For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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I love this story, but I don't like how the ponies act
Rejoice! New chapter. Keep up the great work guys.
Nice update!
Aurelia's actions bother me. On the one hand, I can see this happening. But on the other hand, this feels like a forced plot where Aurelia has the idiot ball because "you didn't take me dad even though you'll probably see me later, so forget you. You can go quickly die in Tartarus, literally." My brain really only sees this setup as a forced conflict rather than something that feels completely natural. Maybe it's because I gave more intelligence and maturity to Aurelia's character than she should have?
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She's 8, what is there to expect? She often is acting taff, but in the end she relies on her father.
Like everyone she has her moments, but again, only 8 years. (And she also thought Thiemo would leave her with the changelings. Thats like her greatest fear, to be left behind. Not surprising if know how she grew up with diamond dogs and never got to know her real parents.)
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Which is why I said I could see it but the writer in me won't shut up and just keeps saying "yup this is just happening to create conflict and prevent the easy escape to the Crystal Empire." Eh, maybe it's because I'm not interested in the chase and want to get to something a bit more interesting in my mind like Shining and Cadance's reactions to their arrival and Shining's daughter.
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Well, the chase is only an introduction for something greater. The journey to the Crystal Empire will take a whole Chapter. 4 acts with 4 to 6 sub-chapters each. (Act 9 -12)
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Like xenophobic assholes? True, specially Twilight ("dammit, why didn´t put them in chains and teleported them to Tartarus. They are making me look bad"). Celestia at least seems to have personal reasons to harbour resentment to humans.
Then again, Thiemo is not making any effort about putting humanity on a good light.
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For Twilights acting there is, again, a simple reason:
1. She is Celestia's daughter
2. She believes everything her mother (Celestia) says (Canon/Fandom/This story. Thats like a law.)
3. Mother saying Humans are bad, so humans are bad. That driven into your skull since you were born. Remember how fast afro-Americans were accepted after Martin Luther King? No? Me neither. (Not that I would dare to compare this man with any of my characters.)
I don't think any German or American should complain how ignorant the character act sometimes. Our ancestors were like that too. And if you failed to notice, this isn't the canon candy-land Equestria. There are two tags saying so: Dark and Alternative Universe. So it is to be expected that the character act a little different.
Ok this is a bit late but why as no one explained about the garden incident as to why the attack happened and Eris was the reason for both groups acting the way they did? If you cant answer I don't mind just curious.
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They know it was Eris but what do you prefer?
1. A chaos god who can be at times a pain in the ass but otherwise helps to protect your country
or
2. A random human whose race is looked at as they were demons from hell
But remember both are guilty (50/50). Eris made him the deal and Thiemo took it.
I love the song. It makes me daydream about Themio running out of Canterlot with the mane 6 hot at his heels
3955112 True but still I get your point
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This makes me think a bit. I'm trying to figure out what character or plot advancement will come from this as it feels like that's a long section for just traveling. I'll reserve judgment but be wary overall. I don't want this story to feel like it's dragging or this should be relegated to a side story rather than part of the whole.
How did Aura know that Theimo was going to the Crystal Empire? Cause I don't think he told her where he was going
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OK, I know this sounds far fetched but it was my thought process at the time I wrote it. (This is translation after all. The original was written months ago.) Its a bit complicated so I hope my English is good enough to explain it properly:
The Crystal Empire is the only thing that is north of Equestria. It's the only country left to up there. (Aura can read a map, seriously )
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OK, I will regret saying this. I know I will, because it's kind of a spoiler:
Everything is connected. This is one big story. One journey.
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Since I have no grudge against and rather like our darker neighbors I am very ashamed to admit I burst out laughing when I read that.
What in tarnation are ya trying ta pull?
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Well sorry, but I'm from Germany and I actually have no idea about the right English term to use.
We say: "Schwarzer" what would roughly translate to: "black guy".
So I used Google and almighty Google said afro-american is usable term. Wiki agreed me too:
I hope that was what you were talking about, because otherwise I'm clueless.
3963722 Really? Wow. I did not know that. What passed through my head was this:
farm7.staticflickr.com/6039/6270121480_806b115943_z.jpg
I have nothing against Afros, but an afro haircut is amusing most of the time.
Why Afro-american is a term I shall never know.
...in fact doesn't that imply they all have Afros?
Anyway. I just didn't know that term. And because Some of them get touchy on percieved racism I must, again state that I like our darker neighbors. If I crack jokes, imply things, or laugh at something that I perceive as funny (read: really funny) I crack just as many jokes at lighter people.
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We never stop learning.
if i were to make a prediction on the ultimate result for Timo, the elements started his change into a pony and over time, different parts of him will change. Ultimately he will end up as an alicorn when he binds his soul to nature, becoming the god (or as close to a god as a mortal can get) of nature.
but thats just my theory. Can wait for more updates.
3982647 It was stated before that Thiemo will stay human.
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dam.....back to the theory board
Aura, you broke too fast I am dissapoint.
What the frickin hell?! Why does everyone hate Theimo? Steal elements, Eris did that. Sure Celestia has reasons, and why is everyone so set on Tartarus? Eris, Nightmare, only Tirek went to Tartarus and Theimo didn't even do half the things he did! Am I missing something?
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Then who's the Blue pony surrounded in the cover?
Did you mean: would
Who should I pm future errors to because I don't want to spam the comments too much?
Oh...i think Dash is a lesbo. but also have became a mother. now that new...
*start crying little* Woa....It remind me....the past...about 6 year ago, a game..it call Alundra 1 - 2 and Suikoden. When i play that game...my adventure...my friend...we adventure to seaching...then...next was a song...when i play...i have a chosen right thing...friendship. or maybe betray. my answer...was a Journey's End..that was a day, A ending.that was...end, i remove my console and never touch PS 1...until then.
my childhood.
God...mother....FUCKING....DAMNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTT
God damnit aura, you snitch
4971389 Agreed.
The inconsistency (at least without explanation) is maddening.
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I know this is way too late and story has finished, you likely finished but i have not but must add this:
There is no inconsistency, Celestia scared Thiemo to act to her plan with a threat of draconian punishment, this is something bad people do to coerce people who do not want to call bluffs.
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This Celestia is a benevolent evil tyrant, she doesn't hold herself to the pillars of the country she has built because she is above them as its sole protector. She doesn't view herself as equal to her sister or to Twilight and thus holds herself to a different standard.
This is a common theme in fanfics, it also makes sense for her to be this way in a world filled with strife, to fight monsters one must also become a monster.
The other alternative is that she truly is a paragon of the virtues she built her nation upon, but even Lauren Faust's story writing proved that isn't true, in Season 1 of MLP G4 we know for a fact that Celestia doesn't embody the virtues of the elements of harmony anymore, she used them to seal her own sister away for a thousand years, but can't use them again.