A Queen's Final Revenge

by Little Wood

Chapter 14

A Queen's Final Revenge
Chapter Fourteen

Twilight was utterly and completely screwed.Solar Flare was sending so many spells at her at once it was like she was at the end of a live firing range. She would dodge to the left only to come with two inches from another bolt of magic. No matter what she did she couldn't get a shot in."This isn't good I need a plan."

"What's wrong Miss Sparkle, you seem distracted?" Solar Flare called out in a mocking tone that made Twilight's blood boil.

"I can't even get close to her, and I don't have the energy to both dodge and attack. What am I going to do here." Twilight thoughts were interrupted by the need to dodge yet another bolt magic.

"Now, now Twilight it's very rude to not pay attention in class, you really must try harder." At that point Solar Flare charged her magic, her horn glowing the brilliant red of a dying sun. In a great flash the magic was released upon a unprepared landscape, destroying all that lied in its path.

Solar looked all around for her prize but found no sign of the young queen.

"Guess I must'v overdone it." Solar Flare looked over the now charred landscape disappointed."And I was so looking forward to seeing her in that maid outfit." Solar Flare turned around preparing to lay wast to the remaining changelings when she saw a pink blur in the corner of vision. She turned a full one-eighty to try and get a glimpse of whatever it was that she had saw.

She saw nothing behind her, nothing in front of her, and nothing to her sides. So the question was: what was it that she had seen? After a few minutes of pondering on this she decided to bush it of as nothing, but then she saw it again. Right in the corner of her eye, just outside of proper vision. She once again spun around to try and see the pink blur. She once again found her efforts fruitless, as she turned to see nothing in her line of sight, but this time something was different. Something was behind her she could feel it.

Before she could turn around to investigate whatever it was behind her, she felt a knife on her neck and a pony on her back.

"Why hello there Miss Pie, long time no see. How's the family

"What was it that you said last time we spoke?" Pinkie asked venomously. "Oh yes, I remember now 'Cut the pleasantries', so while you do that I'll cut your throat." Pinkie hissed.

"Oh my dear Pinkie there are many thing wrong with that, one of them being that you'll find it quit hard to cut my throat." Solar Flare Stated in a pleasantly calm tone.

And just as the goddess had said Pinkie ran her blade across the pristine white throat, and not even the alicorns fur was nicked.

"Told you." Solar Flare said coldly as she flung the pink haired changeling off her back and onto the charred earth behind her. Then goddess turned around to face the Predator, but when she did she saw something that would even unnerve the great Faust. She saw the black chitin of the usual changeling, but instead of the matted poof of a mane that Predator usually sported, the pink hair was perfectly strait, hanging almost to the ground. And then there were the eyes. Those eyes stared into her very soul, forcing her to relive all she'd ever done in a new light. It was torture in it's purest form.

What finally broke Solar Flare from the torcher that was the changelings eyes was a voice,"Well then, if I can't slit your throat then I guess I'll just have to try harder to kill you."

Solar Flare, having been broken from the spell of the eyes, stood at her full height. Glowering over the formally pink changeling."I'd like to see you try child." she stated as she charged her horn with what seemed to be a endless supply of magic.

"You'll see a lot more than me just trying!" Pinkie screamed at the goddess as she pulled out her party cannon."Fire in the hole!!" Pinkie yelled as she pulled the rip cord on the party cannon sending not confetti, but five-hundred steal nails in the direction of the sun goddess goddess.

Solar Flare merely stood in place as the nails that were supposed to kill her bounced off.

The two stood in place for a while, Pinkie with her mouth agape, Solar Flare with her mouth in a smirk.

Celestia trotted up to the to the changeling and used her hoof to close Pinkie's mouth."Now, you really must close your mouth, if you don't it'll have to be a closed casket service." Solar Flare finished her threat with a grin that could drive mere mortals to insanity

Good thing Pinkie was already insane.

__________

Twilight slowly slithered away from the battle ground, in pain and anguish. As she sneaked away from her imminent death, hoping that she'd get to live just a little longer, she felt real unbridled fear. So she ran. Ran from her pain, from her tears, from her hatred, and most of all, from her fears.

