For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Thank you kindly good sir, for this more detailed feedback. I really appreciate it and I hope you will enjoy the rest of the ride.
Whooo new chapter!
It looks like things are about to get a bit... chaotic...
Good chapter! I very much look forward to this arc, it looks fun!
(Discord was always my favorite character XD)
I frikin' BEG OF YOU! Update soooooon!!! When you said they woukd eventually meet the Mane 6 I did NOT expect this! I must read more!!!!!
Amazing set up, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter XD
Is it bad if I want Thiemo to beat the crap of the Elements of Racism?
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Hear, hear. I second that motion. All in favor?
On another note I'm really, really, REALLY looking forward to the next update.
DAYUMM..
They are bloody lucky they haven't met 21st century humans.
Still, it may seem that the plot line is a bit clearer. Or am I wrong about Eris being the "MAIN-MAIN thing of the plot line?"
Although it's kinda annoying that something from Equestria has knowledge about humans. But can't really argue about something that could probably shrug of a radioactive nuclear warhead blast, as if it was nothing.
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OP CHAOS MAGIC DAYUMM U
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Well, I don't want to ruin the surprise but no, Eris is not the "Evil" in this story. More the opposite.
We will first learn about the "enemy" in chapter 3 and meet it/him/her way later in the end of chapter 6. And don't you fear, its an OC, with it/his/her own reasons and everything. Nothing stupid like world domination because I want power or something simple and stupid like that.
Yay! New chapter.
On the unrelated note, I understand that this probably could never happen in your story, but after reading some interludes I totally want to see one night stand between Thiemo and Trixie. It will be hilarious.
sorry but your princess is in another castle
3465311 New chapter will be out either tonight or tomorrow.
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WOOO WOO!
Oh, misunderstandings make for fun times! I wonder if our human will be able to talk himself out of this?
I highly doubt it.
What would happen if Theimo's staff absorbed a full blast from the elements?
"But even worse! They don’t like
parties. NO PARTIES!”
This almost(in conjunction with Eris) made me wanna stop reading this story at that exact moment.
Not like any humans want to go to equestria ether...... Or sandwhiches!
3937163 MAGIC LAZA BEAMS!!!
What in the name of Martel was that for, Eris!?
This will not end well for anyone.
Human shaman vs. Alicorn Twilght? Wait, doesn't his staff absorb magic, and need a lot of it? So, twilght spell + staff= insta recharge, right?
4799577 Eris will probably get screwed over in the end. SCREW YOU ERIS!!!!
Hmmm...indeed...
Doing an imitation of me is quite immature, Red. Didn't Mother teach you better...?
3465838 well....they are not wrong either...
Epic battle music:
OH COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THOU HAD TO ADD OUR PET PEEVE TO THIS STORY DIDNT YOU?!?!?!?!?!
Its a great story but really?!?!?! This is the same Twilight who forgave Eris for BRAIN WASHIG HER FRIENDS!!!!!! And she automatically assumes the human in the garden, which went unnoticed by the guards, and the changeling in the garden, also unnoticed by the guards, are evil?!?! AND TO TOP IT OFF ERIS IS BORED!!!!!!! CMON!!!!!!!!!!!! THINK TWILIGHT FOR ONCE IN YOU DANM LIFE!!!!! THINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All in all though, its a great story.
Ahhh, Discord. No matter what your gender is, you'll always be my favorite draconequus.
Funny you should use that phrase.... I have a song completely unrelated to mlp!