A Queen's Final Revenge

by Little Wood

Chapter 16

A Queens Final Revenge

Chapter 16

Celestia was pacing in her study. She didn't know what to do. She looked up at a picture, expecting it to help her think faster, but just looking at it made her think more and more. She felt so bad about this happening, but at the same time angry. "Why did this have to happen?" Celestia thought.

She sat down to think a bit. Luna walked inside, quietly sitting beside her sister.

"Sister? Why don't you come for dinner? It could ease your mind," Luna called. Celestia thought about it, and she closed her eyes. Before Luna could reply, Princess Celestia smiled. "I don't think it will. But can you bring a cup of tea please? I'm really thirsty for something hot," Celestia asked warmly.

Luna stood up with a soft smile, and walked out the door to get the tea. Celestia put her head on a soft pillow, and thought of Ponyville. Ponyville without the Changelings.

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Twilight wouldn't sleep. She was too worried about her new subjects health and being. Thoughts also raced in her mind about so many things. She hoped that everything was okay for the Princess. "Why can't this process take less time?”

Twilight trotted toward the small pile of blankets to sleep on. Maybe she could dream of everything okay.

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Luna came back with the tea, but found her sister silently sleeping peacefully. Luna smiled and went back the way she came, thinking to herself of many different things. But mostly of her sister..

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Twilight woke up looking around, taking in her surroundings. As she did, she found a bowl of soup with a little card lying by the bowl.

Twilight began towards the bowl cautiously, in case this was a trap from somepony. She got close enough to see the card.

A small envelope with her name written on it. Her name written on it. Twilight picked up the envelope in her hooves, ripping it open. Her hoof trembled as she read the letter.

After reading it twice now, she couldn't move or speak, but stand there, in amazement thinking of different things. She heard a soft sound, letting her know the page fell.

Twilight felt many emotions in her, teasing her, but filling her with energy.

Dear Twilight Sparkle;
We have great news. Not for you, but for us.
We have found out how to reverse the transformation. We will do you last for your convenience!
Sincerely, Captain Black Shield

Twilight trembled at the sight of the letter, but composed herself. This had to be done if she wanted to keep the truce her and Celestia had set up. She trotted up to the bars and cleared her throat to get the guard’s attention. He immediately looked at her with a glare.

"Can you please dispose of this letter? I have no use for it." Twilight demanded. The guard looked at her like she was kidding, but saw the letter. Twilight had her eyes closed so the guard took the chance to roll his eyes before grabbing the letter from her hoof with his magic, and threw it away.

The lavender mare opened her eyes and saw the letter being thrown into a wastebin. She nodded her head and could think of nothing else to do, so she looked outside her cell window.

She didn’t want it to be like this. She saw the landscape of Equestria. How could it come to this? Ponyville was destroyed. She’d become Queen of the Changelings who were being turned back into ponies, and let's not forget the big war with her and Celestia. She was a disgrace to everypony, she decided to lay in her cot and dream of everything peaceful. Not like this.

Author's Note:

Sorry this took a while and for the short chapter! I have some things I'm doing outside of the internet and I'm busy with it! Hope you like it!
Big thanks to Jake the Dog or Acriimony for proofreading this!
~Little Wood

Comments

[Mauser1888]

Great to see this finally updated! Hopefully there will be some more.

[Shard The Ice]

I guess this chapter is to better express the feelings of Twilight, and Celestia.

[Nick613]

Just glad updates have started again!

[Discord_Lexia]

More please. it says incomplete not on hiatus or cancelled, sooooo

[Little Wood]

4723510 I'm trying to write! I've had writer's block for a bit, so I can't really find what else to write. I'll try though! And I'm glad that you want more!

[Discord_Lexia]

4725778 Thank you for replying. Now I know this isn't dead. Just do what you can, we can't ask any more.

[Kichi]

This is going to continue, right?

[Little Wood]

4834521 Yes! I'm kinda on a short hiatus for a bit, though it doesn't say. In about 3 weeks from now, I'll begin writing then!
~LW

[Kichi]

great! I readed this story two times already and I could hate to read it a third time because the next chapter is in the next year.

