Kill Joy
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........everyone.....back away slowly.......
........everyone.....back away slowly.......
1778855if it isn't for you, then it isn't for you I guess.
First clop fic, so notes are appriciated.
Have a good one
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Thanks.
I came.
Also, rape is bad, MMkay?
Huh, well, he got the same name... but I don't do clop
*blank face*
*nearly inaudible* moar plz
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M'kay
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Hi KillJoy!
I did say we had diffrent styles. Hope your holidays are going well.
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To everypony else, thanks for the support! I was really unsure about how this first one would go
I'll do anouther installment ASAP.
Have a good one!
1779372 moar plz moar plz moar plz moar plz moar plz moar plz moar plz
*resets minds needle* MOAR PLZ I love the prospect of the story and yadda yadda yadda
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Well since you asked so nicely, okay
I'm actually typing it out now, suggestions?
1779443 maybe seeing what she dreams? That might be interesting.
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I have been considering that as an epilog or something. The problem is that most sleeping drugs don't allow for rem sleep to manifest itself. Still I'll probably include something. The ending will be nice, that much i know.
1779480 well if you made up the drug it can have any side affects you want (or none)
Well... no gore thankfully... so I guess its cool with me!
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...
Aaaaaannnd we have an epilog
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No, I'm not really into gore, mostly clop stuff.
1779572 YAY!
:P
It's kind of sweet despite being rape. I think it would be interesting to see Twilight finding out about this. Maybe she'd even like it.
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I guess we will see...
Try this for fun: read the last part of the story's description in Photo Finish voice: "If any of that is not for you, then go!"
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ba ha ha ha
wut? Wut iz so funny?
(snicker)
wut?
ha ha ha, stop it, stop he he, i'm gunna pee, knock it off!
ger
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Yes, its INCOMPLETE
Well that was surprisingly good, keep it up
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Oh... Well... Um...
Balls
For the sake of continued story line(author bs) lets just say that the magic that lets them talk also instills a gag reflex...
"that makes sense right?"
-Mr. Cake
1780069wait a minuet, i've been following your story the discord mind control one! I love your work!
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Well, everything else I've done is significantly softer, so I hope you don't mind
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No, no, but i try to keep on the lighter side of dark.
In any event, use mayor mare photo, its unusual and cool.
Anal? Enema? I'm in! Will read later!
This story does seem rather interesting.
Hell, I'll favorite it because it's good and the concept is unique.
not bad, i like it
jokes on Spike tho, Twilight was awake for the whole thing but she likes it
more please
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Moar
muffins!
1784602fixed sorry
1779480 its a world with magic, talking and flying ponies... will the effects of our worlds sleeping drugs realy tie you down?
meh i liked it ill follow it i guess.
I love this. But I hope we can see what happen if Twilight ever wakes up or if Spikes is going to use a more dark approach in the future. Otherwise, this might get boring soon.
And honestly I don't see the point of the "Dark" label. Ok, he did raped Twilight but is not like she noticed at all. She even end's up enjoying it
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no this one isn't going to be all that drawn out. The next chapter goes deeper into the Dark tag, i think. But in my defense, Sleep Rape is a fairly dark notion. But again the next chapter will have a lot more content such.
have a good one.
I love it. Moar plz
Great read! Can't wait for more! Huge turn on!
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No need to worry about it. As a matter of fact I usually aboid "Dark" stories. Specially if there's a villian involved, cuz usually the hole story is about nothing but "Villiand is overpower and rapes the shit out of Twilight, the mane six, the Princesses, and Twilight, SPECIALLY Twilight". And it boring
What I tried to say is that, if you're going to keep Twilight asleep for the rest of the story (the clop parts), I don't the point of more chapters at all, rather than just show how Spike rape her in different ways. I would love to see some romance or some dramatic dilemas bloom aout of all of this. Just saying.
in any case, keep it up.
I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store. You'd think after all this time he'd actually have sex with her. Here's to hoping he'll try that next chapter!
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for now I will continue as I have been and get the next chapter out with spike finishing this first session of activity. After that I may continue on, getting some story in, I have a bunch of new ideas that might be fun to try.
it's interesting, originally I meant for this to be a simple two chapter clop with an open ended conclusion. But a lot of viewers seem to like the idea of this thing turning into longer story with romance and betrayal and all that juicy stuff.
Thanks to every pony who read and liked and Favorited and commented. this all means a ton.
you all rock!
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Like i said. Is just a small suggestion. A matter of tastes more than anything else.
But in the end, only you can decide what may or may not be in the story. For this is your story, and I'm not part of it.
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I'm sorry to say that there were many many more errors than this; you need a proofreader.
Ignoring all the spelling, grammar, and word choice mistakes, however, the story is alright.
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It's normally also almost impossible for a pony to vomit... yet we had half of Ponyville barfing away merrily(?) after the baked bads incident, among other examples. I say Equestrian ponies apparently operate on a different basis.
This story shows well that one of the key issues of rape is the power trip, I think. That seemed to spur on Spike just as much, if not more so, than the purely sexual component. After all, he (in his own mind) gave "his" Twilight a hornjob to reward good behaviour while he "used" her. I'm not sure it's possible to build a relationship out of this that is based on anything but a sense of possession and entitlement; Spike doesn't seek a partner, he wants a toy/pet for the purpose of self-gratification.
I'm afraid the only way this can escalate is downward. It will be interesting to see just how far Spike'll go; he's already drugging his caretaker to rape her body. Maybe he gets tired of a fairly unresponsive pony at some point - what options then are available to keep Twilight if not willing, than at least powerless to resist? Sleep-hypnosis, memory altering drugs? We shall see.
1787178 your entirly correct, but I've only been here a few days. Is there a group for clop proofreaders?
1787547 unless i drag others in, but that might get too complicated. For now i'm going to try and finish the next chapter. I will point out that Spike, like most of us, may seperate out his sexual feelings with his platonic feelings. But i'm not going to give anything away.