiemo angry sometime
Is that suppossed to be a duck...?
Lol, never mind, I forgot what I was going to say when I saw the platypus
No offense
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I think you need to reply to him to get a response.
Anyways,
STATUS: OUTLAW
Her nose led her to the bucket and she risked a cautious glance at the inside.
supposedly
Cautiously she took it with her mouth causing the unicorn to grin, satisfied.
At this moment she was totally unable to cope with the situation.
local doctor's beds
she's
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Fixed!
Thank you very much for mentioning the mistakes.
Holy shit. This is the best HiE story I have ever read. The quality of writing is amazing, the artwork is fantastic and lends a great setting to each scene, and just... Damn. I wish my writing was half as good as this. Truekry, you have earned my thanks for such an incredible work. Please, never stop continuing this.
The English in this story seems slightly off; I'm not sure why. I've also had to reread some sentences to figure out what you mean. They're technically correct, but worded strangely. Anyway, I'll post some suggestions later
5551226 In the beginning of the story, the author said he was German, so English is likely a second language to him, and thus, he is not as practiced in it as his home language.
At least, that's my hypothesis.
So the story isn't as bad as I thought it was gunna be. When he melted the lock out of nowhere I was scared it was gunna be another case of OP OC, but its at least nerfed through limited resources(hope he doesn't get a means to make a lot though).
What a nice guy