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AngelShy24


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very good. that preview chapter has left me foaming at the mouth for more :pinkiecrazy::heart:

Please hurry the wait will kill me

this...this...:unsuresweetie:

...this is...good.:trixieshiftleft:

yes...good.:unsuresweetie:

this is...yes...good...:trixieshiftright:

I FRAKKING LOVE IT!!! :flutterrage:

I think this will be good
if its done right, pleas don't mess this up
I think you can do it I just read a relly bad one so, yea
looking for the completed chapter
I aprove:ajsmug:

Just like everyone else has said, this is a very good start.

I would recommend finding a prereader or editor to find the occasional error or two, though.

(Totally willing, but don't read any of this in an asshole's voice. That would make my suggestion and subsequent offer sound dickish, but in a way, they both already are. Best of luck either way.)

Oh mother of Luna! I feel so dirty now. :fluttershyouch:
I need MORE!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Dragon:moustache:

And now I play the waiting game......:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

Please continue thiiis...I really like Pinkie's sisters...dang..I really feel weird right now :facehoof:

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This being a one-shot chapter, it will take me a little while to complete the whole thing.
Plus, I'm only going to start it once I release my last chapter of my latest CMC story; and that will be done soon.:scootangel:
I do look forward for everyone to enjoy it whenever I do finish it.:pinkiehappy:

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Good good. My mind and body are ready. :pinkiecrazy:

Dragon:moustache:

Hope this will become more than just a one-shot:pinkiehappy:

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Sorry, one-shot only:twistnerd:; but hopefully, it will be epic enough.

Your sentence structure & grammar are pretty rough in spots, but this is certainly an original pairing so I'm willing to overlook some technical failings to see how you pull this off.

This deserve more than one shot it seems like a good long story idea.:pinkiehappy:

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*Buries him*
Rest in peace, brother.

2481085and regeneration lets see good teeth strong jaw o god a mint kill it kill it with fire hu dirty blond still not ginger well thems the breaks off we go wait why the hell am i in this box for that matter where am i

*flips tables* I demand moar!?! It kind of reminded me of an anime I used to watch, and now I want to read more of this :rainbowlaugh:

2490863which anime good sir

2498900 well first one that comes to mind is sister x sister. But I'm pretty sure there's an anime that fits the description for this I'm sure. BAH, seen so many animes how the hell can I forget most of their names :rainbowlaugh: . Again, Sister x Sister is the first anime that comes to mind for now. Maybe if I look into it better i might find it. :pinkiesmile::twistnerd:

Comment posted by Sharky deleted Apr 29th, 2013

2498933Mabey the orhan host club hitachin twins come to mind

2498970 hmm, that too... perhaps... bah you got me to remember another anime name now at least :twilightsmile:

I liked it to bad its just a one shot perhaps a sequel:pinkiesmile:

“Wow Pound,” said Blinkie shouted

Make up your mind, guy.

Fuckin' awesome story, though.

I fucking laughed my ass off!!!!!!! I even had to cover my mouth with everything around, like pillow and hands, to not wake the whole neighborhood!!!!! Gold! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
I like it! More of it! :pinkiehappy:

Dragon:moustache:

The only thing I don't like about the story was the end... when it ended.

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Well, all good things must come to an end.:twilightblush:

2543583 And it is always sad to see them go :pinkiesad2:

finally my appitite for this story has been fed and i can finally move on and not have to count every waking second waiting for this story :heart::pinkiecrazy:

well... that was interesting to say the least.

if anyone is for some reason wondering what they saw

No, no one was wondering that. It was pretty obvious what was going on. You really didn't need to spell it out.

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This may seem funny, but I had no idea that I wrote that sentence like that.:derpyderp2:
Thanks for pointing it out.:twilightsheepish:

pinkies sisters actual names are Limestone pie and marble pie

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Actually... those names were confirmed sometime after I finished the story; but I perfer those names better.

Read this in the Explicit Ponyfic Archive lol
Pretty damn good too :pinkiehappy:

... would their pairing be called pake?:derpytongue2:
Kudos to any one who gets the ref.:pinkiehappy:

A year since I posted the previous comment, and no one posted another or even figured out my ref.

... until one day... ;)
Then everything changed when the fire nation attacked :heart: :rainbowlaugh:

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: i love this so much! I DEMAND MOAR!!

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