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Little Wood


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Lieutenant Eli Silver was on a simple mission. He and his fellow teammates would check out an anomaly that had already claimed three teams of Marines in the past. What he didn't expect was a whole new world to open up before him, one that he knows and loves but doesn't know how to cope in.

In Equestria, the griffons declared war five years after the defeat of King Sombra. Now the battle's still rage on. Princess Celestia is gone, leaving Luna and Cadence alone. The Elements of Harmony have disappeared as well leaving the once peaceful population to cope and adapt to survive and fight in a bloody struggle. Will an unexpected help that literally fell out of nowhere save their lives, or will they lose to the crushing force of the griffons?

Note: This is my first HiE story, and while I have said before I dislike HiE stories, after reading several of them I decided to give it a go. So here it is, a bloody war story. I hope you all enjoy.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

If you guys are gonna dislike my story, at least say why. Do you just not like it, or is it because you dislike HiE stories and as such assume they are all bad.

I did that, and now look where i am, writing HiE stories.

I hate all of you fic writers, your fics are so boring that it's REALLY hard to make fun of them...
THANKS OBAMA

3771893 Well, I'm sorry to hear that, but if you hate us all, why did you even sign up for this site?

3772224
I only hate the bad ones

ZING!

3772662 Okay. I'll take that the best way i can, but really?

Then again, haters gonna hate.

I'll just love and tolerate the SHIT out of you! :pinkiehappy:

this story it going to be chaotic but amazing.

OK, I know its been a month since this chapter, and the stories on hiatus, but you called the marines screamin eagles, the nickname of the 101st ARMY airborne, Having a cousin in the 82nd and a grandparent who was in the 101st in the 40s, that just rubs me all kind of wrong. I'm not trying to be rude mind you but I'm sure I'm not the only one.

3923566 Yeah I know. I'm not well educated in most things military, so I know I fucked up in MANY places, as i've had some else already point out. i honestly just picked two words I thought went well together for that name, I never knew it was an actual name. :twilightblush:

dude this is sooooooo awesome:pinkiehappy:
i soo want more of this.

5432024 I may need some help with this... Wanna help? :pinkiehappy:

5433711 I would love to help with this. Thank you.:rainbowkiss:

5443942 No problem! Just tell me when the days are good for you in Private Messaging!

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY LIKE COME ON, YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT!!!!!

ITS AGAINST THE LAW TO LEAVE A STORY TO GATHER DUST THOU MUST COMPLETE THIS STORY!!!!

please:fluttercry:

THOU HAST VIOLATED ROYAL DECREE BY NOT FINISHING THINE STORY!

3772224
he signed up to be a troll

man i would have preferred if the humans never knew about equestria and stuff

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