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RapeTrain-Express


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oh you and your fuck up storys!

NOT TWIST!

Fuck you, Rapetrain-express.

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why did you show me this madness?!

:pinkiecrazy: I will be honest with ya... this is a well made story.
:ajbemused: Yet that ending... Still... I wont spam hate nor I will down vote just because the story wasn't for my taste.
:moustache: Good day to you sir.


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I'm so torn right now. I want to favorite this so I can see if theirs another chapter where Shining gets his ass kicked, but at the same time I don't because this wasn't completely to my tastes. You know what, I will.

on the one side I would say; WTF did I read, but thats just my little bit of sainity thats left from all the shit I saw In the Internet and the World.

on the other hand, I love bloody and Dark stories and sad Endings... so I think I will give this a thumb up and a little fave. :pinkiecrazy:

Which ship are you doing next? I know where you got this one from so...please do mine. I beg you! YOU MUST DO A DERPY SHIP!

oh god. oh god. ohgodohgodohgod. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!? I never asked for this. You said ship! This is a tanker! An oil tanker bursting into flames!
You can bet I will be going through this with the finest toothed comb later today. I fI had to read this, it is being done in the best gramaticalness it can have.

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Working on a trixieXdiscord fic but I do plan on doing a Derpy ship at some point.

Cc

Oh god that ending...

....................…....yes:pinkiecrazy:

Or not... as turkey day got in the way.... Later today I will go over this abomination that was unleashed because somebody decided to joke about a potential ship!:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

1664591
THANK YOU! This is one thing that she must have. Oh, please don't have her raped. Let it be consensual. (Or whatever the term is.)

Epic though ending could have been better.

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What? You don't want to read about Derpy getting gang raped by a bunch of guards? Fine, I'll just settle on a Pinkie and Derpy thing.

God that sucked. Bad characterization, bad pacing, too short, pointless, just bad writing in general.

If you're going to write troll stories, at least make ones that aren't so obvious.

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Thank you! If you HAD raped her I'd be on my way to your house to rape YOU! But it looks like you shall be spared. :pinkiehappy:

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You know it`s kinda hard to take a guy seriously who has no stories under his name. Just sayin.:ajsmug:

Was good, but needs more Twist rape......

1675110

:ajbemused:

I really hope I don't have to explain just why that argument doesn't work. I mean, I will if you want me to, but otherwise I'd rather not waste any time with it.

dude... WTEF(what the eternal fuck)? Im scarred fer life:facehoof::fluttercry::ajsleepy::raritydespair::raritycry:

The ending could have been presented better for more dramatic effect, but other than that, pretty good story.

Comment posted by GenericUsername deleted Dec 25th, 2012

1667112 I think you bucked up... :fluttershbad:

1663918 OH LORD, WHY DID YOU FORCE ME TO READ THIS?! :fluttershbad: :fluttercry: Just horrible.

Author, you should be ashamed. For the love of all things sacred...I feel like I'm gonna throw up. :raritydespair:

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Well, given your username, I probably should have seen this coming. However, I read this anyway. Also (and I'm probably going to hell for admitting this, but) I liked this story:derpyderp2::rainbowderp::derpyderp1:. (My Celestia, Fausticorn, and God have mercy on my soul:twilightoops:)

Would have been really good without the angsty, tedious set up and the unnecessarily tragic end. The lack of proofreading also leaves me unsatisfied. (My jimmies! I've been trolled! Etc.)

Just skip to the lure and rape (Ctrl+F "quickly scanned"), and stop reading after Shining pulls out. The rest is just "I had a thing for my sister," and Time Turner being executed while Derpy and family beg for him.

3899212 I love your avatar, guuuuuurrrrrrllllll.....

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Thanks, bro. Yours is nice too.

1818400 No one forced you to read this.

While I didn't like the part of be-heading Time Turner, I do like the idea that Shining Armor could get away with something like this. I mean, he is Captain of the Royal Guard! Imagine what he could do, who he could frame for something!

Nooooo not time turner, anyone but time tuner, he didn't want to go!

I don't read your story yet but about your profil picture : just... WHAT THE F*CK IS THAT!
PS : with the voice :
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=0PAzXEIsxl4]

I never liked Shining Armor. Typical prince charming type with a little surfer dude thrown in. Now I have every reason to HATE him!:flutterrage:

well done.

I'm both intrigued and slightly concerned that this is marked as incomplete.:twilightsheepish:

Despite the complaints in other comments, I quite prefer when authors include such dark endings. It is such a terrifying thought that despite the truth, the frustration of trying to prove that you've been framed is just...maddening.

:twistnerd: this was great!

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