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Little Wood
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First story!!! YAY!!!
Okay. I really like were this story is going. i promise you, I WILL write a review for this story. I can't wait until it's done. The story, I mean.
Keep it up!
Great story do far! Keep up the good work!
I...
love it.
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Thanks! I'm almost done with Chapter 3, which I think you might like. It's sorta funny, but trying to be serious!
3871767 LOVE IT :D
3872615 Thanks!
Yay! i really like this story.
3873851 thanks!
I enjoyed reading your story! In fact, I featured it in a blog post of mine. It's not much, but I hope it'll get you a couple of extra views. Keep up the good work!
3879628 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I read your blog post and I think that it's a really great read and I put a few stories in my read later list!
Not quite sure what I think about this.
Body swapping is a common trope, and your writing style is not perfect (something about the pacing, maybe), but I'm still interested in seeing where you take this.
So excited for the next one!!!!! Been in my favorites for a while now actually *brohoof* /)
3950259 *Broohoof* I've been sick with bronchitis so I was Sleeping Beauty. lol. I have a lot of things planned for this story! I suggest reading my other stories too!
3950261 yes I have been reading lost of your stories, loving them right about now, keep on keeping on
3950272 Thanks!
Is that the fourth wall in the final paragraph? If so, it was handled so poorly that I am seriously considering unfollowing this fic.
3950767 Yes. And trust me, the next chapter will be worth it. I think this might turn into an interesting story.
AWESOME SO FAR!
Still awesome, this chapter is really funny.
Yes! You kept the serious tone, while maintaining humor!
Great story, I will post a review of it...
Awwww yes! New chapter, haven't read it but am already excited
This chapter is... kinda bad. You told me last chapter that your fourth wall break would be worth it for this chapter. It wasn't.
My guess is that you thought that it would be worth it because you were foreshadowing Discord's actions in this chapter, but you could have done that without the fourth wall break.
You've also got grammar and tense problems, particularly near the beginning.
As I said I would do last chapter if this one wasn't up to scratch, you've lost my favourite for this fic, and therefore a reader.
4058606 Well, I'm Sorry to hear that. But I cannot focus on what one wants, but what I have planned for others and what they like. And if you are trying 'Guilt Trip', nice try. I don't work that way. But thank you for reading.
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Guilting you was not my intent. Just telling that you've got at least one reader who doesn't like this fic and your writing style.
You don't have a huge readership, so I would guess that all genuine responses are useful, regardless of whether they are positive or critical, even if it doesn't noticeably impact the current fic. I just happen to be of the critical ones.
A new swap.
put a bell on him (there you are reminded).
I enjoy this story so far, but I do have a small amount of criticism. This is constructive though, so you do not really need it. I think that here needs to be a bit more beef in the story. You are doing fine, but the last chapter seemed slightly meaningless. This is not to say the story is not good (it is very original and well done in my opinion), but I think that this is a beginning of a thousand step road, nothing is perfect in the beginning.