For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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And suddenly a silly Christmas song about ham appears!
Fantastic twist. So time goes by a bit faster in Albion then? Also I guess this could explain the appearance of Humans there as well.
EDIT: Another thought. This time frame could certainly explain why everyone got off on the wrong foot....
3647257 Silly JBL, that's not how you Christmas. Needs more snow!
3647440 But you don't even have snow, do you?
3647453 There's plenty of ice, that's almost the same.
3647457 Hey, we have plenty of ice too..... except it's in the fridge Anyway, enjoy your ice and coldness seeping into your bones! mwahahahaha!
Wasn't should be "was".
Other than that, good chapter! I felt that the ThiemoxAmy thing was kinda over-looked. Like, there should have been a bit more fleshing out of that particular scene. It wasn't a deal-breaker though.
I really hate the ponies in this story. And I like the story more because of it. Good job!
Please don't tell me Twilight's going to brainwash Aura. I'm disliking Applejack more and more
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I think the spell is intended to restore her lost memories.
Always giving the best impressions, right Thiemo?
Most modern humans would have problem wearing the skin of a sapient, even a non-human, except in extreme situations.
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is only looking for a spell that proofs that and Auralia are related.
(Like it was said in the story.)
After Eris´ warning about Celestia. I wonder what reaction will have the Regal Sisters to Thiemo. I hope a little better than:
get 'a' cold
or
'catch a cold'.
Not that I wasn't expecting the romance (the tag kinda gave that away) that was kinda sudden how it happened. There was really no hint as to them becoming attracted to each other in that manner until the last chapter where Amaryllis mentioned that she felt those feelings coming from him (and even then she said that it was mixed in with all these other emotions). With the lack of a build up it made the scene at the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this chapter underwhelming.
~Have a good one.
4427429 Of course there were hints o0
Anyone else seems to have noticed them. You're the first to complain.
I... I hate this so much.
I was really enjoying this story. Honestly. It's good, it's fun, it's long, it's got interesting characters... and now this! It's like trying for foreshadowing without any actual, you know, foreshadowing! It makes me feel like something awful will happen, and there's no way around it, because it already did! It yanks me out of immersion, by having the 3rd person omnisicent narrator adress the audience directly!
I'm not sure if I can continue. It really destroys suspension of disbelief that much for me. Maybe if I skip a few chapters.
I don't mean to be hurtful, but this is, in my opinion, one of the worst tropes ever. Please, if you ever do revisions here, consider deleting that line.
I hope he doesn't teach them English.
Missing quotation mark before "We".
Yes I'm a picky asshole and probably missed out all the other errors somehow.
Anyway, yeah, I should get this finished quite quickly at this rate, I just can't get enough of it