What happens when you die?
Is there Paradise? Or Oblivion?
Are your loved ones there with open arms? Or everyone you ever wronged eager for their pound of flesh?
When it's Applejack's time to go, she learns that the truth is both far worse (and far better) than she could have ever imagined.
An entry for the Thousand Words II contest in the "Slice of Life" category.
. Now you gotta do one for all of the Mane 6. This is just too perfect.
Awwwww
Now I kind of want to see the rest of the mane six.
Dying would be simultaneously sweet and mortifying if it actually happened like this.
So this is like the happy science style afterlife? Hopefully without all the toxic positive.
it's a shame that she can't see her friends because they're not related
oof yeah, that is a very different experience!
oh no. that could get awkward real fast
aww!
oh no, oh no
hoowee, those words are gonna come back to bite her
ahaha
very Statler and Waldorf
hoowee
underrated ship, i agree!
ahaha oh i absolutely love this
hey that soft-hooved needlemare is the most amazing and beautiful pony to ever grace Equestria, thank you very much! (also totally stealing this)
so true, love Applejack saying “that’s my wife”
oof, implications!
augh my heart
auaugh i love it so much
well my heart is just about to burst after this one. thank you so much for writing it, this was wonderful. i loved it so much!
To quote Terry Pratchett:
“I thought my life would flash before my eyes first.”
It did. That’s called living.
Oh. Oh no.
Lovely work, equal parts hilarious and humiliating by proxy. It takes a dab hand to make cringe comedy that doesn’t feel cruel to enjoy, and you pulled that off quite skillfully. The sweet ending is the perfect palate cleanser… though the presence of the couple’s daughter raises some concerning questions.
Still, delightful stuff. Thank you for it and congrats on the honorable mention.
This was all very cute. But the idea that they had a filly that died that young is a bummer. Good thing the relationship survived it. Great story!
Hello! I read all the stories in this contest that won recognition, so here's a review. A nice hook in the opening line, and a very interesting concept. I did wonder whether the sheer size of the Apple Family might lead to even worse problems, but I guess that would be for a longer fic. Easily upvoted, anyway.