For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Cliffhanger...
Really awesome story
Oh Eris. You cruel cruel monster.
Aura passed OUT?! Noooooo! When do you expect the next update to be? 'Cause from Twi's POV that does NOT look too good and I MUST see how Aura and her adoptive dad will react to the news.
3541146 In about a week's time; I've started on the next chapter already. We're looking to try and have a chapter a week, provided they can be translated quickly enough. We'll see how that goes.
Awesome chapter. I wonder how long it'll take Twilight to figure out who Amy's dad is. I just pictured Amy hugging Twilight calling her auntie
Mistakenly placed a period instead of a comma after hedge
Okay I'll admit it, that picture of Twilight cracked me up more than it should have
Remember when I said you're cruel?
Scratch that.
You're a bloody sick bastard.
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Oh, just wait for the ending of the next chapter
3544846 Your words. They please me.
I am really liking this story. There are lots of very interesting ideas here and I am very much looking forwards to future installments. My only minor gripe with the story is the gender swap on Discord because Eris seems close enough to him in personality for the change to be natural over the years between when we last saw him in the show and when this story is set, especially with the relationship with Fluttershy to smooth over some of the rough edges.
There were also a number of minor mechanical errors in the first few chapters which make the story a bit hard to get into so it would probably be a good idea to clean some of those up if you have the time, although it is not a huge deal and has gotten better over time. The only error I noticed in this chapter was this:
"his" should be "this", the "t" got dropped off the front of it and it slipped by spellcheck.
3555736 GAAAH I HATE IT WHEN I MISS THEM! I guess I will have to commit seppuku now...
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You know it could have been that she was influencing his emotions slightly to get him to agree. Or would that of even worked with you know Human's apparently being naturally resistant to magic. At least that's what I think because it's been said, and then the story has him being held by magic... it's confusing. You can't have him immune to magic (Which is a very good explanation for lack of natural magic.) or not immune and have his own source. (Unless it's been covered that his shaman training reduced the immunity to resistance in exchange for the shaman magics.) Then again it's still a good story.
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He isn't immune to magic. That was a lie from Eris. Thiemo is more like a magical resistor.
Yes, there is some resistance, but with enough force you can overpower it. Even weak casters
could do it. And if he is gets hit by a magical bullet it would still have the same effect: Pain, a lot of it.
Thiemo casting spells, with the help of his talismans, is only overpowering his own resistance and activate the fully loaded gemstones with a spark of magic.
Ok so far i have had to catch up with so many missed chapters.... Still an excellent story though.
I had a weird sort of chill from the picture. You know the feeling. As for your translation of the story; it is very good yet it is still missing a few very flagrant errors. Not many. Just a few.
And the fun begins again!
To be completely honest, that was one nasty smile back there ;P
I scrolled down, saw the face and screamed. (Really, I did)
ITS THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT DONT YOU DO SUCH A SCARY JUMPSCARE THING AGAIN! TT _ TT
>Scrolled down and saw Twilight
OH HELL NO
That twilight face will haunt me for years to come.
NO TWILIGHT!
SCARY NO!
Let the god-teir magic drain begin! And probably another spell?
Sorry for my perverse mind but,that face make think"b*tch I want that booty!".a thing from league of fails if I remember correctly.childishly stupid,but funny.
Aww shiet. Dis is gonna be guud!
(Or bad)
Lavender coat with a dark-purple mane, traversed by a brighter stripe. The mare had both wings and a horn, and a grin on her face that sent a cold shiver down his back.
“Gotcha!”
The pictures that you have here has been removed from the internet if you like to know that I actually do have a solution to fix that if you make a separate Discord server dedicated for stuff like a cloud system where you can post pictures and information it's permanently the best way you can keep pictures from disappearing from the internet I have a more detailed thing on my profile account on here.