For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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The updates on this story is one of the highlights of the week! Although I'm a little impatient I understand perfection can't be rushed ;). Good job as always.
Great chapter as always!
I just have one concern though. When Aura was seperated from her dad in the maze she pretty much freaked out even though she knew he was in the same situation she was. Now I understand that being ina dungeon isn't nearly as bad as banishment or death, but she still seemed way too calm all things concidered.
Another concern of mine: How in the HELL is this story not more popular?! Seriously, 257 likes, this story deserves ATLEAST 2kby now!!!
ich denke, dass dieses ein anderes sehr gutes Kapitel ist.
ps. ich benutze einen Übersetzer.
i used a translator so don't know if i translated this right.
why is Twilight calling Celestia mother?
3607965
Because alternative universe. Read the last few chapters again and you will understand.
(Who else loves the "because magic" explanations?)
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If you wanted to say: "I think its another good chapter" you used him right.
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Well she was freaking out because she feared Eris and the maze. Thiemo was more than once in a cell somewhere, so she is used to it.
But I agree, we're missing a zero behind the 257
3608079 oooohhh, right, sorry.
forgot it was tagged as Alterante Universe
3608079
NO ONE!
3608079 yes, that is what i wanted to say.
3608079
Despite this being an alternate universe, I'm going to have to agree with 3607965. In all of Twilight's friendship reports in the show, she always ends with "Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle." It's pretty clear that she sees Celestia as a mentor figure rather than a parental one.
This is only a small nitpick though. This is a great story and I'll try not to let small things like this detract me from it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
3609105 Nooo, I don't think you understand. In this story, Celestia is literally Twilight's mother.
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If that's true, then I must have read over it by accident.
My apologies!
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Have the Six met Zecora in this universe too? Since she is a zebra shaman, Twilight could have recognized the elemental type magic gems.
3609197 No worries, I had to ask truekry for a lot of clarification in this chapter to try and straighten out Celestia and Twilight's relationship. Seems I was only partially successful.
Definitely an under-rated fic! You deserve some props for this story, it has good characters that are in character and they don't break character just to bring about a plot device. Regardless, nice intermission. I look forward to Thiemo's awakening!
3610225 Maybe one day we can make it to the feature box!
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Quote intermission 5:
But she isn't a shaman, she's a alchemist.
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I didn´t mentioned before, but I´m glad the author portrayed AJ caring and understanding , accepting Aura´s word about how Thiemo has protected her until now, instead of like a steretypical, blockhead racist who believes her little niece has been brainwashed by the evil human.
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AJ is best pony. I would never put her in a bad light. I'm a huge fan of Applejack. Did I say that she is best pony?
3612149 Lol, quite a rare stance there my friend. But I can't argue, all the ponies are well-designed (personality and aesthetics)! Also, AJ is my little sister's fav pony too.
This was a good chapter, but the mother thing seems awkward and unnecessary. I get that it is AU, but it is still a good idea to keep as close to canon as possible because random changes that seem to serve no purpose are rather annoying.
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I think I said it a few times in the comments now. All the changes have a purpose.
In the end all will make sense, I promise.
3613024 First, I distinctly remember reading a comment about the Discord gender flip which basically boiled down to "because I felt like it". There is nothing there which could not have been done just as well without the flip, and leaving his gender alone would have removed an unnecessary layer of confusion. I have been mentally changing him back at every appearance and it has not caused any problems at all.
As for Twilight, it is possible there is something that legitimately requires her to be Celestia's daughter coming up, although that could probably be reworked without too much trouble given all the other ways Twilight is unique. However, if you absolutely had to have Twilight be Celestia's daughter for some reason then a better solution would have been to keep the relationship hidden to add another plot twist later in the story. Slapping the change on now just feels awkward and costs you an opportunity to make the storyline more interesting further down the road.
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All the changes are like: "Meh... I felt that way."
BUT all changes together have a reason. And that is "a plot twist."
I hate it when I have to spoiler...
3613203 I will have to wait and see then, although I am fairly certain I will be disappointed. Character gender is almost never important to any story because the only thing that changes is the ability to get pregnant unless you are a mindless slave to stereotypes. Furthermore, nesting plot twists is always more fun when you can manage it so any twist that requires the parental relationship could be made even more fun by having the existence of that relationship add another plot twist within the first plot twist.
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I honestly don't see why Zecora wouldn't have at least some knowledge on that subject even though it's not what she does. I mean you don't live around someone that long and not learn about their culture even if only a little. (Honestly thinking Zecora would flip if she found out they were imprisoning a shaman. Because from what I've gathered they're pretty high up on the Zebra social ladder and deeply respected.)
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There is a difference between being no hero and being an asshole.
Has he to be a total jerk to be "not a hero"?
sweet pickled garlic flavored comment
This is gonna be GOOD when Tiemon wakes up. I honestly hope that this comment tastes like Jelly beans.
wait hold not if shining armor's not the caption of the guard that means is with cadence? if shining armor is still married to cadence and twilight is his sister and said sister is the daughter of celestia, and cadence is celestias niece, and shining armor and cadence are poring each other. that would mean they are an incest married couple?
Wait, what? I thought the maid was just... unintelligent and uninformed.
5931795 plot hole!!!
6495376 Except... it's not.