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Jade Ring


The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.

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A storm is rolling in, and Big Mac is nowhere to be found. Sugar Belle stands at the window. She watches, she waits... and she worries.

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A short inspired by the song of the same name.

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Comments ( 12 )

I'm surprised that you didn't add the third verse to the story.

Big Mac, you idiot!

This is just the kind of Valentine's Day treat I'd expect from you, Jade Ring. Well done!

Poor Sugar Belle. This was great!

11152423
Well, the logistics of hooves and guns...

OMG I love that song!

And this is such a great short!
Bravo!
Have a like

Man, what a thrill.

Love the short sweet anguish feels.

I always forget the early days of flutter Mac

At least it wasn't his maybe cousin Marble pie

Is she gonna shoot him?

11152598 If you do another Garth Brooks inspired one please do "Friends in Low Places" that song is one of the most iconic songs of his. And let's face it you could use almost anyone for it.

Naughty Stallion!

Recorded, could have some fun making a soundscape for this :).

Could be worse... could of smelled of Apples

11152598
Littlepip seems to manage

Wow, that was awesome. I got serious goosebumps reading the final few lines. My only kinda complaint is that Sugar Belle isn't wearing a faded flannel gown.

"The Thunder Rolls" was my favorite song growing up, and is still in my Top 5. My mind was blown when I heard this cover version on the radio a few years ago:

Awesome-When I looked for that video, I found this one, which sounds more like Garth's version and has the third verse:

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