And yet, as she ran, she could not escape any of these things. If anything they were getting worse. She felt pain growing by the second. She felt tears welling in the rims if her eyes. She felt her hatred for Celestia and Luna both rising to a climax, but most of all she felt fear. She felt fear for the deaths of her children, for the deaths of her friends--If she could even still call them her friends--she felt fear for what she would have to do to keep her children safe. In fact the only thing she did not fear as she ran was her own safety. Funny how family can do that to a mare.

Nearby she could feel the presence of one of her best. "What's Fluttershy doing way out here?", she thought to herself as she changed her trajectory to intercept Fluttershy. A few minutes later Twilight came up to the once timid changeling, who was in the middle of tearing a enemy soldier in half with her voice.

"-RO DAH"

Fluttershy had been busy, to put it lightly. Corpses, corpses every where. Twilight looked out over the field of limp bodies in disgust, horror, and regret. Some of them were torn to pieces, others where decapitated, there were even some ash piles lying around that Twilight could only assume were once ponies, but they all had a single thing in common. They were undoubtedly and undeniably dead.

Twilight stood frozen in place by not only the fear of the once timid changeling, but also guilt. Guilt given to her from the knowledge that, whether she was the one covered in the blood of the innocent or one of her many children, The innocent's blood was still on her hooves. She looked over that field of blood and battle suddenly feeling the gravity of what she had done. She looked over that field of blood and battle realizing that the weight of all there souls would forever be on her back, her weight to carry and her's alone. So she stood frozen unable to move away from the blood soaked Fluttershy that had begun making her way toward the young queen.

As Fluttershy looked into the eyes of her queen Twilight saw something within them. Something she quit grasp or describe, but something none the less.

"How does it feel Twilight?" Fluttershy asked in as venomous tone she could muster against her queen."To know that all this death, all this suffering, lies on your back and your back alone. I can see you buckling under the weight of there souls, your knees shaking, your brow sweating, your mind sinking into there anguish. This Twilight is what it feels like to kill innocence." Fluttershy hissed as she circled the purple Changeling.

"But.....t-th-they aren't innocent! They kill us as if we are nothing but animals." Twilight managed to eek out through her fear.

"Oh, but that's where you're wrong. They kill us as if we are animals because they know no better. None of them have ever had friendly relations with a changeling before, and on top of that they are fed lies by the tyrant Celestia. So what would you expect of them, mercy?" Fluttershy looked into Twilight's eyes once more and the queen saw that spark again but this time she knew what it was.

Pity

Author's Note:

So for those you that don't read my blogs or check the story until it updates, I'm not dead. I've just been on hiatus for a while, but hokey has finally ended, school is letting up and I'm happy to announce: I'm back. So this, in my opinion, is the best chapter I've written yet. If you agree fav, up vote, and please for the love of Faust COMMENT. Your comments are the best part of writing this crap, and although I still don't understand why you all like it so much, I love you for it.

Thanks to all of you for sticking with me through the hiatus, and have a wonderful evening/morning/afternoon.

Comments

[Buckshot2825]

to parody a christian song
"Our authors not dead, he is surely alive, and hes living his life; writing like a mad man!
ahem *cough* anyways this is a unique story idea and i have already favourited it (im using proper english spelling auto correct DEAL WITH IT) i look forward to new chapters also i found 1 error, but since im not "officially" editing this i wasnt actually looking so there may be more or there might not be
"from the torcher that was the changelings " torcher = torture
anyways,
toodalo!
Your Faithful Comedian
-Buck

[Stiggerzz]

shits goin' down

[Arctic]

2320781>>2320802
You are so very right and may I say it's good to see you again
2320749
Thanks for catching that and I loved that song thing very funny

[Stiggerzz]

2320864
indeed...t'has been a while

also, that "on hiatus" is very discerning

[Arctic]

2320937
Oh yea forgot to take that down lol ty

[Stiggerzz]

2320956

[Heartless]

AW YEAH!
It's back baby!

