For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Gah! So many question. And so much need to talk! I'm very very concerned for Amaryllis though. She seems fine, but I'm concerned for what it means. Welp, two weeks isn't that long to wait.
Is this phrase correct, or does it mean she (Celestia) had no chance to suceed eradicating humanity? Not sure what side is Megan supporting? is she another pro-ponies mysanthropist?
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! SOOOO AWESOME!!!!
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Made it a little more clear.
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Thanks. Then again, I think may Celestia have wanted to kill all the remaining humans, she could have nuked the island long ago. I assumed the Sun Alicorn, for all her resentfulness, only wanted humans to be contained and in small numbers, never to become a threat to her ponies again .
Weeeeeeee new chapter u make me so happy
Boy, are Megan and Mothma gonna be red-faced when they learn the truth.
There is such a thing as too many humans in a story though, I really hope this earth visit ends soon.
Miscommunication kills, guys. Or a lack of it.
It's been too long...
Gods forbid
I'm just waiting for the confrontation between Megan and Theimo. But I wonder if it'll happen before or after Amy shows up with her new body. I'm kinda hoping before, cause a fight between those two will be fun
Happy to hear the updates will be a little more frequent. I'm having a hard time remembering what the hell has been happening. I'll have to re-read this a bit once I have time.
I'm glad you're still chugging along. I'm more or less done with the show, but I'm still keeping tabs with some of the better fan creations like this story.
im not gonna lie, i like this story i really do...but its kinda taking a bizarre turn. im not sure how im really liking this whole on earth arc .i keep expecting it to end or for it to progress but then somebody else becomes a demon, or an alicorn, or is getting a new power. and it keeps going and going and going (like a bad anime) and im having a hard time following an idea as to where its going to the point that im just literally speeding through chapters and reading half of every other paragraph and im still able to follow the story...and thats bad. sorry if it sounds harsh and like i said i DO like this story. But this arc really needs to get a move on, i mean how long can a fight scene last? But im not jumping ship just yet, still in my favorites and still following. looking forward to the next chapter!
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No one got a new power, turned daemon or anything like that. The last "new" power Thiemo got was in the Empire when he made the pact with Ariel and Undine. And that only allows him to cast air and water related stuff through his totem. For fire and earth he still needs talismans. The only thing that happened is that he tapped into his very nature, at wich was hinted trough out the story so far.
Same goes for Amaryllis. I think most readers could guess who her father was from the start. And with everything we already know about alicorns, this also should be no surprise. Amy just used her knowledge as a changeling and her power as an alicorn.
And concerning Mothma and Megan, both were what they are from the start. This is a story that contains Magic. Of course we will have our magical creatures, daemons and such, but nobody will suddenly turn into one.
The thing with skipping parts... There is such so much going on, that I had to fan out everything. I can't help it.
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I remember that a year ago or so, when I introduced Aschlant everyone wanted that there be more humans in the story. Now we hit the first of two story point that will have more of them, and now people complain. Complete chapter 5 (V) will play on Earth. So you will have to sit through act 19 and 20, then it's done.
6797887 sorry for the negative attitude, I was soo enjoying the story and then that happened and all I could think was 'I hope it's over soon'.
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yeah your right...i dunno but it feels like that...maybe its just because of the update gap (not your fault) that it seems like (to me ) that this arc has like gone on forever and its leaving like, a stagnant taste. Im sure a re-read will put it in a better/different perspective. either way like i said im still on board and awaiting the next chapter with gusto!
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Might as well be. I can't really say, because I didn't have that gap. I have around 90% of the story in my head and 100% in my notes, whom I reading over again and again. Maybe I should put reference links in the description of the newer chapters so people can read up on topics.
Crrrrrrrrrrrrrrispy
FANGIRL SQUEEEEEEEEE
OMG FUCKING God IT LIVESSSSSS
reads right away
Man, it's been so long, I am so confused right now.....all I know is the fact that Megan is coming off a bit (a lot) as a jerk, as she just cooked our main protagonists lover. She done goofed, and know seems to know that they're in fact the GOOD GUYS!!
Humanization.
This story keeps getting worse.
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It would be very helpful if you could elaborate that.
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You humanized(aka made human looking/whatever) Amaryllis.
Then there was that -almost but not quite sex- scene a good few chapters back, I dislike those kinds of things in long-spanning stories...
Mostly, just gripes that I personally dont like.
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Well, that is not the story getting worse, yust hitting topics you don't like. Nothing I can fix.
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It is getting worse for me.
Actually, you can fix it, however that would mean that I either pay you a gratuitous amount of money or that I am one of your closest editors/prereaders.
First of which I wont do and second of which I am not xP
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The amount of money you would need to make me change anything I have planned you don't own. And even my beta reader managed it only once so far.
One reason for that is that I have already finished the story in my notes and I'm too lazy to rework everything.
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Exactly what I meant :P
I wonder now, it's it going to end on the same way as Precious life? Where there could be a good ending instead of what we got.
The fact that you are still working on your stories is heartwarming to me. I know loss. Any work you post is amazing to me.
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A friend drew it for me.
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The important part is the "before" you also quoted. Before he came to the ruins of Cervidas he was on earth.
Age: 16-17 Trainee as a computer scientist.
Age: 17, nearly 18, transport to Equestria.
Age 18 and up: Equestria.
I hope real life doesn't keep you away forever. I can't wait for the next chapter of this amazing story. Please don't keep us waiting too much longer!