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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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At a traveling fair a machine waits idle for a pony to put in a bit to have their fortune told and their wish granted. When two fillies make a wish, what could go wrong?

When Noi and Aura's wishes come true, they have to fix their mistake before it gets out of control.

A Noi, Aura, and Piña Colada Story.


I'm purposely avoiding all the darkness that would ensue from such wishes. Let's keep this E, everypony!



Coverart edited by Mix-Up

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

nice to see a story with noi

Don’t really understand why people don’t like this story.

It’s off to a pretty good start, but maybe some grammatical errors and you do not actually show the characters, all we really get is a bunch of heads doing something, there was no context about fur color or whatever.

11787618
Good point. I haven't made that mistake in years. Time to restart that clock. Lol

11787622

Also, happy new year.

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