A Queen's Final Revenge

by Little Wood

Chapter 10

A Queen's Final Revenge
Chapter Ten

Twilight watched as her newest Predator trotted up the stairs, no doubt to apologize to his wife for his previous drunkenness. Twilight slowly trotted out of Cadenza estate, elated that she had finally found a way to truly help her brother out of his depression.

"Pinkie what's your status? Have you secured Time Turner?"

"Yes ma'am. Mission accomplished!"

"Okay good. Fluttershy how about you do."

"Oh things went fine over here."

"And what of Celestia?"

"She saw me."

"Well we'll worry about that later, for now let's worry about getting to the train, you'll both get a full debriefing there."

"Yes ma'am."

"Okie-dokie-lokie!"

Twilight continued to trot through the crowded streets of Canterlot. The city was quite peaceful, unaware that a changeling walked in their midst thinking of just how stupid they were. They're all oblivious. They have no true purpose, no calling, yet they kept on going. They'll keep going and going through their pointless lives until the day they no longer do. She would have thought further, but she heard guards yelling behind her. It's okay they don't know I'm a changeling. Celestia probably sent them out because she saw Fluttershy.

She was right, of course, they were out on the hunt for Fluttershy and another changeling they could find. Twilight decided to pick up the pace ever so slightly, not enough to look suspicious but like she was late for a train. The guards continued to gain ground, as they chased down Twilight.

"Miss Sparkle, Princess Celestia had requested your audience." said one of the two guards as he put his hoof on her shoulder.

At that sentence Twilight's deceptive little head popped an idea. "Of course take me to her." "Pinkie, Fluttershy. Head home without me, I have something to attend to here. If there's a problem back at the hive Fluttershy's in charge."

"Yes ma'am."

"Oh come on why does Fluttershy get to be in charge. I want to be in charge! I want to be in charge!

"Pinkie stop whining and get over here. I might need some back up if this thing goes sour."

"Yes Twilight, but why does Fluttershy get to be in charge."

"Because she doesn't whine, now get over here."

"Sure Twilight!" Pinkie said as she jumped our of the bush Twilight and the guards were passing.

"Wha!" exclaimed both the guards at once.

"Don't question it guys, if you do it just gives you a head ache. She'll be accompanying me to me the Princess."

"Okay, but if she's coming with us please tell her not to do that?"

"Of course."

They continued to trot over the cobble stone streets, Twilight exited for some personal time with her teacher, the guards happy that their shift would be over after this delivery, and Pinkie going crazy trying to hold in her energy. Then they saw it. The castle in all it's glory. They walked through the front gate continuing their trek to the main castle.

As they walked through the front door Twilight got the feeling that something was going to go wrong. She decided to ignore that feeling and tell herself that it would work itself out. She had no idea how right she was the first time. They walked through the grand halls, admiring the the gilded arches, the pillars shimmering as pearl, and the breath-taking stain-glass windows telling the story of their fair country as they passed by.

Eventually they came to a magnificent marble door adorned by a gilded sun. Using magical auras of gold and blue, the guards opened the door to revel a equally beautiful room. The wall were of the purest pearl adorned by a-thousand golden, the ceiling was covered in the most beautiful mural either of the two changelings had ever seen. It was a cloudless sky of the purest blue, and in it's center was a golden sun radiating rays of silver light throughout the design. It truly was the most aw-inspiring thing either of the two had ever seen, but the true beauty of the room lied not in the amount of precious metal used in its making but in the entity occupying the center of it. Celestia in her purest form, unspoiled by her usual regalia. Her coat shone white, making pearls jealous, her prismatic mane waving in a wind that wasn't there, and those shining pink eyes. The eyes that could dig into your very soul and pull out your most prized secret with merely a glance.

As the two former ponies entered the room they took all this in and more. Twilight was still worried as Celestia motioned for them to take a seat. Twilight and Pinkie did as instructed as the guards left the room to stand guard. "So Princess what would be the honor of our visit."

"Cut the pleasantries Twilight, I know something's going on and I want to know what." Celestia did not look amused, almost angry.

"Whatever do you mean Princess. Is something the matter?" Twilight asked with mock concern.

"Yes, something is the matter. The changelings are back and more powerful than ever. Just one of them managed to take out two whole battalions of guards and walk into my room and knock me out."

"Really, one changeling managed to do all that?" Twilight asked mockingly.

"Don't mock me child. This is the security of the entire country on the line, and I have reason to believe you have something to do with it."

"Who, me. Oh Princess you must have to wrong mare. Why would I ever work with the changelings."

"I know not Twilight, but we learned something from a changeling that we captured that leads me to believe you're involved. You see by monitoring his brain waves we figured out that changelings don't dream." Celestia said as she began to circle the two changelings.

"What does that have to do with anything?" Twilight asked, genuine concern creeping into her voice.

"It has to do with every thing.",Celestia snapped,"My sister has told me that not a single pony in Ponyville dreams anymore, that is except for one. You Twilight, you are the only one in all of Ponyville that dreams. You know what that says to me,"Twilight shook her head even though she knew the answer," It says that your either the only one unaffected or your that cause."

"Celestia I swear I didn't mean anything by it, but I had to save them. I couldn't just sit on the sidelines and let them die." Twilight sobbed as she broke down crying and dropped her disguise.

