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RapeTrain-Express


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Regidar #1 · Dec 25th, 2012 · · 22 ·

NO

BAD RAPEY

NO BISCUIT

DOWN, BOY!

GO TO YOUR ROOM

1850337
Whoa boy, let him have his fun.

1850341 YOU'RE ALIVE!

Yes we approve of this

YES! About time you wrote something with Vinyl!

Well that's a first. Usually your stories have the character talking throughout yet you only had like one sentence spoken from her. Not bad. Not bad at all.

I can see a few areas where you missed a word, or just put it in the wrong spot. But I only see a few and that's pretty good for a story written in a short time.

Write more short stories like this. You always seem to write better when you keep it short and sweet.

You don't write enough solo works. This is a good story and you should do more solo's like this.

Needs more description on dat ass.

Okay, let's see this. Find out what a full on clopfic is all about.

Shower scenes are always the best!

...LOVE YOUR STORY! LOVE IT! I AM CURRENTLY ATTEMPTING NOT TO FAP, BUT I AM HAVING TROUBLE! WHY AM I TYPING IN ALL CAPS? WHY AM I YELLING THIS OUTLOUD IN REAL LIFE? WHY??

Your first ever Vinyl fic and you didn't rape her? RTE I am disappoint.

Time well spent indeed.

Me gusta. I don't think I'll recalled you writing many single pony fics. You should do more.:ajsmug:

decent for 30 mins.:scootangel:

Piff who masterbates in the dark?
*turns off lights and goes back to reading it*

Lol
Luckily I trained myself to avoid flopping... the secret is pineapple
No homo

I popped a wing boner while reading. :pinkiehappy:

So who wishes to be said unnamed stallion?

Well if it's written by RT-E then i'd be crazy not to read it.

Need to get a real stallion in there to make it fap-worthy to me, but as is, it's still titillating, so up-thumbs to you. Doubly so since you did this in 30 minutes.:derpyderp1: I am impress.

AWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

1856950 BY THE MAGIC OF FRIENDSHIIIIIIIIIIIIP! *Jumps into the internet*

hmm gets on fim fiction, sees a vinyl scratch fic, reads and gets done with it, oh shit tis rape train express. good story.

It may have just been me seeing the color of Pon3's eyes, but I like this. well made clopfic:derpytongue2:

JBL

Giggity. That is all.

Not Bad, Not bad at all. Another hour of editing, and that would be a first class one-off

There's something about Vinyl's eyes that are just so damn sexy. Not a bad little clop at all.

>sex tag
>implying madterbation is sex
>w8
*puts on glasses*
"See you later virgins"

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