For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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I do not know what to comment exactly except "the chapter is goooooooood"
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Was kinda hoping that this would be one of the stories that did not paint the changlings as bad guys. Oh well.
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You realize, the protagonist isn't also one of the good guys?
And what did they do bad? They just doing whats natural for them. Catch food.
I nowhere mentioned any reasons for Chrysalis doings. Only that she likes to have a human around for some kinky things...
In fact, I really like the changelings. Far better than sparkling, non-blood sucking vampires.
They will be a big part of the whole story.
Why do I always sound aggressive when I write English? ... duh...
I don't bite, and I don't mean any harm.
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That whole section seems to really paint them in a antagonistic way. Plus you went the more "uncivilized" society for them. You know, instead of giving them a real underground city you basically gave them a series of caves.
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OK, I have to laugh. Not at you, mind you. Just wait and see what is yet to come.
In German the story is far ahead (Act 5 just finished) and I think you will like how the changelings will work out at the end.
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Okay then. I will trust you on that.
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Congratulation for reaching 100 likes
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Thanks for mentioning it. I corrected the chapters.
Of course I meant the weapon "saber" ("Säbel" in German) and I must somehow mixed them up.
Like:
If you go me on the nerven I put you in a gully and do the deckel druff that you never come back to the tageslicht.
This chapter is cursed. Chrome keeps saying this, and only this out of the 10 tabs I have opened, is unresponsive when it's anything but.
A great chapter either way though, so I look forward to more.
Someday he'll learn to keep his mouth shut...... someday.
Fate is a cruel and sadistic bitch.
........I will not ask how she ended in a cell. I will ask how he knows her!
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So we meet two known canon characters already, damn, and already out poor heroes find themselves in a precarious situation, huhuhu!
One one hand, you'll rot away your days in a cell with TRIXE of all ponies being your companion, on the other, you do Dirty Dancing with a insectoid Horse.
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Anybody wondering which is worse? I can't decide.
And I'm out.
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5663053 Bye
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Bye Felicia