For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Woah this chapter......
Interesting how the avatars behave with thiemo but I suppose its needed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for the update. Now get some sleep!
~8chill
That was one of the single most best things I've ever read!!!!!
Edit. Fuck, re-reading this, I realize how shitty I used to be with grammar.
noice chapter! so i take it His arms are still "normal" in the real world right? zarni is is probably going to be so mad at him for bonding with two spirits xD
I sense something is going to happen soon. Probably just after the final. Or during.
Jeeze, if the wind element has a temper I can't wait to meet the fire element.
Plot twist: He's actually very level-headed
Yeesh Painful
Well, lessons have been learned, and Thiemo got an upgrade. But now I want to see the earth and fire elemental avatars...
This just raises further questions!!!!
Mmmmm i wonder what Eris is going to do with Amaryllis bet....? Plans within plans that 1
at this rate, Theimo is going to need a serious amount of hard drink on getting the Earth and fire elementals, cos theyre going to leave him legless. At least, if hes lucky.
Trouble is, when the Griffin gave its demand, my immediate thought was, I knew some gods had strange requirements due to wishing to feel life, but I dont carry a whip.
That, and a little word to Thiemo about being careful how he behaves in future.
SQUEAK.
I like Ariel the most: stern but fair, unlike Celestia.
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That´s depend of how pissed is the Avatar of Earth for what Thiemo did to her pup.
Yeah, he is fucked.
Wow. The 'gods' of Albion all seem to be massive assholes. Thiemo shouldn't feel humility to be in their presence. Ariel seems to be worthy of her power and authority in the same way a shit stain is worthy of the toilet it sticks to. "I kill all the time, yet you didn't kill in the way I like, therefore I'm going to torture you as punishment," is a seriously messed up way of thinking, regardless of her other reasons. Undine just let it all happen, too. What actually makes Ariel worthy of punishing Thiemo?
These avatars all seem really irresponsible in many ways. Is anyone ever going to wonder, why do we tolerate this? Should the elements even be owned by any one person? Is god x screwing up the world or holding us back?
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Well, for one she is wind, the very air he breathes. She didn't choose to be, she was born that way. And if you would look, none of them would have a belly button. Also, gods are whimsy beings. Oh, I don't like how you're partying, so I will turn everything into salt. I think I did a mistake, so let me flood the whole thing. I think you get the idea. Ariel is a hunter, a warrior. Xena with wings, if you want. She has this idea of honor she values more than anything. A death with honor, like Thiemo denied Blakkur, is like not honoring life for her. And I personally think she is right. Life, even that of a criminal, is life and honorable. Yes, he should be punished, maybe even killed, but not that gruesome. Even our friends in the mighty US and A at least try to do it gently these days. To slay a beast you don't have to be the beast, because then someone has to slay you in the end. Ariel wanted to teach just that.
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I don't think they will want his legs. He has a bond already. Two, actually. He can't form any more.
5743493 I suppose... I was hardly considering Thiemo. Yes he committed evils and shouldn't be able to hurt others without consequence. In the end he's just one little guy with no power though. I was really judging the Avatars with what you've shown us and they're what set me off.
With everything you've established, they are timeless, have immense natural powers, and hold absolute authority. They regularly meddle with mortals and with how you've demonstrated them to act it all just screams disaster. What if one avatar gets snappy and decides to blow up a country, or more? Could they even be stopped? Would could people do? When you relate their amount of power and authority to the behaviour they seem to display then they all just start to look like children with too much of everything for their own good. What happens in 1000 years from now when the societies have grown up? Would Ariel still torture those who she wishes to punish? Even when the rest of society would consider such behaviour to be savage? It looks to me like most of the Avatars are not fit to coexist with normal people.
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Did Ariel hunt Thiemo down to punish him? No, he came to her. He called Ariel to him. He wanted to make a bond and she made her offer. Thiemo brought this upon himself. He called for "divine" punishment.
And at some point I hope people will realize that I don't write anything down. Sometimes, you have to read between the lines, as the saying goes. And other things doesn't need to be said at all.
5742581 sadly, it comes across as a status quo is god kinda deal. The one group with any power that could have rivalled them they pretty much up and cast down the tower of babel because it evened the playing field.
Its a rare thing that out of all the crud, chaos at least is an equal opportunity ***hole in screwing over everyone equally.
I liked this; I appreciate that Theimo is growing as a character. He's slightly more likeable now.
Really good chapter!
Well that was awesome.
I know the cutie has been described in detail but can't remember where. in which chapter was it?
Ariel..... Ah there it is; the return of the fear boner.
Best chapter so far!!! and i still need sleep (5:49) but its for the weak...
The pain was expected. Shamans to become a shaman get dismembered in their trance.