Babs Seed may have finally become a Cutie Mark Crusader, but she still feels awful about her actions, particularly toward her cousin Apple Bloom. Will a heart-to-heart relieve Babs of her guilt?
Babs Seed x Apple Bloom, one-shot, lots of sweet.
All comments welcome, as this is my first story here :)
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Yay, a Babs Seed fic!
AWW! SO ADORABLE
You're my new friend! This is pretty awesome.
I have no idea why, but right at this line, I starting thinking this in my head.
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Oh my gosh... That song is so perfect!
[edit] disregard the dislikes. Those are just from idiots who judge stories on ideas and not on content or author ability.
1723588>>1723589 Babs is sexiest filly.
This fic gets all my yes.
1723593 I didn't mean it like that, but okay then.... I meant that she doesn't get enough attention, even after a week. I mean, you obviously saw how HOURS after the premiere, there was a King Sombra fic.
1723608 Lol, yup.
I'll read it at some point, but the whole romance between cousins is a bit off putting to me. I know that incest in the animal kingdom is fairly common, but these are animals with cognizant mentalities, so it just seems...ew. Even if it's not a clop fic, it's still blood relations having a romance.
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THIS IS AMAZING!!!
Also, this is for Everyone.. Don't mention that thing in the description...
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Edit: OH MY GOSH!!!!
With the kissing, it's cute romance. Without it, it'd be cute bonding. Either way, so cute!
Sorry, it just seemed appropriate
1723665 No... Bad Ruirik. Bad.
I haven't read it yet, but shipping cousins? That's pushing the incest lines, don't ya think?
1723710 I feel the same way, dude.
People whining about two cousins kissing when we have clopfics with Twilight and Shining Armour and ones with Applejack and Big Mac. This is tame compared to everything else.
Wow, this is really refreshing when there is no sex involved.
Oh, one little thing I forgot to mention in the note I sent: story should really only have Babs and Apple Bloom tagged. The other characters might be in the story, but they play a minor part.
Congrats on ten upvotes.
Thank god for this fic.
Folks. We need more Babs Seed fics. She's too good a character to just ignore.
Srsly gaiz.
This deserves all my like.
So you got it. ALL of it.
I really enjoyed this fic, thank you.
I just have to scream this out...
Hooray for Babs seed!
sometimes, when I'm alone, i tape my wrists to my nipples and pretend to be a t-rex.
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Wait what....?
AH! INCEST!
1724051 Go the fuck away. If you're just going to try and be creepy, then go do it somewhere else.
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woah! somebody is pissed over the internet!
1724161 Because somebody on the internet is a fucking weirdo. Take your shit somewhere else.
1724051
Dude are you fucking drunk again? Fuck man stop drinking for crist shake
D'aww.
Oh, and by the way, you don't need individual character tags for Bloom, Sweetie, and Scootaloo. Just use the CMC tag.
1724180 Please do not start a series of inside jokes on this pony's story. I can already see it happening.
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What? No dude you got it wrong, he drinks. I'm sorry if I confused you
Well, This was interesting to read!
That was a sweet little story.
The fact that this isn't getting more views and thumbs up is rather criminal though.
Not sure if it works in terms of ages (the CMCs all seem far pre-puberty). Although I suppose that a more innocent 'kiss to make it better' is plausible that turns into something with greater significance to both of them is plausible.
Am I the only one who wonders if Babs is Aunt and Uncle Orange's foal?
1724505 A virus... Is it free?
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First of all, thanks everypony for the views, comments, and votes! I wrote this last night before bed and am surprised to see (now that I'm home from work) that it got a lot more attention than I expected! Thanks to everyone for their input!
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Sorren, I was actually listening to that song as I was writing this...so you hit the nail on the head!
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Well, as far as the incest thing goes, I definitely realized that a lot of ponies would be off-put by this ship. I am not a fan of the AJ x BM or TS X SA fics myself (or similar concepts), though I have read some good fics of those ships, so I understand the aversion.
I don't want to get too deep into it, but personally I see cousins (even first cousins) to be a different sort of thing than brother/sister, sister/sister, child/parent, etc. (Cousin marriage is legal in 18 U.S. states with no conditions and legal in six more with age requirements, interestingly!) And no, I don't have any sexy cousins, nor am I from the South (though some of my relatives are!), so I don't have anything invested in it either. Just my opinion, and I respect yours too! 
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I'm not sure what to place the CMC's ages at, especially because I entered puberty at 11, LOL. They are most definitely not adults or even teenagers. If I had to guess, I would say maybe 11 or 12, but who knows?
I think your comment was plausible, and unless I choose to make a "grown-up" follow up to this fic, you can feel free to interpret it that way.
And yes, I think Babs Seed is probably the daughter of Aunt and Uncle Orange--she looks the part!
1727665 No way
>>Sorren
Yes way! Crazy huh?
I enjoyed it.
1727782 You have great taste in music.
1727782 Yeessss!!!! I've been waiting for a fic with cute moments between these two, shipping or otherwise, thank you!!!
1723928 Agreed.
I like foalshipping, and this wasn't an exception.
But the random use of the D word in there leaves a sour taste in my mouth...
Otherwise, I think I may have sensed a slight innuendo in there... that or Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo's probable longtime friendship is just sticking out in this story. I guess that having Scootabelle as a OTP leaves an effect on you when reading others...
Overall, good story! Upthumbed!
>> CluelessFilly
Yes, I kinda questioned using the D word myself, but I felt it suited Babs personality (tough-acting on the outside but sensitive on the inside). Maybe I should have left it out for this kinda story though
I actually meant for there to be slight Scootabelle in the story, so if you are seeing that, good job at reading between the lines! I would be curious to what innuendo you were thinking of, LOL.
Thank you very much!
Aww this is so cute, Applebloom is such a good cousin,
yea it is incest but it was done so innocently that it fit 5 hearts for you go writter 
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Thank you!!
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You are welcome
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Now, *that* would make for an interesting story!
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Haha, now I'm getting an idea for a totally different (non-ship) fic where Babs Seed and Apple Bloom find Granny Smith's "pain medication". Sugarcube Corner would get record sales that day.
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Sounds good to me!
Hmm...maybe I should write this sometime...LOL.
Sir, yes, sir!