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Jade Ring
The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.
Jade Ring
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Bittersweet but beautiful
I like the story but I'm also a little disappointed at the lack of closure.
It feels like it needs an Epilogue that shows Spoiled being wrecked in divorce court where she gets nothing because she's been cheating for years or nothing because she never worked to help grow the business.
Or even better, Diamond Tiara testifing against Spoiled showcasing the mental and emotional abuse that she gave her husband.
Just feels like it's missing something.
This was really good! It looks like it's going to be porn, but it's definitely not. I enjoyed it, so thank you for writing it!
You good sir, have written an excellent story about heartbreak, hope, and a beautiful father-daughter relationship. 20/10
Wonderfully written, with excellent emotional depth and characterizations. Really makes the reader feel for both of them. Good show, Jade.