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Here we go again!
For cereals.
STAHP
Dunsparce "meh"s it.
Not Bad. Flarp.
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*Notice romance tag*
That...was actually fun to read. I'm actually happy you didn't turn it into a rapefic and just kept it meaningful and consensual.
I approve of this ship!
It's not bad, just give it a quick read over for a few errors and you'll have a pretty good story. Regardless I'm still faving it.
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There's just no breaks with you, isn't there?
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No rape? What?
You should write more clop like this. Though rape is somewhat fun to read, tender moments mixed in with clop like this story are even better.
Hmm. It's nice to see you trying something other then just rape.
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Rape Train can not STAHP for there are no brakes!
Except this story kinda took a turn down the romantic way. Go figure.
1715374 I geffums.
So many SPELLING ERRORS!!!
I liked it. Other then the spelling errors you have a nicely written story here.
Noticed a few spelling error and it seems like in a few lines u want to say a word but its left out so just re-read and u'll find those lines and over all its a nice pairing and I like it
i really enjoyed reading and clopping too this. well done. now heres a free gif (im not actually gay)
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I. Actually. Clopped...
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That is the best GIF I have ever seen on this site.
Oh, I don't know. Charater development. Relationship development. World-building. You know, the important stuff!