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Uh....wow....just wow.
Darker versions of Twilight are always the best stories to read. Excellent job!!
This is the true Twilight. She's crazy without a stallion. Why do you think they keep shipping her with Shiny?
giggity giggity goo
this was good. liked the idea of a spell of cadences fused with a changeling spell. Twilight is so awesome, she's got it all figured out.
Interesting, I wonder the next victim will be? Big Mac? Thunderlane? :)
Wait a second....
Dr Stable.
... Stable. A place to house horses.
...
...!
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that ending
XD And then she finds out she got knocked up. Good luck hiding that, Twilight! :3
lol never thought Thunderlane would be into Twilight
ooh, that reference to mrs. ten seconds flat. please carry on with that, don't leave us hanging. we all know rainbow dash wouldnt leave her friends hanging. You brought it up, so now its time to deliver. Next chapter needs to be: twidash
First! (for this chapter)
I feel like quagmire.... I like where this is going.
also, I do have just one bit of advice... perhaps you should use page breaks when theres a shift in scene, like when you jump back and forth between RD's fun times, and twilight's, you could seperate it with "------------------------------------------------------------". It just makes it feel more.... i dont know... clean cut I suppose.
That is all.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
I wonder who the new victims for twilight will be
So Twilight`s targeting mares now as well? AWWWWWW YEAHHHHHHH!!!!
Quite interesting...
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Good job again RTE! Keep up the good work and I'll keep watching you! I'm watching you RTE!
From reading this I'm going to say Twilight will end up targeting Shining Armor at one point. Because that would be awesome!
I'm I reading hints of a TwilightXShiningArmor clop chapter in the future? PLEASE MAKE IT SO!
Twilight going around and raping ponies and then removing the memory of it from them? This I gotta read more of!
I KNEW IT!
This is the only way I can forgive myself for liking this so much.
It should be to not too.
Wouldn't it be pay not play?
Looks like you added an extra word. I think it would be which
Either uncapitalize the calm or put an end mark after no.
I don't even know why. This story does have a driving plotline which is actually entertaining to read. Kudos to you Express. I would have never thought it possible till I found your stories.
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And kudos to you for pointing out my mistakes in the stories.
1602779You are welcome. I'd like to think I read this so I can better authors of all kinds. In actuality I came here for the plot and remained here for the plot. Grammar and spelling are just a bonus.I'll probably end up commenting on newer chapter about mistakes.
This. Is. AWESOME!!
YES! I would hug you right now if I could!
Did I just read a story were Twilight raped her brother? and why am I turned on by this?
incest is wincest! I seriously hope you do another chapter with both of them!
Her plan is going to go horribly wrong somewhere, isn't it?
I had a good laugh at the mention of Spike being called a fax machine.
Co-ruler?
In this case, wouldn't it be left instead of leave? Also isn't it Cadence?
If you are using the past tense (although isn't it technically past progressive?), it would be wished not wish.
This sentence... I think it would be fool proof.. and I feel there is something missing between "it was" and "she could"
I loved this chapter... Not necessarily in that way but this chapter certainly fit and made perfect sense. That is enough for me to like a chapter.
sexually frustrated twilight is best twilight
So. Fucking. ANXIOUS!
I have only one thing to say: TWILIGHT DOES NOT GET TO FUCK LUNA! Beyond the mention of that, this was awesome!
Ha the back to the future reference was hilarious.