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AngelShy24


I'm a mixed basket. Check me out!

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First downvote! I'm so proud of myself.

Have to give this a read as I do enjoy the suffering of bullies

I can't wait to see Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon viciously get brutally murdered!:pinkiecrazy:
Also, thumbs up!

Commence read.

Unsurprisingly this happens.

Likes:pinkiehappy: and dislikes:twilightangry2:; who will win?!:ajsmug:

:twistnerd: I like it. Is there going to be a chapter two.
P.S. Maybe you can read my story "My Day in Ponyville"

Hey everypony, look. It's another somewhat related picture.
i.imgur.com/dekAThs.png

Twist :twistnerd: is the "bad" one here?!
No no no noooo
Nope Nope Nope :eeyup: I gonna Dislike this...
*Like*
What?! Noooo I dislike this! :twilightangry2:
*Again click the "Like" Button*
Naaah, Darn it! :flutterrage:
I'm Out!
*Click Favourite*
Darn it :ajbemused:
*Great story, keep chapters comin' *

I can see a couple of my friends, who absolutely adore Twist, freaking out over this premise.
Commencing the read. Just from the preview alone, it looks good.

Yeah... this looks like a really well though out storyline. I did notice some areas where it could use some editing. Chiefly, small grammatical errors or spelling.

Very good job with your consistancy with Twist's lisp. I find it a challenge myself, alone with the Apple accent, and Zecora's rhyming.

If you would like a proofreader, I would be willing to assist.

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I'm glad to hear that. I don't dislike them like this per-say, but I figured some others might.:pinkiecrazy:

Proog reada' set to help if ya need it, bud! (And ya do :twilightblush:)
Also, UPDATE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW:fluttershbad::raritydespair::raritycry:

Fanart of a fanfiction teim, Time! :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:
:trollestia::yay::moustache::twilightsmile::facehoof::eeyup::duck:

Nice... GO TWIST!:twistnerd::rainbowlaugh:
I have a Cupcakes vibe coming...:pinkiecrazy: And I love it...

Oh HELL YEAH!!!
Is their a group for those of us who despise DT and SS? Cause this story would be PERFECT there.

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I'll make juan right now, nigga
(Can I, Shy? Add your story that is)

2189879 lol I already made a I Hate Rarity group...

2190150:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

hold on a sec...

not quite done...

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Reading this brings a smile to my face....:pinkiecrazy:

Damn:pinkiecrazy: I thought i hated them, well. Good riddance,:twistnerd:

As much as I hate Silver and DT... This, was, way too much...





AND I LOVE IT!:pinkiecrazy:
I'm going slightly mad... Oh Celestia it feels sooooo good :pinkiecrazy:

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And for a second there I thought you were going to say that you didn't like it:twilightsheepish:; but then again...:twilightoops: I saw your profile pic.
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I loved this too much for my own good:pinkiecrazy: so fourth chapter is on the way?

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Once the last chapter of my playdate story is up... yes it will be:ajsmug:

I doubt she'll get away with it.

Ponyville has dogs. Heck, the Apples have a dog.

I hope it'll be Wynona who finds Twist out, and that the latter pays.

Come on Snips and Snails next!

To the incinerator for you my little ponys:pinkiecrazy::twistnerd:

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And then... Everypony get killed by :twistnerd:... and :pinkiecrazy: get a student! Everypony wins! ... Well only :pinkiecrazy: & :twistnerd: but the other ponies are dead so... Who cares!? :pinkiecrazy:

Wow... The only way this could have been any better is if some carnal torture had been used!

2265205 Torture of a sexual nature

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Oh, okay; I had a feeling that's what it was.
But to be honest, I was actually planning to have a part in this story that had that kind of thing:pinkiecrazy:... it invloved Tiara, a knife and a really special place.:rainbowlaugh:
But in the end I decided to cut that part out; I wasn't up to it.:twistnerd:

2265735 Ah... something would have been removed?

Sounds a bit like a scene in my story Retribution, which involved a rather sharp pair of scissors.

"Did Twist get away with her murder forever?"

Nope.

She was found out in less than a week, and spent another three in prison before Filthy Rich's hired goons put a shiv between her ribs.

Just WOW!!! This was a very well done story!

Aside from the occasional grammatical error, this was very well written and awesome. 5/5 would read again.

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