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Lord Destrustor
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Lord Destrustor
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Inspired by this song.
Right in the feels, man. Right. In. The. Feels.
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Oh, god...
I...I gotta take a break from this.
Quite a nice short story. I am glad that you didn't go overboard on the details, as it leaves alot to the imagination. That works well with a story like this. Kudos.
Wonderful. Such a wonderful story. Sad and heart wrenching, but wonderfully written.
To the featured box
also i though this song appropriate
I actually thought it was Pinkie for a moment. Feels, man. This just... feels.
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Yes, I deliberately included a few misleading clues about the queen's identity.
I have had a bad day, but this brought my mood up, then out of no-were... RIGHT IN THE FEELS!
Wait a minute.... butterflys...? WAS THAT FLUTTERSHY!?!
I must say though, goodjob on this well written story!
You killz me? WTF lol nice story
You get
out of 5 hearts
That is all.
Damn should have read this sooner
I want to say something to you Lord but it will be better in person.
woah bro O.o I can soo see flutters doing this!!!!
<-- my reaction good story bro!!
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Thank you!
Stop! Why would you write this?! Too many Feels here
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It was a sudden flash of inspiration after hearing a song on the radio, that's why.
I really like this story my one disappointed would be the epitaph, I know it's a bit rude but I had a stab at rewriting it, hope you don't mind. I tried to make it more like you would find on a pious ruler, which kinda felt right to me. Also tried to go with you theme of misdirecting by possibly indicating Pinkie Pie again at the end.
Nameless she lies,
The Queen of the forgotten,
Beloved saviour of the unloved,
The redeeming light of generosity,
Humble teacher of Kindness’s path,
Resurrector of Laughter's Warmth.
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Your comment reminded me how the epitaph always kinda bugged me, how I always felt it wasn't as appropriate as it should have been. You're perfectly right.
Although I'd never stoop to outright copying your words, they actually inspired me to try and make it better, more solemn.
So, yeah. Thank you!
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I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
Aw, and this was great too.
That is something I could see Fluttershy doing. I also fell for the early clues thinking it was Pinkie. Then again, I could see it ending with Pinkie as the character as well.
...
Hm, random idea struck me. If you ended the fic saying something about the cutie mark beeing three icons/symbols/something, it could be either Fluttershy or Pinkie, and a reader like me would be thrown into a loop and reread this too look for more clues without finding any specific ones.
Nevermind, that was a cruel and bad idea, haha
...
Returning from that tangent.
This fic had an interesting setting. I thought about how you introduced an entire new city in just a few lines, describing the basics of how it's built and designed, and that was just the correct amount in my opinion to be able to imagine the scenes you were describing next.
The fact that you introduced all characters, with at least a name, but sometimes something more, was a nice addition again to that imagined scenery.
Now it's not only the setting that is imagineable, it's the nearby populace too - at least by names.
So the setup was great.
The idea was mysterious too. Not knowing for sure who The Queen was, nor what she'd been through to get there, was an interesting read by itself. And you portrayed her character through the thoughts and speeches of others.
...Wait, this was only 2k words? How did you get all this info, setups, and saddening but great storyline into that?
Oh well;
Have a(nother) like and fave!
M
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You are seriously the best commenter I've ever had.
Congratulations. This story has good enough grammar to be added to the Good Grammar Directory, a comprehensive directory of grammatically correct stories on FIMFiction.
all the way through, I thought it was rarity. good job.
I'm asking myself: why didn't I find this sooner? Why didn't I read this sooner?
All in all, GJ. That was heartwarming and sad in equal measure.