Celestia ceased her circling and stared Twilight in the eye "I will give you a day to get out of my castle and back to your hole, after that I will send the entirety of my forces after you. I will eradicate your filth and save you as my personal pet. Now leave my sight before I change my mind." said stoically as she turned away from the beast that was once her student, as not to look at the monstrosity any longer than necessary.

Twilight complied with the order and teleported herself and Pinkie strait to Fluttershy ,who at this point was on the train on her way back to Ponyville.

"Princess, any other orders?"

"Yes, prepare the soldiers. Tomorrow we march to war."

Comments

[Exsphere]

DAYM!!

[Creed Miles]

princess is a bitch

[angleofdeath]

That's what I hate one minute your best friends next minutes she wants to stab you through the heart

[Ecko7]

Well, that is a bit to fast for my taste.

[Twentington]

DUN DUN DUN!

fossils!

[Evilpresident]

TwiChangeling is best pet

[Arctic]

2008547
You. I like you
2008518
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2008510
I stretched it out as much as I could without making it drag on
2008506
The story or when that happens

[angleofdeath]

2008568 when it happens when it happens he is just trying to let a species live after all but then again where'd be the chaos

[Twentington]

2008568

Basically, reference I couldn't resist putting in.

[NordicAeon]

Erhmm... Twi is totally OOC->check, but explainable
Tia gets the Bitchball-> Check, it's so overused, it ain't funny anymore
No Luna in Dicisionmaking-> Check

it had the potential for establishing a peacefull corexistence yaddayadda, but it got wasted.
sorry, but with that u officially lost me, i'll keep an eye open for future Stories, maybe u do another take on that Scenario someday. see ya around

mfg Nordic

[Arctic]

2008703
No changeling Twilight fic I've ever read (and trust me I've read allot) has had full on war in it or what happened here in chapter ten. If it's happened allot before I'm sorry I thought fer sure that this was a original approach.

[NordicAeon]

it is not about the all out war, that's indeed a new one. But the way it is approached. first all out war (under the Preamble from Tia that Chrysalis has somehow taken over PV), then Discovery thatTwi can control em as such maybe leading to Peacetalks, THAT would've been kinda logical, as it is now,not so much...

and well, Tia is not acting very DIarch like, such things as all-out War needs to be at least confirmed with your Co-Ruler, or do u wanna place Luna in a Position where she may be tempted to defect?

i'll see next Chapter until fav Removement or not,but right now it's too OOC/Strange for my Senses

see ya around
mfg Nordic

[SeventhBrony]

tia finally letting her true self out? this can only end well since Twilight has figured out how to change from pony to changling in a blink of an eye
Celestia: ATTACK
Twilight: please do (POOF)
Celestia: WHAT HAPPENED TO MY ARMY??!
Twilight: you!

[ZillaBrony13]

Dis gun be GOOD!

[Adam Jensen]

"Yes, prepare the soldiers. Tomorrow we march to war."

[Tomi]

I can understand why Celestia is a bit on the bitchy side (someone wake's you up by brakes in to your room and then knock's you out again).
Twilight is not leaving her new hive, the war part is fine by me (and yes a full out war is that a new one).

And Twilight will totally win with her new spell .

Fell a bit sorry for Luna, or will she be joining Twilight?

[Stiggerzz]

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so....celestia wants to make twilight her pet
and she's preparing for an all out war against twilight and her changelings war

there's only one thing for a situation like this
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[Stiggerzz]

2009820

And Twilight will totally win with her new spell .

Fell a bit sorry for Luna, or will she be joining Twilight?

whoa, whoa, whoa, ease up there mate
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[Arctic]

2009996
dude you got my back i.imgur.com/dB5nN.png

Oh and to you,2009820 why don't you ask her i.imgur.com/tkMRq.png I don't like where this is going

[Stiggerzz]

2010032
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lieutenants stiggerzz and vinyl scratch of the anti-spoilers squad reporting for duty
SIR!!!

[wolfshield werepony]

Wolfshield "for Luna We March".

[Ecko7]

2008568

Well, I was a bit surprised, that Celestia direct declair War! No small Talk, just direct declair War? Looks a bit out of Character.

Still, I like the Story. What happend to Luna in Ponyvile?

[Arctic]

2013182
Celestia's want to kill Twilight will be explained. Oh and whats happening to Luna it's actually really funny, you see blah blah, blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah and then there was pie

[Ecko7]

2013189

Actually, there was a lot of Idea's in my Head already, what Luna does down there in Ponyvile. One was that she, in the Time where Celestia declairs War, signing some sort of peace Treaty! How would Tia react by something like this?

[Arctic]

2013246
Tia would pull her sister aside for a talk while we all laugh

[Ecko7]

2013289

Well, I hope the next Chapter is a bit longer. Can't wait

[Arctic]

2013318
I'll do what I can maybe it'll be out later today but I don't know what's going on quite yet

[the monkey ninja]

Twilight continued to trot through the crowded streets of Canterlot. The city was quite peaceful, unaware that a changeling walked in their mist thinking of just how stupid they were

Mist, in this case, should me midst.

[Malkallan]

it must be horrible to twila need to face celestia

[DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ]

2009553 lol

[st6nbones]

FUDGE
KE FARIS NE FINO BONE
TRADUKO/TRANSLATION
THAT DID NOT END WELL

[PixelMoon]

Sweet Celestia.... Good darkness..... Stars, which one is best for this?