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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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It had been 1,500 years ago since Princess Celestia and Princess Luna attempted to defeat the queen of Unicornia but before they could, she cast a spell to cause it to disappear. Unicornia is back now and so is its queen. Princess Celestia has tasked Twilight and her friends with reuniting her with its leader but this will lead to so much more than a mere reunion.

Cover art source: https://sourcemlp.fandom.com/wiki/Unicorns?file=Unicorn_banner_vector.jpg

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 15 )

Interesting…

Also, very funny that i make a story about Alicorns and then this story shows up the same day lol.

👍 id like to see where you go with this.

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This is going in a direction that will involve a lot of drama and things that some people will never expect.

11677257
Oooh! A challenge!

There are two kinds of people:
1: People that can extrapolate data from limited information
2:

11677261

For what I have done so far most people probably aren't going to know a whole ton about the leader of Unicornia except that she is incredibly powerful. I will be releasing the next chapter in 2 or 3 days from now, that one might give some people an idea of what is going on or it may not. It will be in the third chapter when all the drama starts to come to the surface.

Interesting start.

I don't know if EqG is canon to this story, but if it is, it would seem that Sunset wasn't the first of Celestia's protegés to grow hungry for power.
(This also seems to either replace or precede The Cutie Map)

11677310
There's no way Sunset was the first for sure. Celestia just doesn't come across as that lucky. Twilight might be the first non ego maniac student she ever had.

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Well, maybe the first and only successful non-egomaniac she's ever had

11677310

Oh this protege is ancient, she came along far, far before Sunset Shimmer....she came along 1,500 years ago. Equestria Girls never even crossed my mind here.


11677315
Oh this one makes Sunset Shimmer look tame in comparison and her reasons for wanting power are radically different! Regarding Twilight being the only non-egomaniac protege of Celestia's, I'm unsure about that. I'm sure there were others who didn't make the cut to rule alongside her and they understood that when they were let go.

So, instead of having a vendetta against cutie marks, Starlight has one against non-unicorns and stallions. Great...

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Well she has her reasons....yeah it may seem messed up but bad childhood experiences can shape one's ideologies.

The image of Alicorn Starlight is beautiful I just want to kiss her on the nose, but all that aside I am genuinely surprised by all this it's a great story so far good job 👏

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Thanks, there is plenty more to come along with plenty of drama.

Twilight as Celestia's daughter. I wonder who's the father (unless it's still Night Light, and Twilight Sparkle was entrusted to Twilight Velvet)

Funny, I find it somewhat common in fanfiction that Sunset is the daughter of Celestia, either biologically, legally, or emotionally.

Discord cut in, "Because she was banished to the moon?" He paused before adding, "Who else, any other 'proteges' while Luna and I were imprisoned?"

Indeed, who else?

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It's not Night Light, you'll find out before too long who the father is.


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Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

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