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RapeTrain-Express


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Commence read.

Well Spike has has had enough it seems.

Now what will Twilight do and who will find her?

Reading=Start now

Edit: 3:6... I find this rather hilarious.

1924302 Damn you beating me to my first; "First"; comment by 13 seconds. You make me sick good sir :pinkiesick:. But for your personal convenience, have a moustache :moustache:.

1924310 Sorry and Thanks?

........oaky then...........

thevoice #7 · Jan 8th, 2013 · · 17 ·

Beautiful as always. You should write an epilogue where she gets an abortion and ends up with severe depression and then begins to do drugs and starts whoring herself out to fill the empty void in her soul until she finally caves and hangs herself.

Pretty good and could definitely see this continued a bit atleast to find out what happens when what Spike did is discovered and if Twilight does end up pregnant. And Rarity actually knew of an abortion clinic? Wonder how many times she's been around the block?

Funny you should make a sequel of her being a bitch mom yelling at her unwanted rape baby.

I liked it. You did have a few words out of place but it was still interesting to read.

Lol wat!? :rainbowlaugh: I havent even read this yet and I'm amused! :rainbowlaugh:

You know after watching all the Merri weather episodes, I just can't bring myself to say that Spike and Twilight are OOC, in fact I can actually think that this would be a real story if Spike aged.

Why?

She even permitted him from wandering around town when his teenage hormones started to kick in at certain days. She claimed she couldn’t have him going around and getting young mares pregnant.

she permitted him so he wouldn't get young mares pregnant? Don't you mean prohibited?

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you know
that sound fucking hilarious

top quality as usual

Funny you should make a sequel of her being a bitch mom yelling at her unwanted rape baby

THIS x1000000000000

Umm... ok. I wonder what happens after he leaves?

This is the most fucked thing since Incest Of The Ages.

I like it.

Nicely written.

Rape train has no breaks!

Sequel motherfucker, do you speak it!? I need to see how Twilight handles getting knocked up!

uh oh Spike Snapped :pinkiegasp::applejackconfused:

God dammit! Why are most of your good stories only one-shots? Expand on a few of them already! Some readers love a little aftermath!:raritydespair:

rapetrain pls go

Dam it... Complete.

This story was so sad at the end. I felt bad for Twi.:fluttercry:

More story damnit! I want more!

Cc

You had only a few errors in this story. Either you're getting better, or you have a proof reader hidden away.

Rainbow doesn’t deserve it either considering she was nice enough to take me flying around Equestria a few times and was even awesome enough to let me enjoy her body on one of my earlier birthdays.

You calling best pony a slut? Because if you are then I'm cool with it.

Well, considering he's a DRAGON (reptile) and she's a PONY (mammal) and their genetics aren't going to even be remotely compatible, pregnancy is utterly out of the question without some deliberate and very difficult magical intervention.

Meaning: Spike should have been allowed to screw as many mares as he liked, since nothing would happen. :rainbowwild:

1924968 look up "Kirin" plus MLP is a fantasy world anyway where anything is possible

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His one-shot stories are good because they're one-shots.

1925126 You're right! She needs to have at least five back alley abortions preformed with a fish hook, rusty chain, and a flatbedbed, then she kills herself with a shotgun instead of hanging.

Thanks for the idea. If Rape Train dosn't do It i'll write it in mah own story.

Haven't read it yet, but since this is rape-train I'm guessing Spike will rape Twilight? That bitch is going to love it. :twilightsheepish:

sequel?, part 2?, anything?

1925121 Lazy excuse for lack of simple biological knowledge. We've already seen in MLP that 'anything' is not possible: Twilight gets tired after using magic, spells don't come automatically to her, even Celestia isn't all-powerful, and the ponies can't tame the Everfree. There are limitations imposed, which makes the world more interesting and grants it a sense of realism within its fantasy context.

Spike cant impregnate a pony without the help of magic! Not possible, Twi's fine.

Oh my god.... I uhm. I dont know what to say except more :pinkiegasp: :rainbowderp: :raritycry: :twilightoops: :applejackconfused: :derpyderp1:

Max

1925998 Don't use logic with dragons...

A bit more psychological torture would have made it much better. Like Twilight actually realising that she deserved being raped. And Spike's revenge was a bit short lived.
But nice shot. We need more stories like this.

Imagine my reaction when I didn't see the labels for mature and sex. :rainbowderp:

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Lazy excuse for lack of simple biological knowledge.

Kirin- half horse/half dragon. Also chinese/japanese folklore creature. Plus, I know biology you can't mix two different species, which is why its fantasy. MLP is a world of fantasy. Dragons and unicorns are fictional creatures anyway so what's its hurting?

We've already seen in MLP that 'anything' is not possible: Twilight gets tired after using magic, spells don't come automatically to her, even Celestia isn't all-powerful, and the ponies can't tame the Everfree. There are limitations imposed, which makes the world more interesting and grants it a sense of realism within its fantasy context.

Talking ponies, minotaurs, dragons, alicorn amulets, zap apples, magic barriers, wolves made out of wood, creatures that can morph into anything, spells that can do almost anything, that pretty much throws alot of the realism out the window. Only form of realism is that its mirroring the stuff we do where we learn it takes time to do things and have to earn our place. This is a cartoon, it can get away with almost anything. While there are limits on power, I meant "no limits" on what could happen to be introduced into the show. or comic if you want to go into those.

Twilight had it coming. In the end she's screwed.
(double entendres intended.)

Aww hell naw! RTE did it again! WTF man? Why you so good at this shit?

Dam... this is the first clop that made me horny...
God damnit you changed me...
Love you :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Dark!Teenage!Spike? Twilight accused of slaving Spike? Spilight in general? Spike as rapist? Please, take every and all of my NOPEs.

Aburi #50 · Jan 9th, 2013 · · 9 ·

I saw this story and wanted to downvote it on principle, but I refuse to downvote without reading a story... and I now regret it.

This is a travesty.
I honestly don't understand how it is possible for people to enjoy the story of a teenager raping his mother.

I will never read another story by this author.

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