At least this continue, Thank You

[Little Wood]

5132075 Thanks! I'm trying to continue... but I can't with some limitations...

[quipdoesmc]

This is such an awesome story!! yay
I like the fact you included luna, Luna Is Best alicorn princess.
and there is the pare where you have solar flare, SOOO AWESOME
Well i love this story and i hope you can get back to updating it soon.
nothing bad going on here

[Little Wood]

5400466 Thank you for the encouragement! I'm trying to get ready for the season and stuff, trying to get everything organized. I'm going to try to finish off this story especially! Thanks again!

[quipdoesmc]

little wood. That's Glad to know.
I have a few ideas on what could happen next, but its your story so you can choose, but if you need ideas i will be happy to share.

And why isnt there a Luna emoticon? you have Applejack, Photo Finish, Ugh... Derpy, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Scootaloo, THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE, Twilight Sparkle, Twist, Sweetie Belle, Princess Celestia, and Big Mac. WHERE IS LUNA!?!?!

[Little Wood]

5400526 I don't know why the creators haven't added it yet... But please PM me your ideas!

[King of Kings]

Are there any plans to complete this story? I ask because I am going to favorite this because the plot behind it sounds interesting. HOWEVER, until it is completed, I am going to give it a thumbs down. Because while I may approve of the plot behind the story, I DO NOT approve of the fact that it has been 7 months, 1 week, and 1 days since the last update. I mean, I understand that greatness can't be rushed, but needing 192 days in order to update the next chapter means one of three things. A: You've given up on the book (this is the most likely scenario). B: You’re too busy to write any more (this is understandable). Or C: You're dead (this is a scenario with a 50% probability chance, seeing as how people die every day.) If option C makes you feel uncomfortable than that means two things. You are obviously not dead, and I am sorry for having that as one of the three possibilities. Also, don’t give up! Your fans deserve better! I, of course, meant that in the best and most encouraging possible way. (This comment has been copied and pasted for the sake of saving time, HOWEVER the plot behind your story does sound interesting, the only reason that I mentioned the fact that it has been copied and pasted for the sake of saving time is because it is usually used for stories that have been sitting for a much longer period of time, for example, stories that have been sitting for 2 years, 4 months, and 29 days [i only say this in case I sound unduly pushy]).

[Little Wood]

5483844 Well, I am sorry, but I have been really busy. I have a life too, which I need to maintain. I am currently in school(on of my most important year too) but again, I am sorry. Please be patient as I will try to write as much as I can.
Good day.

[No more account]

5483844 Trust me I know how hard she works, We are both in the same grade, and the work is SO. FREAKING. HARD. She is one of the most brilliant girls I know, We have 6 courses that we can't afford to fail! So don't rush her. btw, You aren't encouraging her your doing the exact opposite. So be nice to Woodie and I'll be nice to you.

[Little Wood]

5511825 Thanks! I'm sorry for the spelling errors, as I haven't written most of the story. But, thank you either way!

[LuckyPen296]

Please write more!

[Little Wood]

5537595 I'm trying! Hard to have school and writing at the same time! I'm trying my best!

[LuckyPen296]

5537683
Thanks! I know how it feels. I have a million ideas, but only one is done! you need a bright smile for inspiration and encouragement!

[iside]

troppo bella come storia io nn vedo l'ora di leggere come finirà ma spero che le amiche di twilight rimangano come lei

[Lord Sergal]

I feel like this could have been solved so much more easily if Twilight just recreated the heir spell and used it on Celestia. That way, she could only destroy the race that she hates by destroying herself.

[Jep_Pearl]

5537683
When does next chapter come out

[Slavenger Karl]

This is the wierdest story I've ever read. Technicly good idea and I can see nice planning of it but the execution. It could be set up better for the good moments...

[Nick613]

Hope this story hasn't been abandoned

[fanreader999999]

2012

[Nitro19]

Good story, I'm curious as to what happens next.