[Chaotic Mind]

I hope things look up in the end but I doubt that from the looks of things.

[Buckshot2825]

2320864 no problem just doing what i hate doing XD
Thanks for the recognition though :) glad to see that my humor applys to everyone not just me

[SeventhBrony]

so when is Luna come in and put a end to tia? Ive lways wondered what REALLY went down with Luna when she turned into Nightmare Moon

[Bigou]

"She her pain growing by the second." I suppose it's "She feel her pain growing by the second."

Otherwise, that story is still as good as before.

[Arctic]

2321163
You know it baby
fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/223/d/b/gangnam_gif___hoof_pump_like_a_boss_by_1n33d4hug-d5arapv.gif
And don't worry I still have your OC for cammeo

[tvman1254]

Okay did I miss somthing

[Arctic]

2323912
What do you mean good sir. Oh and it's nice to see you again, long time no see

[tvman1254]

2324103 nice 2 c u 2 the entire last 3 or 5 paragraph just didn't sit right in my mind

[Arctic]

2328240
Like with Fluttershy being all bitchy or the the amount of soldiers she killed or maybe it's even to way in which her victims died. In any case I would love it if you could figure out exactly what you thought was wrong with it so I can endeavor to do better in future chapters

[tvman1254]

2328345 well I'm finally get in caught up with school so your mask cover should be ready in 2 weeks it would be done earlier but I'm going to Chicago for VA

[Arctic]

2328396
Thanks for that cover again man and I hope you have fun in Chicago

[selene1234]

Congrats on not being dead and now that i got SC2 Heart of the Swarm, Twilight Reminds me of cartoonish version of Kerrigan

[Arctic]

2335888
I'm out of ponies do describe the hilarity of this shiznit so I will end with this *ahem*
encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTzJcd4Gtq_FkxnLUsUXBLcjlHtvGjnCVbXUIJsjhRuMBSjop9WjA

[Arcadia Arcanum]

2336252 thank you

and while we are talking about music tell me what you think of this ( and no i didn't make the video or music it plays )

[Arctic]

2352675>>2352943>>2353004>>2353061>>2353118>>2353164
Thank you I'll go through and fix these as soon as I can.

[Arctic]

2353061
I would also ask Hasbro how they know what a bullet is

Fast forward to the thirty second mark

[the monkey ninja]

She saw nothing behind her, nothing in front of her, and nothing to her sides. So the question was: what was it that she had seen.

This sentence ends with a question, therefore it should end with a question mark. Also, when I read this I was thinking one certain thing...

"You are fighting creatures that have wings. LOOK UP DUMB ASS!!!

[Arctic]

2357263
Thanks for catching that *fixes*. You know at this rate you might as well be my editor

[the monkey ninja]

2357291
I can spare time a bit of time every day to read awesome stories about ponies. Or changelings. Or dragons. Or HiE. Or Draconequui. Or...

I think you get the idea.

[Arctic]

2357354
You sir make me laugh

[the monkey ninja]

2357436

[GetJinxed]

lol! skyrim reference! also, NOW Twilight starts to think about what she did. That seems to happen at the worst times for everyone and everypony, doesn't it?

[Arctic]

2395628
They say hindsight's 20/20

[GetJinxed]

2399862 pretty much lol

[Stiggerzz]

2441430
true

[Luigilewis889]

I read to chapter five, then lost my ability to continue due to processing error.

Translation: Sooooo confused right now... And in a good way.

[Enderstorm]

2772626 saying thats an understatement is an even bigger understatement

[SkyHighFlyer]

I'm going to be hopeful that this isn't dead and say that I anticipate more from you soon

[1st Lieutenant Dave]

2909355 nothing realy i just wasnt expecting the randomness, but other than that nothing really.

[Arctic]

2913535
I do enjoy random

[1st Lieutenant Dave]

2913548 same here

[Arctic]

2916346
I try

[Empty Page]

For a second I thought Tia recognized Pinkamena, , but I guess not.