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After Apple Bloom is injured, Babs Seed searches for a way to right her wrong. The Everfree Forest may hold her answer.

Thanks to ajvasquezbrony28 and Pyrotechnic for editing.

Rated Everyone.

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Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #1 · Jun 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Love is four-letter word!
And never spoken here!

Love is a four-letter word!
Here in this prison!

TheSillyDuck

TheSillyDuck #2 · Jun 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Dawwwwww too cute! Hehehe.... dream about ponies with the orange tattoo.... good ol' Bernie was just a dream eh? Can we just pretend these silly little fillies are just as cute and adorable as always and that saga was just some horrible nightmare?

Twilight-the-Pony

Twilight-the-Pony #3 · Jun 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

So words. Much cute. Very length. Wow.

Also, fav'd, because much quality.

(also, I can't doge)
~Twi

Kevinltk

Kevinltk #4 · Jun 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Another cutesy Babs x Bloom from Babsy! You always do a fantastic job in delving into the inner workings of a character's mind and describing their emotions.

She still seems out of it. Apple Bloom gobbles up her food faster than anypony I know. Hay, she eats twice as much as me, and I’m bigger than her!

You are obsessed with Apple Bloom's eating habits.

Pyrotechnic

Pyrotechnic #5 · Jun 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Insert some good will and cheer in this section. Insert a follow up joke and awkward chuckling and a well wish or something... I dunno, the story is good I guess