For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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Aura's an evil little genius.
Because hiding something like this is always a good idea, and will not reveal itself at the most inconvenient time
The options they have with teh copper is that he was too embarrased being made a fool of. Or worse, he called it in as someone trying to make a fool of the force.
6119416 Yes, really, and DO NOT refer to me as such. I detest any and all racial slurs.
Darnit all. I just shotgunned the entirety of this story in a few hours and now I want more. Thanks for a great tale and I'll look forward to reading your future chapters!
Also, for the strangest reason I'm imagining Danielle growing wings...
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http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SecretlyDying
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So you couldn't get through half this chapter, but you got through the rest of the story? Or did you just skip through everything to this one chapter. Or is this one of those little mix-ups where you are commenting on the first chapter but it's showing up here?
6120250 It was a mix up. The premise wasn't bad, in fact it was unusual enough to have good potential. Unfortunately every character turned out to be an absolute ass-wipe bigot early on so I decided to save myself a bunch of ranting and raving and just Downvoted it and stopped reading.
Er....what hints?
I forget, sometimes, that a lot of the world uses the 24 hour clock. I guess it's just one of those things that eventually every other country be doing, and we'll still be clinging to the out dated, less efficient system... like metric.
6119697 jeezus fucking christ... how do you manage to read over 400k words in a few hours? teach me sensei!
That meeting with Lauren will go just swimmingly, i'm sure...
6112130 Grammatical errors are because this is german to English
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Oh Jesus 107 weeks. Has it been that long?
I'm a lot more professional with my tastes at least. Lel.
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No, there isn't a translation.
Pregnant. How? Magic.
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So I just remembered that Amaryllis zapped the hell out of Danielle on accident in an earlier chapter. Possible exposition anyone?
Seeing my previous comments, I wonder what in this story pissed me off so much.
Let us see as I pick this story up again after five months.
6132488 where have I seen you before? And that would be hilarious.
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Not knowing what lore the author has in reguards to magic used on a non-magic target, I can only speculate that getting a blast in the face is equivalent to a heavy dose of hard radiation coming out of a reactor. Will she grow an extra arm, develop super powers... or get cancer? Dunno. They way this story goes, I'd put my bits on option 2, if only for the lulz and because it'd make our pony-tailed protagonist irked. (Because fate loves screwing with him at every turn)
You have no license, no passport, and your smuggling aliens into one of the biggest cities on the planet...and you drive poorly enough you get pulled by a cop? Nice going.
After seeing jbls work on bad Monday's I expected more hilarious inappropriateness, alas t'is but a fond dream but t'is a dream nonetheless.
What did she see?! Ermahgerd! Cluffhangeirs!!
6139915 nah, if like radiation, her hair would be falling out.
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I think she's just having her menstrual period. No pregnancy, no radiations, only her menstrual period.